Obsessive-a 16+ ragya [UPDATES after March 3 2017] A/N Page one. - Page 21

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome as usual.. thanx for updating harshi.. you are a star!!!
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Finally you updated😊
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Awsome update
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Posted: 9 years ago
finally !!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Outstanding story
Just read all parts
D way u explain every part was just awesome
Eagerly waiting to read more
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Posted: 9 years ago
Obsessive
Part 14
Laksh reached the mm in a haste. The whole family shocked seeing him with Ragini, n more seeing her in unconscious state. He escaping all the questioning glares reached his room followed by the doc.
The professional examined the lady.
L- what happened to her
Doc- just weakness n tell her not to consume too much of alcohol it's damaging her system.
L- sure I will take care.
Doc- hmm these r some medicines I have given the injection. Let her rest for sometime.

Soon the doc left and coming out of his room laksh was caught by questioning glares.
L- what
Sa- ab batega kya hua
L- woh Ragini was going to Africa n mein usse drop Karen ja raha tha n she fainted.
Sa- n where were you last n8
L- ragini k saath.
All were shocked with his reply he didn't bother to discuss more n left. Ap rushed into her room cursing herself for her son's deeds.
Other followed to console her, laksh felt guilty but then he left the hall n moved to his room.


Few hrs later-
In his room

Laksh was sitting besides ragini, perhaps slept waiting for her to wake up.
Ragini gained conscious.
She tried to remember where she was. And then her flight, her training came to her mind.
She got panicked and checked the time she was late. The flight had already left. She began to cry.
She felt irritated and enraged.
R(shouts)- LAKSH .. where am I .. Han what u did with me. U Rapi..
Laksh woke up n before she completes he pulled her and rolled over her giving her a shock.
L- Ragini. Listen first of hope u remember it's my room. I am no rapist. I am sorry I am not that cheap. And lastly not me u have done something to urself. U have been drinking too much of alcohol. Ur body is getting affected.
R- (teary eyed) no body cares laksh. Its so good I will die early.
It broke him. No he had nightmares of Ragini dieing and those were his worse.a tear drop escaped the devil's eye and fell on her cheek. She could see him genuinely broken. He got up. Made her sit but didn't exchange a word.
He left the room. Ragini sat as If she didn't bother. Laksh came back with soup. She made faces seeing it, but he least cared. He sat in front of her and forwarded a spoon to her. She turned her face in refusal. He didn't force her either. He got up kept the soup on the side table covering it with the plate. She wasn't looking at him. Untill he spoke up.
L- soup pada h. Dawai Rakhi h, khalena.
He sounded cold and hurt. She for the first time glanced at him. Perhaps she wanted him to do what he always does, convence her to have the soup n medicine.
She kept looking at him, he vanished out of her site. She kept glancing at the door n sleep embraced her. Hshe woke up when she heard the door opening.
L- These r the tickets. Tommorow evening u can leave.
R- (trying to frown n stay angry) I Don't want ur tickets.
Laksh glares at her and the next moment tore them into two parts and threw them in the dustbin.
She was shocked at his cold behavior. He have never behaved like this to her. So cold it wasn't possible.

L- anything else
Ragini got up and wore her shoes. She took her bag and moved down. Her feet were fumbling, ofcourse she wasn't well. He kept looking at her. Untill she almost fell down from the stairs, he ran n held her. His cold cold gaze pearced her heart. What happened to him. Y was he so cold. And more what her mind questiobed was why was she affected, she should be happy about him staying away from her.
She again spoke up.
R- (trying to stay angry) I am going.
L- (chocked voice+ coldly) Go.
She deep inside wanted him to come lift he and take her to his room. A Normal behaviour from his side. But it's absence wasn't that pleasant to her. He lifted her bag and kept it outside.
L- Go ...
He turned and left. He closed the door but didn't even once glanced at her.




4 hrs later-.
Laksh was in his room. It was afternoon yet it was dark outside. It was about to rain. His gaze shifted to the bunch of keys ragini gave him. It was clear she didn't have a shelter now. He felt worried but was too hurt to bother. He again concentrated on his laptop which he hardly could.
Sa- LAKSH
Sanskaar entered as he shouted at him
L- kabhi bina chillaye bhi bol liya kar kya h.
Sa- where is ragini
L- she wanted to go
Sa- so
L- she left.
Sa- and U let her go. Can't u see the weather.
Laksh lifted his gaze to sanskaar and glared back to him.
Sa- U R HOPELESS
L- lego Bhai she must be enjoying this rain playing football or drinking alcohol.
Sa- kya
L- in short she is gone with her will now let her go.
Sa- how can u...
L-(cuts) yea I am heartless as hell but now go away n no need to search her.
Sanskaar left.

In the hall
Sw- sanskaar did he tell where is ragini
Sa- idk swara chod do inko inke haal p. U don't worry.
He caressed her cheek.
Su- sanskaar did u get her reports.
Sa- mom I will have sent my PA.
Su- swara u don't worry about others see urself u have turned so weak these days come sit.
Just then PA arrives with reports.
Sa- Thank you so much Ramesh.
Ramesh- it's no problem. I shall leave sir.
Sa- yes sure.
Sanskaar opned the reports. A smile spread on his face. He immediately pulled swara in a hug.
Sa- I am soo so happy. Thank you swara. Thank u so much.
Swara pulled herself back from his grip.
Sw- kya hua.
Su- Han sanskaar.
Sa- mom u r soon Going to be grandmaa n I am going to be papa...
Su- ohh.. god.. swara I am so happy.
All blessed her. Ap and others were too happy.
In swasan room
Sw- sanskaar.
Sa- shh. U take rest.
Sw- sanskaar I was thinking about Ragini. See it's raining so bad.
Sa- don't worry swara. Pls take care of urself and the baby okay u know Na after how much problems we have got this happiness. Lucky I am still worried how will he react.
Swara pulled him in a hug. Sanskaar protectively wrapped his arms around her. He made her sleep and left.

Meanwhile, Laksh was madly searching for Ragini on the roads. She was no where. He was cursing himself for what all he did. Y he let her go.
She was there in a lonely unknown corner of a huge road. It was the first time she was feeling she still needs him. She wanted his attention badly, his attention is her habbit. Perhaps she have started liking his ways to tackle her.
She was shivering due to cold she was all drenched.
She felt irritated with her feelings as well. Y not. She wanted to hate him. She wanted to stay away from him, yet she wanted his full attention. As anger overpowered her she slapped herself for her feelings. She slapped herself several times. She sat there until her body began turning blue. She. Could have lost conscious but before that she saw a car coming close it stopped and a man came out, he slowly approached her. Alas she was too weak to show any movement.

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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey its Amazing As always and u showed their feelings very well
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Posted: 9 years ago
Res Harshi. 😳
Unresed. 😃
RagLak part was good. 😃 They r show each other that they don't care for each other, but in reality, they do. 😳 SwaSan scenes and moments were awesome. SwaSan to become parents! 😳 But how will Laksh react to it?? 😕 Update soon. 😳
With love,
Aheli.
Edited by iam_aheli_98 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update harshitha😊

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