Obsessive-a 16+ ragya [UPDATES after March 3 2017] A/N Page one.

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Hi all harshita here.
Since I am ending with all my old concepts like kg and DKM
So I thought y not to start with a new hot one for ragya as well.. guys pls I want to end my ss DKM because of 2 reasons...
1) it has been stretched a lot already
2) I hardly get any response on that story...



Therefore I am here with a new ragya concept... it is "obsessive" ..dark and hot ... it's about 2 of them.. they are obsessed for each other ... cannot afford to share it.. but ... obsession will begin after their separation.. ..

Guys pls do read n leave ur replies
Egarly waiting for them..

Hop u like it

With ❤️
Harshita...

Index-
My note-above
Prologue - down
Cs-down
Part1- Down
Part2-pg5
Part-3-pg 7
Part-4 pg 9
Part-5 pg12
Part-6 -pg 15
Part-7 - pg18
Part-8- pg20
Part-9- pg 23
Part-10-pg25
Part-11-pg27
Part-12-pg29
Part-13-pg31
Prt-14- pg33
Part15- 34



A/N
Hello everyone.
Harshita here. I want to inform you all that my stories will be updated further only after March 3 2017.
I am hell stuck with my courses which seem never ending.
The coming Valantines day I am busy with my exams. Seems funny, I know.
I will be right back and give all the updates as per the decided slots after March 3.
Sorry to keep you waiting.
Regards
Harshita.


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Prologue -

He entered her room.. she wasn't here... then were was she ..he like a mad searched for her..
L-were r u ragini...
Just then his eyes fell on her personal pool.. she was relaxing there.. he smirked..n changed ..
Ragini was in her short swim suit... it was Black in colour.. her body was all wet.. it was turning him on... she rested her head on poolside..

L-baby I am coming...
He slowly enters the pool... n moves close to her... he touches her belly sensuously...
She did not resist instead responds she took a deep breath.. experiencing his fragrance...
He too moves more close.. he touched her seductively...
It turns her on ... but on realising n reminding the past she decided to widrew..

R-laksh... stay away n go...
Laksh pushed her waist even closer to him.
L-y don't u like it .. when I am close...
He replied in husky voice.. he turned her back towards him n kissed her nape.. follwed by wet lingering kisses on her shoulders.. she was melting...
R-laksh... leave...
But he didn't stop instead now he turns her face to him n starts kissing her neck like a hungry man...
R- laksh.. not again...
She said her words contradictory to her actions... she was movie neck according to give him space but there she was asking him to leave...

L-y .. y u want me to Leave.. are you not enjoying..
Saying this he captured her lips without letting her answer...
It was wild passionate hungry.. kiss.. he kissed her until he was out of breath... she pushed him away...
R-be in ur limits...
L-baby y r u so angry upon me..
R-shut up .. u cheat... stay away...

Thus evokes his anger n he pinned to the wall of the pool n pressed himself harder on her...

L-really should I go...
R-yes I don't want to.be with u again..
L-we will see...
He.lower down.. n kisses her neck again... n then leaves a love bite..
He then removed the thin back stripe of her swimming costume.. it revealed her milky back n evoked the wild beast in him...
He caressed her back sensuously... he then pecked her back through her spine n then removed the remaining cloth from her upper body...

He kissed bosoms .. n then the neck n then her lips.. she responded with equal passion...

He then she then moved out of the pool .. covering her parts with her hands n he smirked..he followed her to her room..
He came over her..n moved all the cloth which hid any of her body ..
He kissed her passionately again... this time it ended when she bit his lip..

L- I like u my jungle billi...

R-u r such a desperate man..

L-ain't u lusty women..

R- y r u always mistaken ... u r forcing me..

He smirked..

L-then I love doing that...

N he entered.. her body.. she screamed.."laksh"..
He enjoyed it more with that ..
He kissed her collarbone..
N then her neck n then he licked her earlobes..
Followed by kissing her lips again...
He rocked against her ..her hands pinned to he bed n fingers interweaved with his.

After some time..

R-u bloody...
L-sshhh.. I love you baby...
R-shut up. ..u have only n only lust on me.

Laksh- then okay... he pushed her again...



Is it all about lust ... is love far away from both the hearts...
.. what had happened in the past.. y n how does the obsession began .. is it the fullest of it or just a demo of the obsession ..





Edited by harshitaloomba1 - 9 years ago
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Obsessive character sketches
Laksh Maheshwari - a business man. Successful smart handsome n a Casanova. He is a successful cunning n brutall business man . He doesn't care about anything more than his business.He thinks only about 2 things -1) money and 2) s**x.. nothing beyond it. He is the son of DP n AP. They were very much worried about their son n his attitude n thinking. They therefore start searching for a girl who can change him. They then show him a photograph of the girl he is going to marry "Ragini Gadodia" .. n to their surprise he agrees.
This gives them hope that he have fallen for the girl or may be he himself wants to change..
But they r unaware of what a wild thought had entered his mind... full of lust ... full of greed ...
Will the love be able to blossom like a lotus .


Sanskaar Maheshwari - son of sujata n RP.. he is also a business man but a completely different character from his brother. Sweet caring husband of swara , a middle class girl. For sanskaar love the 1st thing but this idea is too bookish for laksh to understand, for him sanskaar was an idiot who married a girl with lower economic status. N the worst was swara was an orphan. Laksh had a bad eye on swara he doesn't like her but her body attracted him to some extent. Sanskaar is aware of his bother n his wicked mind hence is very protective of swara. He gets too much panicked at times n yes he ends up scolding her at times. To safe guard her sanskaar asks swara to wear full sleeves anarkali suits. She too knows the reason n hence does what her husband says.

Ragini Gadodia - A bold beautiful girl. Daughter of shekhar gadodia . Has no family accept his father.Shekhar is also a business man but never treated his daughter as a daughter.Ragini's life lacks love. Shekhar filled all her wishes n wants but not because of love but because she is officially his daughter n her daughter is also a reflection of what he has,how rich he is, in short ragini is nothing more than a status symbol for him. He hardly ever cared about what is doing or feeling. He likes his daughter. She is also a business women handles his with skehkhar. She is very smart n intelligent at cracking deals. This is the key reason shekhar has not yet thought of marrying her but then he thought of her marriage with his friends son Laksh Maheshwari. This will lead to compilation of the companies n increase in profit of his business. Shekhar knew about laksh's Casanova nature but hardly cared about it. He agreed for the alliance whole heartedly. Ragini didn't objected his decision either. She has no sort of affection towards shekhar but only regards him because he is her father n nothing else. Shekhar n ragini hardly converse. Most if the Time the sit n silently eat together. N then just a small good night or good morning. Ragini doesn't believe in God . She never prays n the sole reason for this is Janki's death. The only one who loved her n cared for her. After janki's death ragini stopped living, all the love from her life vanished. She is the one who hardly cares for anyone's opinion or suggestions. She silently listens to all but do what her heart says. when shekhar said he wants her to marry laksh the next second she agreed. She didn't even bother to know this complete name or take a look at his photo.
What will happen when Laksh will enter ..

Edited by harshitaloomba1 - 9 years ago
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Part 1-
Laksh was sitting on the bed he was smoking n drinking alcohol at the same time.. he wasn't in his room but it was a hotel room.. he again n again checked the time..
Laksh POV-
Aaah.. tonight I am waiting for another girl a fresh one.. can't wait man. .. hmm I .. I am laksh Maheshwari.. the business tycoon n I love myself.. well this word love remindes me of an idiot.. oh sorry the stupidest person on the earth.. my elder brother sanskaar.. eghh... I hate that idiot.. how much loss has he caused I can't tell .. dumb lover boy .. u know there is something he married that swara..just swara bloody orphan.. she had nothing.. no business no dowry or anything to give us. Aah.. I wanted sanskaar marry Leena .. she n her family were ready for him n they had a huge turnover.. if the companies were merged then I must say we could have life time profits.. I feel a feeling of pure anger at sanskaar whenever i see him.. who marries an orphan.. swara was well born for being a tissue paper.. 1st her parents left her n Sanskaar could have also used her n thrown her out.. he could have enjoyed for a few nights until he was satisfied n marry Leena but noo that idiot.. he had to stick with this swara.. uummm..I hate her.. I think I did a mistake by trusting him thinking he will do what I expect.. ie., Enjoy her body for a few nights n leave but noo he has not touched her before marriage.. shame on u sanskaar. What more I feel guilty about is ki I should have grabbed that tissue ..Swara 1st so that I could have used her, crushed her n thrown her .. anyways sanskaar is dumb in another way he is too protective of Swara.. he doesn't even let her shadow roam around me.. n i like scaring him.. he laughed evilly... well well laksh control urself n leave swara for sanskaar..the one woman man.. holy shit...

Well were is my time pass for tonight Leena.. yeah r8 I wanted her to.marry my brother but since she is single wats wrong in a one night stand.

.Laksh POV- ends


He gulped more of that alcohol
Waiting for Leena who entered ..she wire a hot red dress she moved towards him he got up from the bed n there the alcohol glass son the floor..
Laksh pinned Leena to wall..
L- hello baby aane mein koi problem toh nahi hui Na..
Leena- (in a low seductive voice)- noo baby..
L- then it's good. He moved towards her neck n pecked it sensuously...
Leena moved her neck accordingly n he like a hungry man kissed her neck..
His hands roamed on her Brest.. he slowly removed her dress.. n moved towards her bosoms... he sucked them hard .
Leena moaned a little..
He lifted her face n then ..kissed her lips hungrily..
Soon he placed her on the bed n entered in her body.. she moaned.. n he enjoyed the night to its fullest..

Same night ..
Ragini is in her room working on her laptop.. tears again n again welled up in her eyes blurring her vision..
Ragini POV-
Love.. care n affection.. these feelings ended in my life as soon as my mother died..
N Then I have always been an object .. a status symbol for my father... an earning machine too .. he sends me for the most difficult deals to crack ... n I am here for this reason only.. but now today morning I came to know he is feeling himself from n merging our companies with some Maheshwari n karma group of companies.. he says it will expand our business.. oh yes it will but on the cost of my life.. yeah I am the most unfortunate girl in the world.. my dad is willingly marrying me to a Casanova Laksh.. I think the surname is Maheshwari.. whatever.. mom I really miss her ..if she was here it won't be happening with me.. I know what's going happen from now on is the beginning of the worst days of my life.. I know the man I am going to marry. Will not love me but will only have lust on me... he will use me like a toy.. n throw me when he will be satisfied.. he won't count the days he spent with me but only nights.. the most horrific nights of my life are on their way.. just a thought about them n she shivered like anything.. but no .. no I .. I won't let him play alone I will play along .. if he wants to satisfy his lust then I will do the same .. I won't love him.. because he won't love me either.. we will be together because of the business.. yes our relationship won't be bounded by love but money.. iknow he is a greedy man he won't throw me out. .. but then I won't be more than a prostitute to him..
Ragini POV- ends...
Thinking about all this she kept the laptop aside n clutched her mother's photo close to her heart.. he cried her heart out.. she had everything yet nothing.. she was crying... but then again wiping her tears she decided to be strong she had to fight.. she had to bear this her whole life now n she knew it..
She again started working on her laptop..
Again n again her eyes fell on a lehenga kept on her bed.. yes tommorow was her engagement with laksh. She wanted to run away but this wasn't what she is habitual to so she chose to fight. .

Next mrng-
Laksh woke up all cuddled up with Leena..
L- so baby. How was the night...
Leena - fantastic..I must say u r Amazing in bed..
L- u r no different baby..
Saying this Laksh again moved towards her lips he kissed them hungrily..
He again turned her n kissed her shoulders.. n neck n bosoms.. he again entered he body n then rocked against her Leena moaned n pain n pleasure...

They were enjoying when his phone rang for the 5th time..
Laksh came out of Leena..
L- bloody hell ..
He picked up the phone..
Screen flashed sanskaar...
L(in mind)- Mr dumb lover boy...
L- hello what the Hell is ur problem sanskaar.. (he shouted).
Sa- nothing I know u r with some girl.. but badi Maa asked me to remind you that today is ur engagement with Ragini..
L- oh yes.. thanks bro. . well send her pic on my phone...
Sa- sure. '
Sanskaar felt bad for ragini but he can't do anything as she too have agreed n so was laksh n both the families...
He sent her pic to laksh ..
Sa- (monologue)- god save this girl from this living beast ..
In the hotel room..
Leena- what happened baby..
L- nothing it's my engagement today..
Leena- oh god.. then we won't meet again soon.. u will be with her Na..
L- aww baby so desperate for me..
Leena- Yups..
L- then today enjoy to the fullest Na ..
Leena- sure .
N laksh again came on top of her. .. n satisfied his lust..


In gadodia mansion..
Ragini woke up with a heavy heart..
She had cried the whole night..
She saw outside her window..
The mrng seemed pleasant ..
She smiled a little..
But then her eyes fell on the lehenga...
Her heart was again filled with pain..
She got ready in her casuals as the engagement was in the evening before that she had to work for the merging of the companies..
She again started working..
Servant knocked the door of her room..
Servant - ragini ma'am
R- yes come in..
Servant - ma'am ur breakfast .
R- keep it here n go..

In the hotel room Leena was leaving..
L- baby ek good bye kiss toh deti Jao...
Leena- sure baby..
Laksh again kissed her lips till he was out of breath...
Leena- bye ... see u soon...
L- bye baby...

Laksh picked up his phone.. sanskaar did his work..
Laksh opened the picture..
L- oho good she is a traditional type of girl.. anarkalis n fully covered suits. That's nice.. it would be fun to see u in the night dresses... ragini ragini ragini... welcome into the life of laksh Maheshwari... ahh ur business n beauty both are driving me crazy...I herd u r a virgin.. n I am waiting for u baby . . As soon as our wedding will be done u will be with me with all ur will n Laksh Maheshwari will not leave u for a second...even if u will plead then too I won't leave u.. (he looks at her picture lustfully)... but remember ragu darling.. u Don't worry I won't trouble u everyday .. because i have some other people for fun as well..
My bed is waiting for u... (he kisses the picture n then moves his hand sensuously on her picture...)

In the evening..
Gadodia mansion...
Ragini got ready.. her were swollen... she was crying the whole day.. n also was stuck to her laptop..
She was woking the whole day to distract herself .
She now.only did one.thing that is put on her fake smile n git ready for the engagement..

In the MM-
Laksh got ready also were present in the hall waiting for ragini n shekhar.. who arrived..
Laksh was mesmerised seeing her... she was simply looking down.. he noticed her swollen eyes..
L- (monologue)- rags were u crying all the time.. no Babu.. abhi toh laksh se shadi ki sirf baat hui h... wait n see i will actually make u cry...
He smirked n then he moved n sliped his hand in her waist..
L- (fake smile)- ragini let's move down..
R(who was shivering due to his Touch)- sure ..(fake smile)...
Laksh sensed it n to enjoy more he pulled her closer...
Soon they exchanged rings...
Ragini felt to broken to accept it .. she had not eaten since mrng n hence .. as soon as the engagement was done ..she fainted...
She fell on the ground...
L- (in mind)- oh baby..I am not soo bad n u aren't that innocent.. come on .. (he picked her up in his arms n took her to his room) see u only r so desperate for me... u entered my room before marriage only.. aah.. I want to spend the night with u now.. but seems u won't agree easily...let's play a game for few weeks with u .. hope you will enjoy it.. n our 1st night will be comfortable..
They called the doctor...
L- how is she..
Doc- nothing I think too much if work load n stress .. that is y she fainted..
Shekhar - I asked her not work so much today but see.
L- it's okay uncle.. I mean papa.. can I call u that..
Shekhar - Sure laksh..
Laksh entered the room ragini was still unconscious.. he sat beside her .. showing some fake.care..
Soon the family left them alone.. n started attending the guests..
Ragini gained conscious n was quite surprised to laksh holding her hand .she didn't move..
L- ragini r u okay..
R- yes..
He made her sit...
L- acha 1st u drink some water..
He passed a glass of water her..
She drank water.. trying her best so as her hands don't shiver..
L- ragini okay now tell me what happened to u.. y were u working whole day..(fake concern)
R- nothing... just didn't want dad to take so much stress.alone..
She knew him.. she knew he was acting but she simply chose to go with the flow..
L- aww rags.. see don't stress urself so much okay.. (he cupped her face)
Ragini simply smiled... n kept her hand in his hands..
R- okay..
Laksh then had.an urge to atleast kiss her today..
He.started moving close to her...she got what he wNts n simply closed her eyes.. laksh came close to.her n gave a bissful kiss on her lips.. he wanted to give a hungry passionate one but controlled himself...
They parted n ragini went down making herself look presentable.
At night -
Ragini was on her bed..
She was crying and thinking about the kiss..n his fake care..
R- (monologue)- laksh u r heartless.. .. u kissed me Today..n we just met today.. I can't find a way to escape.. mom pls save me.. save me from this hell pls...
Laksh in his room -
He was caressing the bedsheet where ragini was lying few hours back..
L- ragini.. (he bent down n smelled the sheets.) I just like the way u kissed me Today.. u taste quite good.. aah.. can't resist u.. u r attracting me.. can't wait next week is our wedding n yes I want u .. I want u badly in my bed ..along with me... I will enjoy baby.. n u will cry.. n this will awake the beast in me...



Edited by harshitaloomba1 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice prologue.
continue soon.
thanks for PM
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Oh harshita what a hot start 👏
Loved it
Do continue soon
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Originally posted by: Sujayricky

Oh harshita what a hot start 👏
Loved it
Do continue soon

Thanks a sure..😉
Waiting for u to comment
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Posted: 9 years ago
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😲 ☺️ Amazing start

Looking forward to this 😃
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Woow harshita that was tooo hot and passionate☺️
Amazing start
Continue soon..want to know what made him like this😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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What a hot start harshi!

God! Its so amazing!

Waiting eagerly for this.

Thanks for one more awesome story from you.

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