24 Hours : A SwaSan OS ( Alternate take on ML track) - Page 2

okk iam sorry par is story ke end ke sath aisa laga mere dil ka ek hissa bhi khatam hogaya

its really I dunno wht to say special 😭

heartbroken feeling after reading a shot for first tym 💔

Originally posted by: sharif_lafungi

this is!!!! m rendered speechless... I usually avoid sad endings but this was so beautiful...
I had tears in my eyes reading her agony, nd sujata's saddening thoughts...
one of the most heartbreaking work i hv read ever!!
good job dear

Originally posted by: lucky.m

Nandu🤗

Res

Originally posted by: Aahana133

Superb don't have any words to describe how beautifully u have written it. Simply I can only say it it's awsm...

Originally posted by: flora212

Oh god this was 😭😭 I can't stop crying🤢 outstanding story

Originally posted by: mix_of_emotions

okk iam sorry par is story ke end ke sath aisa laga mere dil ka ek hissa bhi khatam hogaya

its really I dunno wht to say special 😭

heartbroken feeling after reading a shot for first tym 💔

Oh wow very nicely written and fantastic story !

Originally posted by: sam.

Oh wow very nicely written and fantastic story !

Originally posted by: ...Penknife...

I'm sorry if it it's made you sad.

Honestly I myself don't know why I dig tragic ends.

But I do hope you liked it. I'd consider myself lucky if you could emotionally attach to this story. Thank you so much for leaving a comment dear. :)

I'll definitely try to write a happier shot soon.

no dear its a special story for me yes I got sad but because it really touched myheart n I got heart broken too I am a very sensitive person any non real but heart touching fiction movie make me cry easily so I try to skip
my friend akansha gave me link of this (shariflafungi) I read it n I was not even thinking of this kind of end...from start it was looking normal n then form mid n end uff the fact sujju n family take sanskar still existing among them broke my heart n cliff scene ..god forbid I can never imagine it in show..
u made me fall in love wid a sad ending story.it is very very special beautiful shot for me .. <3 :"( I really feel numb atm

Originally posted by: mix_of_emotions

no dear its a special story for me yes I got sad but because it really touched myheart n I got heart broken too I am a very sensitive person any non real but heart touching fiction movie make me cry easily so I try to skip
my friend akansha gave me link of this (shariflafungi) I read it n I was not even thinking of this kind of end...from start it was looking normal n then form mid n end uff the fact sujju n family take sanskar still existing among them broke my heart n cliff scene ..god forbid I can never imagine it in show..
u made me fall in love wid a sad ending story.it is very very special beautiful shot for me .. <3 :"( I really feel numb atm