I absolutely loved the concept of your OS:). I am currently quite inactive on IF and hardly reading or commenting on much but I sort of stumbled upon this and am really glad I did.
Hi shru 🤗
I'm extremely happy thay though you haven't been very active recently you still took the time to read and to leave such a beautiful comment. Thank you very much dear.
I felt you infused this with such soul, it was a pleasure to read. I am a sucker for what others call "sad" stories and I call hauntingly beautifully if visualised and executed like this:). On my last FF, I had a long exchange with numerous readers and was explaining my views that to me, death is not the real tragedy, never experiencing a love like this is. Here, you brought that out powerfully.
I too am a sucker for sad stories because I always feel that beautiful things don't last. I profoundly enjoy reading and writing tragedies not because I'm fond of reading people's pain but because I believe that grief is inevitable. And yes I concur that death isn't really an end but a new journey a new destination.
I'm extremely happy to find that you do share my views on this. Thank you so mcu for appreciating this os, I'm so very touched.
SwaSan have the most incredible of soul connects, hence they are my muses for most of my work, and to me their relation and love transcends mere life and death. That is what came across to me here. I don't see things as "sad" in the way other people do perhaps:).
I have always found SwaSan to share an otherworldly connection and that is what I have tried to bring about. I absolutely adore your stories and hence you're words make me really happy. Indeed the story was sad, but at the same time not many people connect beyond life and death. And so I believe them to be lucky and find happiness in that. And I'm glad you see it .
To me, I just felt swept along in the poignancy of this piece and to me, that is what made it hauntingly powerful. I am in between meetings on my phone or would have waxed lyrical in greater detail but hope this conveys how much I liked this:)
Again I'm so glad that even between your meetings and commitments you wrote a special message. To me it's far better than any long lyrical.
Love,
Shru
PS: Besides stating the obvious in loving SwaSan and their heartbreaking love, I adored how you portrayed Sujata and her despairing helplessness and yet courage in living the lie endlessly as whilst she lost her son, she wants to keep his reason for living in any way she can 😭
There isn't a love in this world that matches to that of a mothers. She would never want her son's passing be for nothing. And Sujata shall find solace in the fact that her son lives in swaras memories. I do hope I've done justice to that part.
Ghum Hai Kisikey Pyaar Meiin
