24 Hours : A SwaSan OS ( Alternate take on ML track) - Page 3

Originally posted by: soumi93

Damn!!!!!!!!!!! man main exam deke aayi and u made me cry shitt😭

Its sooo damn Good dear👏

I really dnt expect the ending like this😒

Aisa mat karo na pls i cant see this thing happen in my worst dreams

SwaSan cant be Seperate...Never ever

Kp writing more bt nt sad one plich😭

Originally posted by: pakh

I cried!!!!!!!...its painful...so painful ...I cant even imagine things like this...yet beautifully written by you!!!!!

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Dear Nandini - 😭😭😭,

I get upset with love stories that have an unhappy ending - but I agree that some stories are nice despite the sad ending but seriously - My SwaSan😭😭😭 - how could you do this to me??

On a sober note, I loved it, the different kinds of love that the tale wove in"

I'm so happy to hear that. I find myself lucky that you could connect so well to this story and felt touched by it. Thank you.😳

the pure love Sanskaar had for her, he could not leave her, truly did not leave her.

Swara in her love for him (a lovely twist on anterograde amnesia) unable to let him go

I was hoping I have not messed the memory loss part. I was rather hesitant about adding a medical condition but I'm happy to know it went okay.

Sujata who has let her son go but still holds on to him for the promise she made to him of keeping Swara happy.

Uttara - knows the truth, is frustrated and yet keeps her silence.

Everything is love, in one form or the other and each in their own way are a reflection of the never ending love that Swara and Sanskaar have for each other, a love so strong that it even triumphs death. For death is not end of life, it what dies within us when we are alive that is the actual death. And the irony here is that Swara has actually killed the memory of that day so that Sanskaar is still alive.

I have to agree. SwaSan always reminds me of love written in the cosmos. So pure and triumphant that night, not even death can beat them. I love how you put it.

And yes Swara can't exist without her sanskar so in being alive she believes that he's there with her too. The last bit where she meets with sanskar was very difficult for me to write because I too wmated him to stay.

Though for me in this tale - it is Sujata whose love is the greatest, a mother who has buried her son and yet pretends for his sake so that the love of his life can live.

There's nothing like a mothers love. And I hope I have done justice to it. Sujata wants to protect the reason her son died for. It is her way of keeping him close I believe. For if you live someone so much then everything dear to them becomes dear to you.

A very poignant tale.

Thank you for that in particular. Your reply has made me so happy.

love,

Nyna

Edited: to correct the spelling of your name, My sincere apologies, the autocorrect acts crazy at times.

Originally posted by: MusicAddict

Oh jeez!!
This is one of the rare pieces, which broke my heart!!
Those tears which this OS brought in my eyes!! I just can't express it.
Beautiful<3 Truly beautiful!!