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Posted: 9 years ago
#61
Hello Harshu dear,😊
Awesome update.👏
Both Swara and Sanskar r always lost in each other's thoughts.😆😳
Sanskar is becoming caring towards Swara and her family.😉
When Sanskar was talking with Sujata and RP, he was beyond hurt.😭
Laksh tried to defend Sanskar, but they didn't listen to him as well.😭😡
Sekhar and Dida also likes Sanskar a lot and would prefer him as their son-in-law.😉😳
Swara is so cute and funny.😆 Always dreaming about Sanskar.😳😉 She unknowingly told 'I Love You' to Sanskar.😉😳 He was so much shocked after hearing that.😆 But poor Swara had an accident!!😭 But it was nice to see Sanskar so much concerned about her.😃 Finally Sanskar along with RagLak and Bose family admitted her to a hospital.😊 Thank god she is fine now.😃 Hope Sanskar realizes his love for Swara soon.😳
Update soon.😳 And thanks for the pm.😃
With love,
Aheli.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It's amazing dear and totally different but amazing story I read your all chapters in one go...
Thnx for PM me to read it. ...
All the sanskar family members are super saters that's cool...
And that sujata she unknowingly hurt sanskaar alot with her bullshit reason...
And that swara she is so cute and innocent ..I loved her character...
Update soon PM when you updated the next chapter
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb update Harshu...😊 Bose family so cool... loved sanskar's restlessness after knowing swara s missing..but i thought he confessed then and there after seeing her in that state.. but my badluck 😭 okk... now jaldi se sanskar ko apna pyar realise karwa do... pls pls.. 😉 Swara ko aur mat tadpa...😆 cont soon dear.. will be waiting...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Fangirl part 6
Hi all thanks for replyingn reading.. pls do read this n comment soon I am waiting..N don't be silent readers it disheatens me...

Mrng 6 am... swara woke up n found sanskaar shivering by her side... n then she noticed the situation she was in a hospital room..
Sw- ( faintly) Sanskaar sir..
Sa- immediately got up.. he hugged her..n then cupped her face..
Sa- r u okay...
Sw- yes sir I am fine..
Sa- yes I know..kal dekha Mene kitti fine thi... pata h kal aunty ki to ro k halat kharab ho gayi thi...
Sw- maa kanhan h..
Sa- uncle ghar leke gaye h.. acha u tell kal hua kya...

Fb--
Swara was driving all in tears n rain n high speed.. tears n rain blurred her vision..her mind wasn't working n there she entered in a pit filled with water n sand .. she lost her balance n then the next moment her head stuck a big stone n body got bad scratches n weight of the Scooty came on her foot she somehow pulled the leg out but it was late she had broken her bone...
It pained badly n then lost her conscious due to excessive pain..
Fb ends...
Sa- fangirl tumhe Na gadi nahi chalani aayi h .. u know bas kal Jan nikal gayi thi hum sabki.. pagal ladki..
Sw- sorry sir..
Sa- acha listen i want to say something...
Sw- me too..
Sa- so u 1st...
Sw- no u...
Sa- woh I want to say ki...
Before sanskaar could complete the door opened n nurse entered..
Nurse- sir u can sign the discharge papers...
Sa- okay.. he went out n did the formalities...
Nurse- sir p ls feed the patient n then we will give the medicine followed by the last check up n then u can take her.
Sa- thanks n sure...
She left n sanskaar sat near swara...
Sa- so breakfast..
Sw- sure.. wese u were saying something..
Sa- AAhhh.. nothing bas yahi... discharge n all... u were also a saying something..
Sw- nothing just I was feeling hungry..
Sa- wait..
He went out n returned with a plate from the canteen of the hospital..
Sa-lo swara this is for u..
Swara took it bit then she was reminded of her dad's condition .. one month...
N then a plan striked her mind..
Sw-aah...
Sa-kya hua.
Sw-haath dukh raha h mera..
Swara fakely trembled her hand with the spoon..
Sa-wait wait...I will feed ..
And sanskaar started feeding her..
Swara's heart danced...
N some unknown happiness made him smile..
Some of the food stuck near to her lower lip..
Sanskaar pointed out and asked her to remove but she doesn't seem to understand..

He finally himself bend down n removed it.. he touched her lip..n removed the food grain...
Swara smiled like an idiot at this..
Soon everyone arrived n swara was lifted by sanskaar laksh n shekhar who made her sit at back side of the car she waved her hand to Adi ash sanky lucky n rags... N lshe left
Sanskaar felt sad... As his fangirl won't be with him for few days...
He faintly smiled .. Swara too felt sad for the same reason... Atleast being with him was a nice experience but now ... She was going back.. n won't be even meeting him..
Swara's car went out of sight soon.. he turned back bit then he sneezed ..
L-nahi kya hua..
Sa-nahi kuch nahi...
L-kya kuch nahi look at urself..
Sanskaar seriously for the 1st time saw his condition. Hair messed up.. shirt n clothes turned red in blood n his clothes still slightly wet.. moreover he was sneezing n realized his nose blocked..yes he caught cold... He sneezed again..
Sa-lucky chal let me go.. mujhe bike bhi uthani h...
L-shut up come with us..
Sa-bhai yrr no u see..
L-shh
Sanskaar was about say more when he sneezed again .
R-sanskaar bhai no need to argue come on come with us..
Sa-but (he again sneezed)..
L-ssshhh..
Laksh and ragini took sanskaar along with them...
And Adi ash too left..
At mm..
All were at breakfast table...
They saw sanskaar but didn't respond.. yes now they were angry at him for not picking up their calls n not calling from his side too .. but unlike others his father ran to him ..
Ram- what happened son all okay...
Sa-yes dad don't worry..
L-chachu I will tell u later...
He too him to his room..there were few of his clothes still in the closet he went n took a bath.. his nose wasn't blocked for next 15 min due to the effect of bathing but soon he started coughing as well...
He came out n his buddy his bro laksh was waiting for him at the bf table...
L-yo bro. Waiting come let's have the bf...
Sa-no Bhai i am not hungry u go on n I shall leave now...
R-Bhai no more excuses...
He wanted to refuse but he sneezed n coughed again.. n he was made to sit on the table the next moment...

Ragini laksh n sanskaar the trio had their bf... Followed by an array chai in the end ...
Sa-oh so u both will also have this milk tea .
L-yes any problem..
Sa-no no not me. ... Bit I don't want to get scolded unnecessarily..
L-don't..
Sa- I have to worry when I am here buddy...
Sujata herd the convo n then rams words echoed her mind... May be ram was r8 ...may be he wants just their love...
But she left without uttering a single word
Sanskaar too finished the tea n left .. he anyhow started his bike n took it to the petrol pump..
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Few days later-...
He was in the lab waiting for his fangirl when he mentally kicked himself remembering she won't come...
Sa-(monologue)- uff I am waiting for her n she us at her place...
Just then ad entered age was on phone with swara..
Adi- acha swara cut the call i am in the office... sanskaar sir is waiting...
Sw-okay...
Her heart got rest less...
She didn't cut the call..n Adi just kept the phone in her bag...
Sa-hi how is she now..
Adi-good h sir..bas she said she was getting bored..
Sa-oh.. ask her if we can come this Sunday to meet her...
Adi-nice idea...
Swara who listened to their convo was beyond happy...
N she cut the call satisfied after hearing his voice atleast...
Sanskaar n all started working again... It was in the evening when he returned home...
At sanskaar's place..
Sa-(monologue)- swara ... Hmm .. I am missing her so.muvh yrr... Matlab... I want to talk to her yet I can't... Matlab..himmat nahi ho rahi... Should I call... No no .. acha nahi lagega... Par call nahi kara toh sab kya kahenge ki I am heart less.. uff lekwn pata nahi.. I am feeling nervous to call her ... Egghhh... Sanskaar irritate mat kar jaldi call kar...
He picked up his cell n called her..
Shekhar picked up the call... He expected her sweet melodious voice on the phone but when he recognized shekhar... he felt quite shaken but managed to continue talking some how..
Sa-hello..
Shekhar- hello..
Sa-(in mind)- hunh. What is this swara ka toh pair Rita tha Na.. par yeh toh... Gale ko kya hua...
Sa-hello swara..
Shekhar-no it's shekhar who r u ..
Sa-oh hi uncle.. namaste woh I ..I was asking how is swara now...
Shekhar- better...
Sa-okay uncle then that's great...
Shekhar understood...
Shekhar- wese want to talk to her..
Sa-yes uncle..
Shekhar- wait..
He handed over the phone to swara..
Shekhar- swara see it's sanskaar...
Sw-sanskaar sir...
Shekhar- yes ..
She took the phone smiling like an idiot..both were nervous to talk ... They were confused how to start. ..
Sw-hello...
Sa-umm.. hi fangirl...howz u..
Sw-fine sir..
Sa-okay tell me I heard that you are getting bored
Sw-yes sir I have no work to do n mom n dida .. eghh.. they r taking full advantage of my state ..
Sa-how..
Sw-Aree pura Di. Swara yeh dhanya saaf karde.. ab pyaz katde..ab barwa began mein masala bharde.. swara lapse same de.. aur uparse .. swara doodh peele.. panzer khale.. mana mera pair tuta h but I hate.milk...
Sa-laughed a little- oh god swara u r just out of this world.. okay dinner kiya..
Sw-noo mera man nahi h... I am getting bored..
Sa-aww koi Na abhi jaldi se karo n this Sunday me Adi ash n ragini n laksh hum sab tumse Milne aa jaayenge.. okay...
Sw-(super duper Happy)- okay..I am waiting...
Sa-hmm...chalo now have ur dinner n sleep on time.. I.. we .. we all miss u swara...
Sw-I too miss u.. u all...
Both of them smiled n then disconn ected the call...
Swara clutched her phone close to her heart... n sighed.. her heart danced after talking to him...
Sanskaar kept the phone on his side..
Sa-(monologue)- oh god I don't know y but I am so so happy after talking to my fangirl..
So I can't wait to go n meet her...but let's infom laksh about it...
He called him n asked if he is free..he n ragini readily agreed...
Next Sunday..
It was since mrng swara was waiting for all.. he's her mother n dida were no less in continuously making her work... She was pissed off helping them in all the chopping Veges n folding clothes work...
Sw-(monologue)- eeeghh.. I am just going to run away once my leg is fine..my Maa n dida they r very smart.they r taking full advantage of me being here... N my fractured leg... Sanskaar sir pls come soon I miss u so much ... N I am waiting for u... Uhhun.. but this dhniya... I hate u.. pata nahi I think mujhse saal bhar ka dhniya ek hi bar mein saaf karalengi yeh dono..huh...
There sanskaar was pretty much excited about meeting her again quite confused about what to wear. .. he was looking at his shirts.. n getting more confused...
Sa-(monologue)- kya pehnunga... Hmm red.. no ..zada bright h..okay black..hey no no I am not a don.. hmm white...no..no... Yeh pehle hi bahut bar pehnayenge h.. hmm... Kya pehnu.. yellow... No baby types Laguna.. the chirpy built happy girl...(he chucked )... Hmm.. kya kya pehnu... Pink.. Naaa... It's girlish... Toh phir green... No no... Post nahi lagna h mujhe... (He was still looking at his wardrobe.confused.. n he was in his towel in the room...) Hmm..kuch toh soch sanskaar what u want to wear... Hmmm... Ummm... Mmm... Uff... I am confused..(. He sat on the couch n again stared at his clothes.. he started changing his position again n again... Rolling his head from one direction to another in his towel.. ) (his naughty mind...- was hi chala jata hoon .. swara heart attack se behosh hi jaayege. Seeing my hot body.. ) (he chucked..) (his normal mind- nooo shut up.. shekhar uncle will throw u out u idiot decide a short n wear it.. well shirt nahi samajh arahi so I should wear my jeans atleast..) ab jeans konsi pehnu... Blue..Na Roz pehnta hoon.. toh back.. nooo... Woh bhi Roz pehnta hoon... (His mind- tu pink pehenle Bhai.. Ya post banja.. gadgha kahinka...) Shut up..U dog.. oh.. Kay... So I will wear..umm... (Then his eyes fell on his dark blue shirt.. I. The corner of the cupboard.). haan... Blue shirt n black jeans.. perfect...
He quickly dressed up.. n took his special gift for swara... N quickly left...

At swara's place it was 10 in the mrng she was reading a novel ..n slept while reading... Her mouth was open... N head rested upon the armrest of the sofa...
Just then the door bell rang.. miss boss was too much sleepy to hear it.. hence dadi opened the gate.. sanskaar Adi ash laksh n ragini all had come...
Dadi welcomed them..
Sa-namaste dadi.. where is swara...
Dadi pointed towards the sofa...
All 5 together- aww shoo cuteee...
Hearing the commotion swara slightly opened her eyes...n was happy to see her friends...
Sw-yes u all here ..
Sa-yes I.. no..we came here... To meet u...
He opened his arms in a reflex n pulled her in a side hug.. she wanted to be there put forever..
Sa-howz u..
Sw-I was missing u.. u all...
He smiled n all hugged her n met her...
They all were seated..n there were full on chatting..
Soon Neha n Hari arrived but what attracted the attention of these 6 people towards them was Neha falling on the ground...
Neha- laksh... Laksh...m..mm..m... Maheshwari... O.o... omg... omg..omg...
N she almost fainted n her bro Hari caught...
Hari(tapping her cheek)- aye nutanki uth see laksh is here he came to meet u...
Neha-(opening one of her eye.) - sachi..
Hari-mucchi
Neha ran n hugged laksh.. who was usual to his n hugged her back...
Neha-hi hi . Laksh..
She waved her hand breaking the hug...
Laksh forwarded his hand ..
Neha grinned like an idiot n shaked hands with him...
Hari-mucchi uff ab esa ki nahana band mat kar Dena..
All burst out laughing..
N started Chatting again.. followed by watching a film..
Swara held the popcorn n sat on the sofa... Hari Neha sanskaar laksh ragini Adi n ash.. all sat on the carpet under it..
Soon laksh entered n he had long hair in that film.. he entered like super hotty... He wore a white shirt blue jeans.. the buttons of his shirts were open exposing his six pack Abes .. he had been all soked in water... He walked.. n then removed his shirt showing his calf muscles... He weaved his fingers through his hair n moved showing his back..n then camera forced on his chest... He was breathing heavily as it was a fighting scene...
Here the scene was displayed on television n there swara started skipping her beats along with Neha n Adi..the trio held each other's hand tightly in excitement.. soon swara blew a wistle n the attention was shifted to them.. sanskaar who saw her excitement by looking at laksh got jealous... Along with Ragini...
Laksh looked at ragini n laughed but looking at sanskaar he felt confused why is he jealous.. but then ignored it n continued watching his film...
Ashish was also fuming.. he wasn't liking Adi to get excited seeing laksh.. Hari saw his sisters n did not like it at all.. e was looking at laksh as if he was romancing with his sisters on screen in front of him.. aah .. a over cautious brother...
Laksh got nervous.. but too felt happy seeing his fangirls... Who were pretty much excited...
Sanskaar couldn't take it more he turned the other side n tried concentrating on the film which eventually led his mind into a sleeping stage... he soon along with Hari n ash.. slept while watching the movie only slept on by resting his head on the sofa.. along with Hari n ash.. who slept by assuming his shoulders as a pillow..
The film grew intense.. in the end all the 5 ..ie., laksh ragini Adi swara n Neha were crying...
Swara was clutching the pillow close.. Ragini was hugging laksh .. Neha n Adi.. hugged each other.. all were happy n also teary eyed seeing the painful meeting of laksh n his heroine...
The film ended..
Sw-jiju u t just awesome..
Neha-n adi- yes laksh sir u r awesome...
Laksh- thanks girls..love u all..
He turned to see ragini who was hugging him... He smiled n then wiped her tears..
L-aww mera baccha.. don't cry baby it was just a film..
R-I know.. but u were so much injured..
L-shh.. babu sachi mein thodi lagi h..
He was consoling ragini n swara Adi n Neha aware adoring their bond when a slight snoring sound disturbed their moment..
Laksh poped his neck n saw three men sleeping...
L-how rude..yeh sanskaar bhai n his friends they always do this to me.. they all sleep in the middle of the film...huh..
Swara saw her bowl... Few popcorns were still left...
Sw-no worries jiju aaj hum badla lenge.. .
L-kese
Sw-just wait and watch...
Swara bend down n reached sanskaar's face who was sleeping peacefully.. she tried hard to suppress her laughter n somehow managed to insert 2 popcorns in Sanskaar's nostrils..
They all did a hi-fi.. n waited..in half a minute sanskaar felt suffocated.. he breathed heavily.n then .. pop.. the popcorns flew.. away from his nostrils n he woke up with a jerk along with ash n Hari...
The 5 criminals bursted in fit of laughte...
The trio soon realised what had happened...
Sa-what the hell..who did this...
Sw-I did this..
Sa-fangirl ki bacchi.. he stood up n playfully Beated her with a pillow..
Sw-sorry sir..
Sa-acha aaj no sorry...
Hari- yes sanskaar beat her... N give two very zor se from my side...pagal chori...acha chala I was dreaming about.. (he blushed..)..
Neha- roshni...
Hari- shut up...
(Roshni is hair's gf . Not significant just for teasing poupode in this story..)...
Hari ran behind Neha in the whole room... seeing them n looking at her leg swara felt dishearted..
Sanskaar noticed it.
Sa-hey fangirl...what is this y r u so sad..
Sw-nothing..
Sa-tell me Na.. what happened...
She didn't speak a word... He understood...
Sa-oh I got it..acha u want to come out for a long drive..
Sw-yes..will u take me..
Sa-sure...
Sw-when..
Sa-pehle u have ur lunch then we can go...
Swara asked her mom who denied saying she needs rest.. she felt dishearted.. sanskaar pleaded..n then it ended on a compromise to a near by ice cream parlour..
When they were going a question was how to take her from the narrow stairs if the building.. Sanskaar lifted her up n placed her on the car seat..Hari insisted to stay there...n sit with swara..
They whole heartedly enjoyed the day.. Sanskaar was more than happy to meet swara...
He left along with all ...
Few weeks later..
Swasan talked daily.. hr regularly called her.. their convos which started as 5 minute one it now turned into a 15 minutes long chat...
Today he entered home late ..he was a bit tired but still changed asap n called her...
But today shekhar picked up the call once again...
Shekhar- hello sanskaar...
Sa-hmm.. namaste uncle.. how is swara..
Shekhar- fine but today madam is sleeping.
Sa-is she fine ..
Shekhar- no This tiddi of mine.. today while watching television was so much engrossed that her injured leg fell from the sofa.. n she hurted herself..
Sa-(panicked)- uncle is fine now...
Shekhar- yes beta she is.. just now we gave her pain killers n she slept..
Sa-(relieved)- thanks heaven.. okay uncle tc n gn..
Shekhar- tc beta..
Sanskaar was restless.. but too tired n hence he slept..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65
Nice update Harshita...
Waiting for their confession...


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Posted: 9 years ago
#66
Lovely update dear.
Please ab jaldi se confess karva dena.
Or is bar full romance
Because serial me to dekhne nahi milta he is me read kar le
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey Harshu dearest,🤗
Superb update!!!!👏
Ab jaldi se dono k confession kara do na plzz!!😭 With full on romance.😳😉
Aww!! SwaSan were missing each other.😳 So Sujata heard SanRagLak's convo at their breakfast and understood that Sanky need their love.😊 Hope she understand fully and doesn't hurt him more.😭 Lol!! All the girls were drooling at Laksh!!😆 Sanky, Ash, Hari and Ragini got jealous!!!😆 Sanky getting scared to ask Shekhar about Swara.😆😉 Loved this update so much!!!!!❤️ Update soon.😳 And thanks for the pm.😃
With love,
Aheli.
Edited by iam_aheli_98 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68
Amazing part...
Love swasan conversation...
Sanskar's choosing for dress is just extra superb...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69
Amazing update dear ...
Both want to confess their love but both did not have courage... Interesting...
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey awesome
Bus abh thoda romance baki hai
Then confession in new style...
Loved it
Update soon yr

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