Fangirl-a love story of 2 ordinary people-swasan last part pg39

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Hi all pls don't kill me for this have started the 4th story.. don't worry this is also a very very short story n yes this Time no intense drama 😭.. or dark story💔 .. or hotness overloaded story☺️...

This will be quite a short, sweet and blissful story..no tough fairly tail twist but just a real like simple story... 😳


Hope u will enjoy reading... well as far as the other 3 r concerned not more than 2-3 parts are left per story.. they will too end asap..

I don't know how n when I will update the parts of this one but yes they will be updated asap..


Pls.do leave ur replys
Egarly waiting for them...


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Index-
My note- this one..pg1
Cs- down pg1
Prologue -down pg1
Part-1-down pg1
Part-2 - pg6
Part-3- pg7
Part-4- pg8
Teaser -1- pg 9
Part-5- pg10
Part-6- pg 12
Part-7-pg14
Teaser-2-pg 16
Part-8-pg-17
Teaser-3-pg18
Part-9-pg20
Part-10- pg 21
Teaser 4 -pg 23
Shadi Mubarak- Aapki Farmaish- pg24
Part11- pg25
Part12 ~ Wedding Special~ || The Roka|| - pg 27
Part13 ~ sweet n sour~ - pg 30
Teaser5-
Part 14~Lat Uljhi~ pg 33
Part 15~Pal Pal Dil K Pass~ pg34
Part 16~All Drunk~ pg35
Part 17~Dulha Gum Gaya~pg37
Part 18 PG 38
Part 19 PG 39
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Hello everyone.
Harshita here. I want to inform you all that my stories will be updated further only after March 3 2017.
I am hell stuck with my courses which seem never ending.
The coming Valantines day I am busy with my exams. Seems funny, I know.
I will be right back and give all the updates as per the decided slots after March 3.
Sorry to keep you waiting.
Regards
Harshita.

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Character sketch -
Sanskaar Maheshwari - Born with a silver spoon and bright future. Part of the Maheshwari clan .. younger brother of superstar Adarsh Maheshwari and elder one of Laksh Maheshwari.. also a superstar...his father and bade Papa were also hit film stars of their time... his mother and badi maa were none the less.. the dream girls of their time... superhit heroines..
His Pari Bhabhi is a famous rockstar n ragini laksh Maheshwari a Bollywood singer n heroine.. kind hearted..his friend n laksh's wife...
He has handsome.. mesmerising..hot looks as a hierarchy...but

He is self made man .. he refused to be an actor... he rather did M.Tech in Nanotechnology n now works in a established research center..

His earns far much less than his brothers n family do ... their per shoot income is higher than what he earns in a month but still he loves his job ..it's his passion.. he has a shorter car.. cheaper phone.. smaller television set... yes the house he stays in is the Maheshwari mansion grand and huge house..
His clothes contradict the family... non glamourous simple clothes..often jeans n shirts with his frameless glass specticals.. n a lose plain white lab coat..
His room is full of huge big books.. n his research notes..pens pencils n huge racks of books all r stuffed in his one single room..
He is a simple sweet natured man... intelligent man.. who is a lover of simplicity n not yet rigid..
His favorite pass time is going on a long drive on his bike.. yes not an expensive one a normal one..along with his black helmet...
He earns, lives and stays like a simple ordinary middle class man..
He is paying the price of following his dreams being a rebell to his family has posted him a lot .. his life lacks their complete love..he can't see his parents satisfied.. he faces the ignorance of his family ... often this leaves him heartbroken...

Swara Boss- Ragini's best friend.. once a collage mate with her... was a huge fan of laksh Maheshwari.. until a man in a photo entered in her heart.. he is like her...he is her 1st love... they never met but he had captured her heart and mind..
She is a simple sober middle class girl.. soon to be appointed as the junior lab assistant of her love..
Daughter of shekhar and sharmishta boss.. belongs to middle class family .. her life is happy.. chirping n bubbling like her.. she have achieved the goal of her life.. she is soon Going to work for a research lab in Nanotechnology... her parents are proud of their daughter.. her mom n dad worked hard for this day...
Her clothing n dressing are simple.. she knows how to live her life.. she knows money is important but not more than to fulfill your needs..
She loves her Scoty very much... who is her constant companion...

Maheshwari 's- a family of celebrities.. loves their rebell son sanskaar but still cannot accept his low salary.. n ordinary standard of living.. this ends up often leading them to hurt sanskaar.. they sometimes feel embarrassed when they have to disclose or when their son is captured by media.. people in their circle often laugh saying sanskaar is adopted or what.. this hurts them n They end up scolding n taunting him badly... ragini n Laksh too love sanskaar.. they r the only once who feel proud of sanskaar...

New update -

Boss family - the boss family is a nuclear famil. Shekhar boss, sharmishta boss swara boss and shobha boss. They are fun. Loving.. shobha ie., Dida is swara's dadi who is quite too modern..she keeps on asking swara about her crush or questions like-"did u like him?" .. "did u kiss him?".. "was the guy hot?" Are too commonly asked by her.. n ignored by Swara very often.. simply because before sanskaar nobody was able to steal. her heart..
Neha n Hari boss are swara's cousin.. they live next to their house.. these 3 share a great bond ...
The boss family lives in outskirts of Mumbai..
Hence when swara gets a job she leaves her house n stay in another house she took on rent near to the lab..n research center...


Edited by harshitaloomba1 - 9 years ago
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Disclaimer - This is just a light hearted love story. The purpose of this is not to hurt any class, level, interest, gender, cast or group of people but just to give light hearted entertaining story to the readers. Any harsh comments on any profession, occupation, class, level or group are just for the purpose of creating tension so as the story could be continued please don't bash the writer and enjoy the story as a simple real like one.

Hi all so here I post the prologue pls do read and tell did u like it or not. This is a part of the story which will describe characters and their situation better.

Prologue.
Scene- 1- Sanskaar Gets a job- year 2013
Servant comes running...
Servant - sujata ma'am..
Su- yes
Servant - a letter for Sanskaar sir..
Su- show..
He gave the letter to her n left ...
Sanskaar entered..
Su- sanskaar what is this..
She thew the letter on his face .
Sanskaar read the heading n subject of the letter ...
Sa-(smiling)- mom my dream came true ... laksh I got that job.
L- wow that research one
Sa- yes..
L- fantastic bro..
He hugged her..
Su- Laksh what r u saying.. sanskaar are u sure u want to do this low paid job.. I mean directors are waiting for u to join them.. girls are there at ur back.. they want to see u in films n see now laksh and adarsh are also the budding stars of the industry y don't u join...
Sa- mom what are you saying this is the dream I have lived for so long.. yes this is low paid but I will be happy when I will work there.. I will get inner peace and satisfaction.. what else I need.. yes I won't earn equivalent to what u did or my brothers' do but still mom I will be happy all my life..
Su- okay will u be satisfied
Sa- yes mom
RP- sanskaar if u r okay with it then we have no problem go ahead my son..
They half heartedly blessed sanskaar..
And he n laksh left..
Laksh cheered his brother..
L- Bhai no worries sab man jaayenge ..
Sa- r u sure ..
L- 100%..
Sa- thanks Bhai for being there with me..
L- I will always be my bro...now get ready we need to buy the new clothes for my scientist Bhai ...


Scene 2- Sanskaar's return from Bangalore.- year 2015
Sanskaar went to Bangalore for some meeting, training n research after that he was promoted as the head of his research department.. he returned back when the saw loads of vehicles around mm .. there were stars, media, directors, producers and singers etc.. They were the crew of Laksh's new hit film.. there was a success party going on..
Alcohol of all sorts .. dances.. n loads of media n photo session.. his family n all others were dressed glamorously..
He was about to go out of the parking when he received a message from his mom -"sanskaar my son pls enter from the back door n wait in the guest room I have kept ur clothes if u want change n come to the party."
He entered n changed n went to the party laksh was there with ragini gadodia..his girlfriend from the past year n heroine of this film..
When sanskaar entered the p art wearing his black 3 peace suit.. the media was attracted to him.. he showing them his hand stopping from all the questions directly move to laksh n hugged him..
Sa-congratulations Bhai..
L-thanks
Sa-how much this time..
L-100 ..
Sa-great buddy...
Laksh wrapped his arm around sanskaar..
L - hello all this is.my bro...
Media - sanskaar Maheshwari ..
J1- sir when will u join the industry ur younger brother has J
Now become a superstar what about u.. the industry waits for u..
Sa- I can't say when .. but whenever I will u will be informed..

After some other questions he wanted to talk to his family but all seemed quite busy with guests and laksh with ragini.. he smiled at. His brother n left soon.

In the guest room -
Sanskaar saw his promotion letter n sarcastically smiled.
Sa- (monologue)- kya sanskaar thus is no achievement yr. Just sleep bro after 2 days ur joining back...
Mrng 11-
The MF woke up...the party had ended at 5 in the morning.. sanskaar was busy with his work since mrng .. he was hungry yet waited for his family laksh came to meet him n saw his letter..
L- sale sanskaar k bache u r promoted n u don't have to tell us .

Sa- no Bhai bus..

L- shut up u idiot..

Laksh informed the family who was happy yet wished him half heartedly..
Sanskaar felt broken but then he knew following ur dreams isn't easy..

Scene-3 Before Raglak wedding -yr 2016
Sanskaar and laksh had just returned from their shopping
Su- sanskaar see if u want to come in the wedding then come properly..
Sa- mom have I ever entered the party with anything to embarase u ..
Su- yes ur low salary status...
Sa- (teary eyed)- mom...
Su- yes sanskaar this is the truth..
L- chachi what are u saying..
RP- she is r8 laksh...
Sa- okay mom .. I won't bother u again.. laksh.. wish u a happy married life in advance n I am sorry Teri shadi p nahi aa paunga yrr...
L- Bhai..I won't marry without u
Sa- am I ur bride..
L- no Bhai but..
Sa- good bye lucky...mom just few days more before Laksh's wedding I will leave this house n ur life .. if u wish tell the world that ur useless son had died...
L- what r u saying...
Sa- nothing Bhai..

He went up ...
After a week or so he left.. he purchased a small furnished house near to his lab..

Scene-4 - Raglak wedding -
Swara stood next to ragini..
Sw- yr rags tu toh lucky h re u are marrying laksh Maheshwari ..
R- jealous or what..
SW- yea very much..
R- don't be n passed sanskaar's photo to her..
Swara was mesmerised
SW- who is he..
R- sanskaar Maheshwari.. ur to be head n laksh's brother...



Edited by harshitaloomba1 - 9 years ago
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Fangirl part -1


Hi all this is a surprise part because somehow the editors of that page agreed for posting it here on if as well .. guys pls do leave ur replys n tell me how was the part... i apologize to resent b.day boy sujay for keeping him waiting n infact apologies to all the buddies..
Si guys loads of comments.. next part day after Tomorrow.. n thanks for reading...
Also pls check the cs of the boss family


- harshita


"Peeeppp... peeeppp...peeeppp..." the sound of the horn echoed the streets near to a huge banquet hall of Kolkata...
But something new here was the girl on the society along with her friend.. she wore a lehenga.. n drove the Scooty as if her breaks were either failed or they never existed for her...

"Hatooo...Aree... hatooo... " shouted her friend from the back seat.. "Aree ladki bhaura gayi h .. taste se hato... "...
The speed of the Scooty was enough suitable for the shoot music to be played in the background or perhaps it was already in the mind of our Scooty driver .. stuck badly and madly...
But a man walking was too lost to take notice of this approaching thunder towards him.. or perhaps he was quite too experienced with them n wasn't afraid.. well whatever it was .. it wasn't too good .. the Scooty bashed him... he fell on the road.. his white shirt torned from the elbow quite badly.. turning the shirt red out if blood..his blue jeans.. it was all muddy by now
"Le swara kardiya Na kand... " ..yes the girl driving the Scooty was swara...
"Shut up aditi.. chal uttara the person seems quite badly injured.." the girl in the back seat was aditi her friend...
They both stopped the Scooty n approached to the man.. he did utter a word.. it was shocking to them.. they expected huge lectures or a big fight or mess.. but he simply got up... people were approaching him for the help but he simply showed his hand stopping them...
Sw- sir we are sorry.. it is actually a case of getting late.. woh we need to go to our friend's wedding and she forgot her jwellery.. so we needed to take it to the venue asap.. sorry sir..
Man- it's no problem..u might be getting late.. he said removing mud from his clothes..
Sw- noo sir u pls join us Na... pls sit. Behind u r badly injured
Man- no it's absolutely fine n I think u r getting late..
Sw- Aree sir please I will feel guilty all day long n.
This word guilty was what he felt everyday and he knew it was no less than a curse hence he agreed..
Now there were 3 of them.. swara driving..aditi in b/w n the man was on in the end.
He for once was quite afraid.. she drove as if all the bumps in the road are made especially for her to get in ...
Man,(monologue)- ese toh meri back hi tut jayrgi.
They reached the wedding venue..
She took him to a room.. the next to the bride's .
Sw- sir u wait here I will asap return with the first aid.
The person simply nodded in a yes.. swara was quite too excited for the wedding..she did not notice the person.. he was quite morose..sad .. he closed his eyes..he was thinking something while resting his head on the headrest..
His chain of thoughts was broken by a girlish voice-
Sw- sir here I am back..
She quickly sat behind him n started to bandage his elbow..
Sw- sir aapki shirt phat gayi h so should I remove it..
Man- yes sure wait I will do it...
N he removed the torn part of the shirt which was coming over the wound..
Sw- sir 1st aid done but u wait I will get u some lunch..
Man- no it's absolutely fine I want to leave now..
Sw- pls sir woh actually.. I told ragini so she is coming to apologize..
He took a deep sigh n rested his head on the bed rest..
Swara got up n left .
In the other part of the hotel...
Laksh stood in front of the mirror clutching a kurta close to himself..
L- Bhai where are u .yr I always wanted ki u should be here at my wedding.. but see u aren't here...
Fb-- --_-----------------------------------
Today's mrng-
All the people are preparing for the wedding.. just then sanskaar enters..
L- sanskaar...
He runs n hugs him ..he responded back..
Sa- so how is Mr Groom..
L- fine n now u r also here so I am double fine. ..
Su- sanskaar I hope u know that u have to join the industry if u want to attend laksh's wedding
Sa- mom I know... but Bhai I am sorry I can't come to ur special day..
L- Bhai u let all the conditions be .. u come. Iam proud of my Bhai.. he is what his heart says...
Sa- thanks lucky for that but what I wanted to say was ki I wanted to gift u something special for ur wedding...
L- what ..
Sa- handed over him a box...
Sa- laksh I know mere gift ki Na yanhan par koi value h Na koi need but still this is for u n ragini from ur Bhai...
L- no Bhai this is the best gift ever for me..
Sa- kese khola hi nahi tune toh..
Laksh opened it n was surprised to see a set of keys tied along with a bow..
L- Bhai yeh sab..
Sanskaar took out a set of papers from his pocket..
Sa- Yeh ghar ki chabi thi aur yeh papers .. h .. . Laksh read the address ..
L- Bhai it is far from the city..
Sa- yes this is a peaceful place for u both to spend time..
L- par Bhai in sabki kya jaroorat thi..
Sa- y wasn't it need after all u r my younger brother.. n remember this is especially for u both so don't enter without her.. n enter only with her there is something special inside for u...
Laksh hugged him..
L- thanks Bhai..
Sa- ab tu ita bada hogaya h ki Baha'i ko thanks bolega..
L- no yrr..
Sa- okay leave all that ..
He walked down to as sujata, AP, Ram and Dp. He touched their feet..
. sa- mom.. my new project is starting after 2monthes I don't know if I will be able to come or it but still... if can then pls bless ur nalayak son I advance...
All blessed him half heartedly n he left...
Leave laksh sad n teary eyed..
Laksh immediately called ragini n set to have look at sanskaar-s gift..
In the house..
It was a small yet peaceful house.. ecologically built...
With provision for loads of natural fresh air...it's rooms.were having atleast one wall each which had the most elegant paintings of laksh and ragini.. further more it had gardens around it... hanging ...and simple once too...
Their favorite flowers fragrance filled the air around in the house..
R- yeh sab aapne..
L- Na bha ne humare.liye kiya h..
R- toh kya u met him today..
L- he.came to MM..
N laksh narrated all the incidents to her...
Fb ends ---------------------------------------

Meanwhile ragini entered with a plate of food n loads of apologies but when she saw the person she immediately called laksh..
R- laksh Ji
L- yes baby
R- sanskaar is here ..
L- what where how...
R- he is inured n is in room no. 204..
L- what..
R- come asap..
L- ran the to his Bhai ...
Yes the man hit by swara this mrng was sanskaar...
Ragini was waiting outside
L- where is Bhai..
R- come..
In the room laksh saw sanskaar.. his injured elbow.. n he was resting his head on the headrest..
L- Bhai..
Sa- laksh..
L- Bhai r u okay.. how.thus happened..
Sa- is it ur venue..
L- yes n I am so happy that u r here..
Sa- no laksh I must leave .. mom won't be happy...
L- Bhai par ..
Sa- laksh yrr Teri shadi mein I cannot wear these dirty torn clothes Na ..let me go..
L- no u are not going anywhere.. I have brought ur sherwani..
Sa- no laksh Pls try to understand mom won't feel good n I will be more guilt ridden if I cause more embarrassment to her..
L- Bhai I am proud of u.. we r proud u .. u r no embracement pls ..
Sa- thanks Bhai..but ..
L- koi par war nahi..
sa- lucky tujhe meri kasam .. u won't ask me to attend wese bhi I can't walk properly
L- sanskaar bhai but y all this ...
Moisture formed in raglak eyes because sanskaar was very special to them..
R- Sanskaar y r u doing all this..
Sa- hey what is this y r u guys getting emotional.. y r spoiling this day of ur life because of me.. I must not matter today.. u guys should enjoy this day to the fullest instead of wasting your time on me..
L- ssshhh Bhai..
R- sanskaar bhai. .

Raglak hugged sanskaar who responded back n he pecked both of them..
Sa- all the best to my Bhai n Bhabhi cum behen..
Raglak - thanks sanskaar bhai..
Laksh forwarded a scarf to sanskaar..
L- okay so now hold this kyunki I want u to insert it in my pocket..
Sanskaar did it n a few blood droplets came on the scarf due to blood on his hand..
Laksh hugged sanskaar..
R- let swara come I will teach her a lesson today..
Sa- Aree no ragini pls she is so innocent pls don't scold her..
Swara entered..
Sw- ragini...
Ragini came n held her ears..
R- ese drive karte.h...
Sw- sorry...
R- sorry ki bacchi...
Sw- aaahh.. jiju save me.na..
L- I am in a sharan sankat.. sali ji...
Swara some how managed to get out of Ragini's grip..
N ran showing her the tongue..
Sw- jiju aapse katti hun mein... good bye...
Raglak were stairing at swara when they heard sanskaar laughing at her childishness..
Laksh turned to see him .. it was after so long he was laughing n smiling..
Sa- ohkay so I am going.
He stood up limping..
Laksh supported him..
Sa- Aree Bhai.. my hand has blood tere dress p..
L- bas no more talking I am taking u.
R- Bhai aao khana nahi khaoge..
Sa- no dear.. I am not hungry.. n getting late..
Ragini nodded n went along with the brothers..
Laksh called his driver .
Sa- lucky I will go by myself..
L- kese ? Halat Dekhi h apni..just shut up..n sit .
Sanskaar waved his hand n left..
L- ragini u know what just now I got my best gift from Bhai..
R- I know his missing smile..
L- yes... wese will u help me in one thing
R- hmm
L- can we do something about swara n sanskaar..
R- laksh how can we do about the 2 whose meeting is destined by the Almighty..
L- MATLAB..
R- swara is going to soon work in sanskaar Bhai's research center n that too under him.. I didn't know they will meet like this..
L- really..
R- but u don't worry meri pagal fangirl ka wicket mein down kara doongi.. m
L- aur phir.
R- phir sanskaar ka wicket woh khud hi manage kar Legi...
They laughed n left for their respective rooms...
On the return laksh entered the hotel room for sujata...
She was teary eyed. Looking at sanskaar's picture..
L- chachi
Su- hmm
L- y do you do this to u n Bhai...
Su- MATLAB..
L- Bhai k bina u feel alone Na u love ur son so much.. his absence is eating u up everysay.. u regret everysecond when u asked him.not to attend my wedding unless he agrees to work as an actor..
Su- laksh it's for his welfare only.. I know when he will understand ki this low paid middle class job is not for him. He deserves to be a star..
L- bit chachi this is what his heart says .
Su- I know... n ..
L- chahi u know Bhai met with an accident.. few minutes back he was here but then he left..
Tears escaped sujata's eyes.
Su- is he fine now..
L- hmm..
Su- I will meet him tomorrow after ur wedding..
L- atleast talk to him now..
Su- no not now we r getting late .. media is waiting for you n ragini as well...
L- hmm
In ragini room -

Swara stood next to ragini..
Sw- yr rags tu toh lucky h re u are marrying laksh Maheshwari ..
R- jealous or what..
SW- yea very much..
R- don't be n passed sanskaar's photo to her..
Swara was mesmerised
SW- who is he..
R- sanskaar Maheshwari.. ur to be head n laksh's brother...
Sw- well is he the person I hit..
R- yes..
Sw- oh god.. u know I was in so much hurry ki notice hi ahi kiya..
R- kya
Sw- (winks)- ladka hot h...
R- still jealous
Sw- nope..
R- come let's go...


A week later-
Swara forgot about the incident n sanskaar too.. his photo was in her bag.. Sanskaar too recovered his injuries.. sujata almost forgot about him. Infact accept for raglak np body bothered to enquire whether he is okay or not
Neha Hari dida n swara were playing truth n dare ..
It was swara's turn..
Neha- truth or dare..
Sw- dare..
Hari dida n Neha discussed n laughed mischievously...
Hari - so miss swara boss. Ek hafte pehle aapne ek masumsi admi ko apki Scooty ko dhoom 4 style mein chalte hue Thomas tha..
Sw- ji bilkul..
Neha- aur phir u came to know that he is ur to be head..
Sw- yes .
Dida- so ur dare is u have to keep his photo as ur wall paper screen lock paper.. profile dp.. on WhatsApp n fb n all other social sites..n also post a status.. sanskaar Maheshwari's fangirl.. till u finally go to the lab n start working under him...
Sw- what...
Dida- shoru karna padega yeh toh
Neha- yes now u can't back off..
Hari made swara complete the dare...
Sw- all bad people
Neha Hari n dida (together)- n we love to bad...

After a 15 days...the dare was casting some spell on her.. it was out f fun but still this Sanskaar ad capturing her mind..
One night swara was not able to sleep n was using her phone..
(Monologues convo of swara)
Sw- ab kya karun
She closed her phone n again opened it.m
Sw- sanskaar.. hmm.. okay
She googled his name n started looking at his pictures n few interviews.. there were gossips regarding him.. few news.. n yes there was an hour long interview of him about his last project ..
She watched all of them.. just for time pass n few pictures she downloaded.. of him... few were really hot like he in black.. n few were very cute..
She then went to fb Insta n other social sites n searched his Name..
She can found his IDs n went through them.. they were awesome.. very very interesting.. they were all about his researches etc..
Then she encountered a picture of his guitar.. it captioned -"my 1st love"..
Sw- wah he is like me.. I too love music.. how nice he is he did not scold me that day n he is just perfect...
Sw- noo swara bebo just sleep...
After a short tussle with her brain n heart she slept but Sanskaar wasn't out of her head..his voice his interviews. All echoed in her mind...


Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare
Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare

Idhar nahi
Udhar nahi
Teri Ore Chale

Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare

Idhar nahi
Udhar nahi
Teri Ore Chale

Zara der main
Yeh kya ho gaya
Nazar milte hi
Kahan kho gaya

Zara der main
Yeh kya ho gaya
Nazar milte hi
Kahan kho gaya

Bheed mein logo ki woh hain wahan
Aur pyaar ki mele mein akela Kitna hoon mein yahan

Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare
Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare
Idhar nahi
Udhar nahi
Teri ore chale

Edited by harshitaloomba1 - 9 years ago
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Harshita now i became fan of this story seriously
Loving story alot
Poor sanskar 😭 feeling bad for him
His family is very bad 😡 except raglak 😆
Now swara entry 😳
Ab hoga romance start 😆
Update soon
Edited by Sujayricky - 9 years ago
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Hey yaa... wonderful Cs... Sanskaar loves to live his life normal long his rockstar family... swara loves him.. without seeing him... loved it...

Update soon...

With love..

Kam...
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Interesting👍🏼 waiting for next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#8
very nice background and interesting characters...😳
Edited by Helee - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#9
awesome concept and cs. .
update soon..
thanks for PM..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#10
Beautiful concept...
Eagerly waiting for your next update.
Thanks for the pm

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