Fangirl-a love story of 2 ordinary people-swasan last part pg39 - Page 23

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Posted: 8 years ago
Superb superb superb. Amazingly penned down harshita. I lived it. The conversation between moms on duo was really an emotional one. Finally sujata realized that her son's happiness lied in his own job and his wife to be. And that dialogue of sanskar mujhe is umar mein chota bhai ya behen nahi chahiye, lol 🤣. After jaldi both were looking like yellow monster and sunflower. Well I love this yellow monster and sun flower. Over all an amazing update. What a treat for me to wake up and read ur fangirl. I have become a fangirl of ur ff's. Forgot to mention which photo editor do u use. Coz ur montages r really wonderful. Plz do share the name of ur photo editor.
Update soon. 🤗for the pm.
Love u loads
Nivi
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Nivijo

Superb superb superb. Amazingly penned down harshita. I lived it. The conversation between moms on duo was really an emotional one. Finally sujata realized that her son's happiness lied in his own job and his wife to be. And that dialogue of sanskar mujhe is umar mein chota bhai ya behen nahi chahiye, lol 🤣. After jaldi both were looking like yellow monster and sunflower. Well I love this yellow monster and sun flower. Over all an amazing update. What a treat for me to wake up and read ur fangirl. I have become a fangirl of ur ff's. Forgot to mention which photo editor do u use. Coz ur montages r really wonderful. Plz do share the name of ur photo editor.

Update soon. 🤗for the pm.
Love u loads
Nivi

Hi nivi
It felt so good to read ur updates
Thank u so much for liking the story, it was a treat to me to begin my day with ur comments. Thank you so much.

Glad u liked the photos. I use photo editor by lyrebird studios. It's free and available on Google play app.




Love u loads
Harshita
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi Harshi, 😊
Awesome update. 👏 I loved the forgiveness and emotional reunion between Sanskar and Sujata. 😳 Khushi k aansu. :') And Sanskar and Ram rocked! 😉 😆 And what do I say about my babies?? 😳 SwaSan r the most cutest and romantic couple ever I have seen! Just love them from the core of my heart! 😳 ❤️ I loved their guitar scene and their 'yellow monster' and 'sunflower' scene very much! 😳 Update soon. 😳 Thanks for the pm. 😃
With love,
Aheli.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Fangirl part 16

~All Drunk~
Next mrng-

Sanskaar POV-
Jai humn Gyan gun Sagar... Jai bajrang Bali.. Jai bajrang Bali... Hari Om... Hari Om.. hey bhagwan bachale...
Bahisaab aaj toh pakka shadi cancle ho jayegai. Don't ask where I am. All are searching me and I am under the bed of my to be bride yes. The hot rummer is Dulha gum gaya.

Abhi this is a long story how I reached below the bed. I almost had a suhagraat at my sangeet. How n y... Uff it was all drunk...

Flashback.
In the evening at the Sangeet.
Me and Swara were seated on the stage. She looked like a princess in her pink and Orange lehenga. I wore Carbon coloured Sherwani and black dhoti. The function began. It was going peaceful. A PRDP types function. Mom, maa, baba, papa, Ragini, Laksh, Bhai, bhabhi, Hari everyone was dancing. The clock stuck 8. We just had 2 more hours. I felt something fishy. Ragini was looking dishearted. Mom quized her about her sadness. They had a wispher and mom was equally worried. Soon they both disappeared. They came back all smiling. They started dancing on the Dhol. Quite freely should mention it.

I was wondering what happened but brushing everything I sat with Swara enjoying everything. Mom nd Ragini again went to a corner they had a cold drink in hand, supposingly for me atleast at that time. Little did I know that Punjabis feel incomplete of the wedding goes on without hard drinks. My mother n sister in law were drinking and dancing. I could soon feel Laksh and others drunk. Especially when Hari Neha and Sharmishta Maa too started dancing. Followed by Dida and then us.

Yes Laksh came to me and Handed over to me a drink.
"What's this?" I quized
"Cold drink" he replied his voice wobbly.
"Swara u too take it." He insisted her. She smiled and denied.
Suddenly Ragini poped up on the stage and made her drink the drink.
I felt something fishy. The cold drink wasn't exactly like one it was little bitter but soon I felt better.Perhaps it felt like reaching the heavens. I was dancing as if on the 9 the could. We all were flying.

The DJ sensed the party gone "All Drunk" we had just one more hour to dance and enjoy. The Dhol beats were replaced by a song. We danced along.

[Aaj nahi karna kisi baat pe bhi gaur
Nachungi itna ki todungi floor
Aaj nahi karna kisi baat pe bhi gaur
Nachungi itna ki todungi floor]
Swara swade her waste from left to right. Shaked her hands in no and then danced.She was all set and ALL DRUNK. She was actually seducing me. I too joined the floor.

[Tune gaaliyan de rakhi
Maine daaru pee rakhi
Tune gaaliyan de rakhi
Maine daaru pee rakhi

Arrey beth ja re taau ulti seedhi mujhe bakk na
Chaahe Police bula le, aaj phatte tak nachna
Jo karna kara le aaj phatte tak nachna

Chaahe Police bula le, aaj phatte tak nachna
Jo karna kara le aaj phatte tak nachna
O o o.. aaj phatte tak nachna
O o o.. aaj phatte tak nachna]
We swayed our hands, ossilated our hips. And danced quite too freely. Our bodies were seducing. Our eyes had lust and love mixed. We had wishes to be one and be eachother's for forever. The moment was quite too heated up.

Aaj hone de dhoom dhadakka
Sun le mausi sun le kaka
Do chaar hi ghoont mein poori botal kheechungi

Loud kara de DJ sound
Main ghoomun tere all around
Main masti mein aaj saari naachungi
Waste na ab chance kar
Mood mein aaja aaj dance kar
Sharam ki matki phod de
Ab toh sharafat chhod de

Tune gaaliyan de rakhi
Maine daaru pee rakhi
Tune gaaliyan de rakhi
Maine daaru pee rakhi

Arrey beth ja re taau ulti seedhi mujhe bakk na
Chaahe Police bula...
Jo karna kara...
Chaahe Police bula le, aaj phatte tak nachna
Jo karna kara le aaj phatte tak nachna
Chaahe Police bula le, aaj phatte tak nachna
Jo karna kara le aaj phatte tak nachna

Pee ke main to dead ho gayi
Buddhi meri fat ho gayi
Koi sambhalo mujhko main neeche na gir jaaun
Jab dholiya dhol bajaave
Laaj sharam meri udd jaave
Koi bhi ye samajh na paave kisko samjhaaun

Laakh jatan din raat karun
Tujhse milan ki baat karun
Ab to vele jee naiyo lagda
Dance bhi tere saath karun

Tune gaaliyan de rakhi, maine daaru pee rakhi
Tune gaaliyan de rakhi, maine daaru pee rakhi
Are beth ja re taau ulti seedhi muje pakk na
Chaahe Police bula aa..
Chaahe karna kara
Chaahe police bula le aaj phatte tak nachna
Jo karna kara le, aaj phatte tak nachna

Oo chaahe police bula le aaj phatte tak nachna
Jo karna kara le, aaj phatte tak nachna
O o o... Aaj phatte tak nachna
O o o oo... Aaj phatte tak nachna

Faintly I could hear my father talking to her father-" They look so cute together." My papa said.
"Yeah but my daughter is the cutest" her father replied.
"Yes u r R8" my father supported Swara.
They both laughed out loud lying and gulped more of drinks.

Groups of ladies were sitting and Laughing. They couldn't even understand what they were speaking.
I moved to the stage. Holding the microphone I called her -" SWARA" she turned to me. I left the Mike and moved to her.
We both had dreamy eyes. We were drowning in feelings. I held her close to my self and shouted loudly. "I.. I ... I ... I Love u... I love u Swara"
She smiled and blushed. Her pink cheeks turned me on. I could here everyone laughing. She and I too joined them. Seeing us out of control the hotel staff helped us reach our rooms.

I was missing swara. I peeped out of my room. I climbed the pipe and reached her room. Luckily she was alone. I opened the door and entered in her room. She was afraid and got up. She was about to shout when I held her mouth.
"Kuch na kaho, kuch bhi na kaho" I said huskily like an idiot.
She smiled. We were not in our senses. She turned to me and encircled her arms around my neck. We smiled. We had lost our senses, all drunk we kissed. We forgot everything. Everything.
The kiss ended when passion began chocking us. Out of breath I staired in her eyes. I lifted her up and made her lye on the bed. I came over her. The heat b/w us grew. We didn't know when our clothes were discarded on the floor and bodies rested against eachother. Our Bare, nude, warm and tired bodies stuck to eachother.

Fb ends------

Blissful R8...

Chodo kal ki batein kal ki baat purani..

I don't know I should cry or smile. Because for now everyone thinks ~Dulha Gum Gaya~
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Posted: 8 years ago
Harshita you surely know how to literally break me into giggles. The chapter is just marvelous. Sanskar's prayer was just too good to laugh upon. No body were in their senses during the sangeet. And on top of that they made swasan also to dring, good for swasan 😳😉. Oh god, swasan almost had their suhagraat. What will happen now? They will get married, that is for sure. Because aisa nahi hua naa I will haunt you in your dreams 😈😆. Kidding, ok 😳. Update soon.
Love you loads
Nivi
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi harshita. Atlast u updated, I'm waiting for it since long 😡. Chalo koi baat nhi der se aaye pr durust aaye. What a talli sangeet of swasan. 🤣 like the romance part. No but the least dulha gum gaya🤣🤣🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago
Harshi dear, 😊
U made me go all giggles with the update. 😆 All too much DRUNK and SwaSan almost had their suhagraat at their sangeet in their drunk state. 😉 And now he's under Swara's bed! 😆 I just loved it! ❤️ Eagerly waiting for their wedding and their real SR. 😛 Update soon. 😉
With love,
Aheli.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Dear Harshu,

It's not I don't like dark stories... But fangirl was a refreshing change from your otherwise serious, very dark stories. I LOVED Swara and Sanskar both! Especially Sanky's lover boy avatar! Please don't finish it soon. Every scene of them brought smile in my face. 😳 👏

You should write more stories like this. The beautiful moments and emotions come to you naturally

To be truthful I feel pained to read anyone to go through sexual assault (I skip the description altogether... Having seen a 4 year old victim just scratched my heart permanently. ) That's why I could read the story with a lighter heart.

I love your dark stories though...

Love,
Dyuti
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Posted: 8 years ago
😆
Tali Hogaye Swasan
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update.
continue soon.
thanks for pm.

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