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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow!!!!! superb update
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Harshu...🤗
This was by far bestest update of fan girl.i enjoyed it loads.❤️.right from swasan going to agra...desperate to see each other...finally got to talk on flight..sanky climbed the pipe n family caught him...swara applied mehndi...it was just super fun..😆..climax was fantastic 🤣sanky kidnapped swara n took her to taj mahal..so serene...ahhh was fully involved...thank u for this...cherished it...

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Posted: 8 years ago
Kidnapping was tooo good
Loved it
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Posted: 8 years ago
Res for part 13 and 14. 😳
I'm so sorry dear, I was out of town during Durga Puja vacation, so couldn't read it. 😭
Unresed. 😃
Awesome updates! 👏
Part 13.
Sujata pov was nice. At least she is trying not to hurt Sanskar. And I think she liked Swara too. 😳 Sanskar and Ash moments were funny. 😆 Then Sanskar, bechara so desperate to spend time with Swara, alone, but his would be in laws and saali ji ne plan pe paani phenk diya. 😆 Then the flashback part of Swara was very cute. 😳 Laksh's pov was also nice. He came to sleep in Sanskar's house. 😛 And bechara ko uski biwi Ragu ji stinky smells mein chod k Swara k ghar bhaag gayi! 😆 Then that part where Swara is thinking about leaving her home was emotional. 😳 And Dida, Neha and Hari teasing her was nice. 😛

Part 14. (Thanks for crediting me for the Taj Mahal scene in this part.) 😳
Sanskar's pov was nice. Haaahaa! That part where he was thinking about the sweet and was thing about shouting "yeh mithaai mujhe de de pandit!!" 😆 Swara pov was cute. 😳 Lol! "Zulmees." Nice name for SwaSan's teasers! 😆 SwaSan airport scene! Loved SwaSan cute flight moment. 😳 Lol! Bechara Sanky phir se phas gaya! Everyone started teasing him for climbing the balcony pipe and meeting Swara. 😆 SwaSan badly teased by everyone. 😆 Then Sanky removing Swara's hair from her face. SwaSan morning scene was very funny! All bhagging behind SwaSan and SwaSan bhagging to vist Taj Mahal by riding a scooty! 🤣 SwaSan Taj Mahal scene! Thanks for this scene Harshi. 🤗
Update soon dear. 😳 And thanks for the pms. 😃
With love,
Aheli.
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Res... Ill unres on Thursday...
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Superb update
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great update dear...u r such an awesome writer😊
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Fangirl part 15
A/N- Thanks for sharing ur views on the last part. I was wondering if it was boring but as per the comments I received I want to thank you all for liking it. Thus is the next part "All Drunk" do leave ur replies behind. Thanks in advance for taking time for going through the updates.

~ Pal Pal Dil K Pass~
Sujata POV-
So long so silent I am here in my room. I heard some early mrng Chaos around n ran to my window. All I could do was to giggle and laugh. Sanskaar was running while Swara was scooped up in his arms. Her had bro and laksh were behind them. When they asked what he was doing he replied - "kidnapping my bride" oh god. The first bride who was so happy to be kidnapped but perhaps the person whose Scooty was kidnapped isn't happy.

Sachi I have never seen him so happy, so mischievous or perhaps my blindless to his feelings made this fade away from my sight. I am sorry sanskaar. All I can do in my son's marriage is sit and cry in a corner. He isn't talking to me. Here I am the mother of the groom but none other than him is treating me like a stranger. Alas, this is how I had treated him since a few years, like I have been insensitive to his emotions now he has become insensitive to mine.

Sanskaar can I pls get my son back, pls...



Sanskaar POV-
I dropped her back. I was being glared as if I was theif but okay. After I dropped her back I crossed mom's room. She was all tears. I cursed myself for this. I am a wrong person. I hurted her emotions, I am now avoiding her and just because of me the whole family isn't exchanging a word with her. All r normal infront of swara's family but the reality is far away. It is needless to say Maheshwaris r great actors, hidding the real emotions is an art we have Mastered so well.

Mom can I come back to you. Can I test my head in ur lap. Pls I want to be there. I still remember how we both used to sit and think about my life, she used to tell me how dad is a star. How people are crazy about him. She used to praise his talent. Mom u know what you what u never praised urself but u r extremely talented as well. She married dad by keeping her own carrier at stake for her love. Dad never let her down. She still works mom I never say it but I never forget to watch whenever you are on TV. I still remember how with my shinning eyes I used to ask her - "Mom will I be like u and dad" ...
"Offcourse my son u will be a greater actor Than us" she always boosted my confidence. My little actions made her believe stronger in her words. Perhaps, I broke her dream which I made her believe in. I am sorry mom, I am guilty, I know my one decision have costed a alot. I know how people in ur circle have taunted u because of me. Her delicate glass like dreams which I created and I broke must have been now stripping her heart, it have caused her pain.
I Can never ever see mom crying like this because of. Enough of suffering is what I have caused her. I slowly entered and without her notice slowly lie on the couch. She was shocked when I placed my head in her lap.
Sa- mom
Su-(wiping tears) sanskaar.
She said affectionately and caressed his hair.
Sa- (innocently) To rahi ho
Su- hmm...
Sa- I am sorry...
Su- shhh... No need to be. I know ur reasons beta, I love u no matter what. Infact I am sorry for..
Sa-(cuts) Sshh... No need to be. I love you no matter what.
She smiled at me, bent down n placed a soft peck on my forehead. My eyes filled with Moisture, this was the love I was dieing for since years.
Sa- mom..
I couldn't speak a word, my feelings chocked me.
Su- hmm..
We both hugged eachother, I cried in my mother's embrace. She caressed my hair.
Sa- mom I missed u so much.
Su- me too


We parted when dad entered.
Ram- oho lover boy.
Me n mom looked at him.
Ram- (narrowed eyes) Mr. Maheshwari u know u can romance ir to be wife but atleast leave my legally Wed wife Han.
Sa- Mr. Dad Maheshwari listen apki biwi se romance karne ka mera birth r8 h.
Ram- Uff a mistake of my life.
Su- shut up.love u son.
I pecked her Cheek.
Sa- Love u too beautiful.
Ram- I am dead in jealousy.
Su- shut up u both. Sanskaar get ready Han it's ur haldi.
Sa- yo
Ram- yo k bacche go fast.
Sa- Han ja raha hoon. Mom tc n remember mujhe iss Umar mein chota Bhai behen nahi chahiye so no romance.
Dad spilled water out of his mouth n mom laughed.
Ram- sanskaar...
Sa- sorry... Just joking.

I ran away.

In his room-
A white kurta with slight yellow lining and a plain dhoti. I am getting ready for my haldi.
L- oho handsome..
I smiled as Bhai complimented me.
L- sun I have asked Ragini she will send u swara's pics from haldi ceremony. I know you are desperate to see her.
I couldn't help but tried to suppress my smile. It made my cheeks flush crimson red. I stayed silent but my Adrash Bhai has to come.
Adarsh- oh god Sanskaar see urself u r blushing like a bride.
A gasped. They r teasing me again.
Sa- Bhai ..
Adrash - acha sun do u remember what have u done to us during our haldi.
I tried to stress my mind. Even though I wasn't there attending the complete wedding of laksh yet I remember I coloured him yellow and same I did to adarsh Bhai. Umm honestly now I am scared.
I wished I could escape them some how. It was a vain assumption.

I am sitting in the center of the hall coloured like a yellow monster. They r clicking my pictures. Finally I got up and left. I washed my self.


Swara POV-
I am here in the middle of the hall my Bhai and Neha and Aditi they coloured me yellow like a sunflower. They are laughing at me. Perhaps i am laughing along. We clicked pictures and then I had to leave for taking a bath.

I was in my room. Dida asked me to wear a pink kurta and churidar, I was drying my wet hair. She wrapped me in a shawl. Dida have given me a cup of coffee and went out. I am in the balcony of my room. In the sunlight it feels warm.
I was sipping my coffee when i could see Sanskaar sir coming he held his coffee in one hand and the other had a guitar. I smiled widely. He wincked at me. I could feel the heat rush through my cheeks as they turned pink.
He sat down on the bench before me. I turned to him. He sipped her coffee and adjusted his guitar.
He pecked his fingers and moved them in my direction. I wincked at him assuring I had registered this WiFi kiss. He began to sing.
{Pal pal dil ke paas tum rehti ho
Pal pal dil ke paas tum rehti ho
Jeevan meethi pyaas ye kehti ho
Pal pal dil ke paas tum rehti ho}
He staired straight into my eyes. He was touching my heart from there. I had watery eyes. He nodded his head in a no indicating not to cry. I smiled even wider.

{Har shaam aankhon par, tera aanchal lehraaye
Har raat yaadon ki baarat le aaye
Main saans leta hoon, teri khusboo aati hai
Ek ek mehka mehka sa paigham laati hai
Mere dil ki dhadkan bhi tere geet gaati hai
Pal pal dil ke paas tum rehti ho

Kal tujhko dekha tha maine apne aangan mein
Jaise keh rehi thi tum,
mujhe baandh lo bandhan mein
Ye kaisa rishta hai, ye kaise sapne hain
Begaane hokar bhi kyun lagte apne hai
Main soch mein rehta hoon,
dar dar ke kehta hoon

Pal pal dil ke paas tum rehti ho
Jeevan meethi pyaas ye kehti ho
Pal pal dil ke paas tum rehti ho}

He ended the song I was speechless. I was grinning. We were missing eachother but had no option except to wait till the next morning. He and me we both had shade of haldi on our skin. It made us laugh. I texed him -" u look like a yellow monster" he laughed and texted back, " Love u my sunflower" we laughed. He sat there on the bench. We sipped coffee in this cold and weather under the sunlight.
Pure bliss.



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Posted: 8 years ago
Yippee me first. di your update is beautiful and soul fully romantic...
Loved the slow gestures of forgiveness between mother and son...farther and son duo rocked...

Swasan we're sweet and the care could be felt in each word...Thanks for the lovely update waiting for more...

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Posted: 8 years ago
Woww beautiful update loved it

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