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Posted: 8 years ago
Fangirl part 17

~Dulha Gum Gaya~
Sanskaar POV-

My sleep got disturbed for no reason. I slowly moved. Our upper bodies were bare and sticking to each other. My leg wrapped around her lower body. Her hands over my chest. Her little small frame crushed under my masculine body. I glared at her face. Her lips were curled into a smile. Her hair blocked my vision. I danced my finger along her skin to brush the hindrances away. Her face was beautiful. It was serene. I kept on glaring at her face. I pecked her forehead, eyes, cheeks and nose. She sensed my movement and cuddled closer to me. Her cheeks turned pink with blush. She hide her face in my chest.
Sa- Swara (I wisphered)
Sw- yes sir.
She wisphered on my chest. I smiled. I wanted this Morning everyday.
Sa- we need to get up.
she parted smiled and hugged me again.
Sw- Okay.

We got up. We wore our clothes back and adjusted the bed. We both felt too shy to make eye contact. I moved to her and pecked her forehead.
Sa- I am sorry. With rath ko I didn't know how and when all this happened I apologise.
Sw(cuts) shh.. it's absolutely fine sir.
She said and glared into my eyes for a few seconds and the rest her eyes halted at my chest. I smiled. I pecked her forehead and embraced her.
Sa- are u sure u aren't uncomfortable.
Sw- no. Ur touch made me feel special. Thanks for the beautiful Sangeet.
I smiled. And we both silently giggled. Her warm breath heated my chest and mine tickled her hair.

Our moment was disturbed by dida. She knocked all of the sudden taking away the peace of the moment and filled us with panic in no time.

Dida- Shoru darwaja kholo. Utho baba
Sw- Sir.. dida.
Sa- shh.. it's fine I will jump from the balcony. Don't worry.
I pated her cheek. She smiled. We moved to the balcony. But the instant I stepped out I jumped in her baba, Maa and my parents were sitting just in the garden.
"No chance" we both wisphered.
Sw- ab.
Sa- okay wait. Mein mein Almera mein chupta Hoon.
Sw- no dida will open it.
Sa- washroom!!
Sw- she will use it.
Sa- then.
Sw- then!!! Hmm AA... (Thinks) .. han idea bed k neeche.
Sa- Right...

Flashback ends.


Wrong .. Wrong wrong.. I am hidding under the bed since long about 2 hrs. Laksh and everyone is searching for me. They had been wondering since long. They can find the lost groom only if they will leave the room. Alas, they all are here in her room. Swara is almost intears. I could feel it. She was crying when Laksh Neha Hari and Ragini joked that dulha Gum gaya ab sagai kese hogi.

She had been trying to send them out but no body is Leaving her alone.
Dida- shoru he might have gone for one important work, he will come back soon baba.(to everyone else) and no one will tease my Shona or I won't spare u.
L- but where the hell is he.
Su- I am worried Laksh search for him
L- ji
They all r searching for me. And I am here lost. After all Dulha gum gaya hai na.
Time is passing by. My back is aching and the tension in the room is building up. My back is paining like hell and mice are haunting my stomach. I am still stuck under her bed chanting mantras and praying to the god to save me from this mess. Oh god really pls save me. I can only pray now.

The clock stuck 12. Dida had been trying to feed Swara. My mother is crying endless. Swara had cried twice. I can understand their condition here I am stuck. She knows where I am but we all are helpless.Mom thinks I am lost and her family thinks I have perhaps ran away. I lost all hopes of coming out. I could see everything dark. It felt as if marriage will be cancelled either ways. One if I will be lost then no marriage offcourse and if I would be found here then too her Hitler dad will cancel the wedding.

I almost slept there on the floor. I checked my wristwatch. I had slept for half an hour. I heard Swara and Ragini converse.
Sw- Ragini (wet voice) can we talk
R- Say it Swara
Sw- no not here. Pls can we go out.
I could here their footsteps. The door was opened and closed. They perhaps left. At first I was like OMG don't leave me alone but then I thought she might be doing something to get a way out of this situation.



The door was opened again in a few minutes. Swara was badly crying. All were tensed. So was I. Ragini requested everyone to go out as Swara needed rest. Dida wished to stay but they somehow convence her to go.

Finally finally finally. They were gone and my brother my angel pulled me out. Me and Swara we hugged.
L- u dog. Idiot. Despirate Nanotech. Gadhe. He started hitting me
Sa- Kya kar Raha h yrr.
L- u don't have patience u creepy man.
Sa- I did not say ki juice k name p Daru do.
L- TOH Daru did not say ki Sangeet p suhagraat manao
R(cuts)- shut up u both now go and do something. Laksh how will sanskaar esacpe.
L- Listen tharki man. I have sent everyone in the dinning area u go out from the balcony and move to ur room via balcony. I will opened the door. U will have ur shower and then go out via balcony again and enter to the main hall. Tell everyone ur phone fell down and stopped working so u went to the repair shop and for now it is out of battery. Which I suppose ur phone is. H na.
Sa- Han u r r8. Wese superb plan.
R- wese Swara u r learning acting from Bhaiya or what? U fake cried so convencingly.
Sa- what were u fakely crying.
She nodded and we laughed.
Sa- hey Swara pls eat something.
Sw- I will u go and do take rest.
L- ab challen
I left.



In the dinning area.
I entered and Laksh began his drama.
L-. Sanskaar.. Chachi aagya.
Sa- Kya hua.
L- Oh Mr. Where were u lost without informing.
Sa- with meta phone it broke last night.
I liked perfectly. Alas the plan had a loop hole.
Su- Agree par who repairs phone early in the morning. Which mobile repair shop is open.
I glared at Laksh who cluelessly glared at me..
Sa- woh.. woh.. woh han.. woh mera friend I called him and he has his own shop na TOH he called the worker. H repaired the phone. NAHI TOH.. NAHI TOH sham ko sagai k function k liye late ho gaya na.

I convencingly lied. All nodded in an okay.
Su- now finally I will tell Swara that u r back. Poor girl she is crying since long for u. U r a jerk sanskaar u made her cry.
Sa- sorry yr but phone BHI TOH zaroori that na. After all Abhi arrangements dekhne h na mujhe TOH just working for them.
Su- whatever go have lunch and rest. Sham ko sagai h.
Sa- ji mom


They left me alone. I grabbed food like ahungrt wild animal. Laskh bolded at me.
He was surprised. Perhaps he never saw me this carefree.

We moved back to my room. I fell on the soft bed. It was soothing. I needed some sleep and warmth after staying in an uncomfortable position for about 6 hours. Lakh was in my room arranging my things for the ring ceremony. I slept irrespective of anything happening around me. I was tired. I had planned a surprise for Swara. I wanted to make this day memorable for her. Somewhat I don't think she will forget this Dulha gum gaya incident so soon.



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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update
Love it
Love how swara reply Sanskar touch was special
Wow !
Do update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome update.
continue soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Tharki, desperate Sanskar and Nautanki Swara! 😆 Rab ne bana di jodi!

BTW, will Swara call Sanskar Sir all her life? Do something about it please!

Love,
Dyuti
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: iamreader

Tharki, desperate Sanskar and Nautanki Swara! 😆 Rab ne bana di jodi!

BTW, will Swara call Sanskar Sir all her life? Do something about it please!

Love,
Dyuti

Well was waiting if someone will print that or not. I have future plans.about this "Sanskaar Sir" that is why I didn't remove it.
Hope it would be enjoyable as well
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update. Sach me dulha gum gaya🤣🤣🤣
Waise swara ne kya fake acting ki rone ki. Hahaahahaha
This is too much hilarious. Has has ke pet dard ho rha hai n sanskaar ka mobile wala excuse to sujata was so funny. Bechara sanskaar ki back ki toh band baj gayi, bed ki niche chupkr. 🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago
Harshi, 😊
Aww! Loved the SwaSan scene. ☺️ Haahaa! Tharki Sanskar and Drama Queen Swara! 😆 RagLak teasing SwaSan! 😆 I loved this update very much! 😃 Waiting for Sanskar's surprise for Swara. 😳 Update soon. 😛 Thanks for the pm. 😳
With love,
Aheli.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Harshu..
Read chapter 16n 17..marvellous...trust me..it was hillarious..romantic...i loved it soo much..dulha gum gaya part was best..n sanlak fake story made me laugh like crazy... hoping swasan marriage happens peace fully..so many incidents are happening...excited for engagement...

Update soon

Talia
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Posted: 8 years ago

A/N-
Hi everyone Harshita here. Here is the second last update of my FF Fangirl. I will try to finish it off soon from my side.
I apologise if I won't be able to reply to your comments as from now I will mostly be offline. I will try going through the comments for sure.
One more thing buddies that my FF wild is discontinued, and I will update Playboy only on odd Wednesdays. I mean just first and third Wednesday.
If you are wondering why? Then there are some personal reasons like being promoted to 12th PCM, joining 3 tution at three different places along with school.
I am sorry for this reduction in updates but I can't help giving more than this. It takes a lot of time about 6-7 hours for one single 8-10 page update which I won't be able to give now.
I apologise for this all.

Don't forget my stories. Keep showering your love. And I promise I will give the updates I have promised without any reason for missing.

Regards
Harshita.

Fangirl Second last part
~Shadi Coming soon~
Swara slowly paced into the grand and huge hall of the hotel. She looked like a moon princess in her baby pink gown matched with Diamond Jewells. Sanskaar who himself looked no less than a prince in his white suit and pink shirt waited for his fiancee just in front of the hug window displaying beauty of Taj at it's best. Their eyes met and cheeks turned red. Slowly she stepped up to the little stage when Sanskaar held her hand softly. She smiled at his gentlemanly gestures.
They both were on the stage. With all eyes glued to the heavenly couple. In no time he went on his knees, her mouth swung open for a moment as he rejestered the shock, he smiled softly at her reaction. Gazing into each other's eyes they conveyed love sans the words. He smiled and placed his rough lips softly on her soomth palm. He gently pressed them, pecking her delicate petal like soft hands. Her cheeks turned due to the heat rushed through them.

"To be Mrs. Sanskaar Maheshwari" he began speaking in tone dripping love " Before we continue any further with the ceremony, I wish to delinate my heart whose all beats belong solely to you."
She nodded a little all lost in the beauty of his words.
"Swara! Marry me and be with me so that the world can get jealous with the integration of two souls all in love from the lower limit of minus infinity to the upper limit of infinity. Marry me and be mine forever so that all the pain that comes could be differentiated (here the mathematical Diffrenciation). Stay with me so that the velocity of my life be consistent no matter if the force of situations is regarding or accelerating.
Allow me to be a planet and be my sun, so that my life can freely revoble around you. Also, be my moon too so that my day begins with you like a sun, full of energy and vibes and my day could end with the healing of my soul under the soothing silvery cool moonlight like calmness of yours.
Swara marry me and I promise I will be like a flowering plant in the garden of your heart. Let the scent of love drive us crazy, so crazy that the whole world get cumbusted in the fire of jealously supported by the heat of our love.
I know I ain't that romantic, all I could come up was this. Stupid sinctific proposal, all said it's not worth even a try but is there I little space for a weirdo like me who couldn't say his heart any better than -"I love You" in your life.
Swara! Will you be life. My Oxygen. I need you and only or I will die too soon."
She stayed silent and surprise was clearly visible on her face. This was a unique proposal from her crazy scientist fiancee. Accompanied by a few giggles "Yes" is the word that escaped her mouth. She was diving into his eyes. He was already lost in the ocean of her eyes. The moment freezed for them and the stayed still as if time have halted and no one is around. The love birds got back to reality when the loud cheering and clapping began. He stood up and held his guitar. He made her sit on the which couch and sat on a long white modular stool. In front of the Taj under the shade of moon he wished to dedicate a small song to his beloved.
The lights were dimmed as he began singing his heart for her.


[Suno na sangemarmar ki yeh minaare
Kuch bhi nahi hai aage tumhaare
Aaj se dil pe mere raaj tumhaara
Taj tumhara

Suno na sangemarmar ki yeh minaare
Kuch bhi nahi hai aage tumhaare
Aaj se dil pe mere raaj tumhaara
Taj tumhara
Suno na sangmarmar ki yeh minaare]
Eyes met and words escapes his mouth to touch her heart. Truthfulness conveyed from their eyes. She couldn't help but smiled endlessly.


[Bin tere maddham maddham
bhi chal rahi thi dhadkan
Jab se mile tum humein
Aanchal se tere bandhe
Dil ud raha hai

Suno na aasmaano ke yeh sitaare
Kuch bhi nahi hai aage tumhaare

Yeh dekho sapne mere
Neendon se hoke tere
Raaton se kehte hain lo
Hum toh savere hai wo
Sach gaye jo
Suno na do jahaano ke yeh nazaare
Kuch bhi nahi hai aage tumhaare
Aaj se dil pe mere raaj tumhara
Taj tumhara..
Suno na sangemarmar ki yeh minaare]
He closed his eyes delinating his heart, his feelings through words.
He ended and the hall was filled with silence. Her eyes had tears of happiness. So much he wished he could peck those and halt them but he couldn't. He smoky moved to her and wiped them. She smiled more.

In no time rings were exchanged. She was his from now, only a few hours and they would be together forever. Their hearts danced.

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The evening that was filled with his confession and proposal's color darkened and she returned back. She changed into her night wear and glanced at her family waiting for her in her room. Tears were filled in her eyes. It was her last night with them.
"Don't cry my tiddi" assured her father and embraced her. She responded to his hug with equal affection. Her heart felt soothed but it still pained more and more as the time passed by. The wispheres of her vidai were getting clearer with passing time and her memories haunted her. She who was soon getting married. Her eyes were filled with tears. Again and again she turned and glanced at her dida. She did not reveal but covering her face under the blanket she cried. She tried being happy, she tried remembering that this marriage was her wish but it couldn't help and aid her paining heart and tears that rolled down her cheeks and left a burning sensation. Her eyes getting swelled up more with every passing second. Somewhere in between her thoughts sleep embraced her so as to lessen the effect of the situation which was sweet and sour.

Dida opened her eyes and wiped her tears. She pecked the eyes of her little princess before finally dosing off, afterall none of her pain could be hidden from her. She kept on patting her head slowly. Remembering the sweet days She spent with her Shoru. Her mischieves, her mistakes, her laughter, her tears, her honesty, her sadness, happiness all the 24 years of her life that she spent with her grand daughter played in front of her eyes. This wasn't that easy to bid a bye.
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"See she will get married tomorrow" said her mom as her heart dropped at the pit of her stomach. Her little doll was going to begin a new life. Her eyes welled up with tears. Shekhar, embraced his wife who cried her heart out on his shoulder and slept on his bisept. Her hands on his chest. He pecked her forehead. He soothed her pain but no one could soothing the aching heart of a father whose daughter was soon going to get married. He was happy and sad at the same time. He still remembered how he held his princess in his hands for the first time and tomorrow he will bid her a bye , the distance between them will increase and interaction will lessen down. She will began a new life, he was happy but then he couldn't explain how much he will miss her. The night could see his unshead tears. It rained heavily said his pillow. A sleepless night he spent all in pain and happiness at the same time.
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"Oye!! What happened?" Asked Hari from his little sister whose tip of nose had turned and eyes had swollen with tears.
"She will get married and go tomorrow" Neha sadly explained her tears.
"So. " Hari quizzed back.
"I will miss her." Neha answered.
"But she won't miss an annoying monkey like you" Hari teased her back and laughed out loud.
In no time a heavy pillow hit his face.
"PAGAL" shouted neha.
He grabbed the pillow and climbed the bed. In no time another pillow fight began. He successfully cheered up his sister when his own heart achdd the most at her sisters vidai. He pecked her little sister and slept on the other side, trying to wipe his tears with seems to go too rebellious.
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Mrng 8 am.
All were wide awake. Waiting at the airport for the final wedding ritual which was to b held in Mumbai a day after. He gave her time to spend with her family. He knew he won't be able to understand her pain, the pain a girl feels when she bids a bye to her family. He stayed with his mother and she with her family, occasionally stealing glances of each other and smiling thankfully.
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"What was there in your pendrive?" Asked Ashish as Sanskaar entered his place.
"Woh.. amm tha Kuch"
"Kya tha that you were so despirate to find it" added Laksh who stood along
"Nothing a few vedios" he replied trying to brush off the topic.
"WHICH TYPE??" Asked his brother and friend in unison.
He glanced at them all embracced.
"Amm wohi yrr. It's an old PD, nothing special" he replied avoiding any conversation.
"Engineering days ki h Kya!" Asked Ashish curiously.
"Hmm .. TOH" he answered absent minded.
"BRO" shouted both the other men in his room startling him "Isme woh wali film h Kya"
They quizzed again, turning him red. {Girls guess it now which kinds of films do boys have in their "secret pen drives" ahem... *Cough*** cough***}
"Han.. TOH.. " he turned his back to them.
"Then give it to me" said Ashish.
"WHY" frowned Sanskaar.
"Bro!! Now I am the only single man in this room who needs them. SAMJHA!!" Ashish said.
"He is right !!" Supported laksh.
He sighted and immediately handec over the secret n special pendrive to his friend.
"Any more do you have" asked Laksh.
"3 more" he replied.
"Despirate man" commented Aasish.
"Oho !! As if you don't have even a single pendrive h na" asked Sanskaar with narrowed eyes.
"10" Aashish replied, giving a clear record of him being a single sad man, despirately waiting for a girlfriend.
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Swara's place
Next morning
Pandit- bride will be blindfolded and then she will be made to wear her chuda.
Instructed the priest, the bangles dripped in the mixture of milk and water were taken out and she was made to wear them. Later all the bangles were covered with a cloth tied on her hand. She wasn't allowed to see her bangles until this evening. She was happy and smiling. Even when her cried.
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In the afternoon
Sanskaar's place-
He was getting ready in his room apparently quite sad about loosing all his "Secret" pendrives. When his dad slowly entered the room.
RAM- Sanskaar
Sa- yes dad
RAM- bete did your ever watch some kind of films.
Sa- huh!!
He glanced at him frowning through the mirror clearly confused about what his dad wish to say.
RAM- I mean that type of films.
His frown vanished and he felt irritated at the question being repeated today by his dad.
Sa- DAD!! (Irritated voice)
Dad- TOH I won't scold u na, bas agar pendrive mein hi na TOH remove it, my point is just this.. Okay.
He assured his son.
Sa- Hats di h yrr. Pls spare me for heaven sake. Egghh..
He pleaded.
RAM- nalayak I knew it you were downloading such things only.
Sa- as if you never did!!
Ram - OKAY OKAY now get ready.
Sa- what else I am doing ..
Ram - huh Idiot!!
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Evening 6
Swara came back home from the parlor. Dressed up like a bride Bengali bride along with her hands having her chuda which now her dida removed and made her wear a shakha pola along.
She looked heavenly. Dida pecked her forehead and embraced her once more.
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"MERA HAATH" shouted Sanskaar as his brothers held his hand and him completely so as to help his mother apply a little circle of Mehandi on his hand, ignoring his constant pleas and requests.
Making a cry baby face he stood with his face hung down.
Sa-(like an innocent kid) Eshe Kon karta h.. Mera HAATH kharab kardiya
RAM- Ohoho... Tone dhone ki koi zaroori NAHI h. U know MERI shadi k time p my mom made full 5 Circles of Heena on my hand. Huh.. KIDS these days.
Ram scolded Sanskaar who listened like a kid. Suddenly they could here his bade Papa cough.
DP- **Cough***Cough*** JHOOTE.. Sanskaar don't worry han this Dady of yours is a hypocrite. He cried for full 5 minutes after Mehendi was applied.
Ram turned as red as a tomato as soon as all the family bust into a laughter loop.
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Edited by harshitaloomba1 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome update
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