Fangirl-a love story of 2 ordinary people-swasan last part pg39 - Page 10

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Posted: 8 years ago
#91
Scary teaser
Kavita 😡 and why swara tied rakhi 😡
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#92
Harshita..
If u want us dead..just tell us...dont do this...🤢rakhi...pheras ...OMG..im fainting.plzzz...update soon...change above things...

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Posted: 8 years ago
#93
Yeh sab kya he
Kuch samaj nahi a raha he harshu
Please esa vesa kuch mat kar swasan ke sath
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Posted: 8 years ago
#94
OMG!! Harshu!! Yeh sab kya hai???😲 Sanskar is going to reject Swara and marry Cavity?? I mean Kavita?!!!😕😲😡 Plzz SwaSan ko alag mat kariyo!!!😭 But interesting hai..😉 Dekhte hai ki age kya hone wala hai...😳😕
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Posted: 8 years ago
#95
I think it's his and her dreams.. if not then you planned to kill me... Am I right... =_=
Update soon..

With love...

Kam..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#96
Fangirl part 8

Dmakadar n the most awaited update here...Pls do read n leave ur replies...

Sanskaar POV-
Tere naina.. has diye, bas gaye mere dil mein tere naina -
I rang the bell of her house .. n she opned the door standing on one leg.. but she was happy... Very very happy... Her eyes reflected it...

(Mere dil mein jo armaan hai, paas aake jara dekho na
Dil ke taar mein hai sargam, chhede hai abb koi anjaana) - 2
Swara POV-
I opned th door n saw him... He was looking at me with a smile .. it doubled my happiness...

Yeh pyaar ki hai baatein, kuch ankani mulaakaatein
O ho aise hi milate hain, milke machalte hai do dil jawaan...
Tere naina has diye, bas gaye dil mein tere mere naina...
Sanskaar POV-
Ahh.. seems love is in the air.. welcomed us ...n then.. hopped n hopped n hopped showing me her new improvement... All I could do was to adore her... Her eyes.. her happiness..her face that reflected it...I stood spell bound there rooted to.my place.. capturing her in my heart for forever...

(Ab dekho mil gaye ho toh, phir se na kahin kho jana
Aankhon mein hi rehna, baahon mein tum mere so jaana)
Swara POV-
Today I met him again .. his eyes reflected something different today.. i loved him..But today the feel was on the another level..He was looking at me until I stopped jumping n hopping... The way today he was looking at me.. his actions. ..He had a different air today...like nver before...
..

Povs end...

Their moment wa broken when shekhar asked sanskaar to sit..
Shekhar- tiddi ..let sanskaar sit..
Sw-I never stopped him.. sir have a seat pls..
He smiled n sat...
She too sat the other side..But with a jerk... Due to her leg...
Sa-take care .. Swara..
His concerned rose...
Sw-yes sir...
Sa-so how is ur leg now..
Sw-perfect...
Sa-I herd that u were careless... In u dropped the fractured leg ...
Sw-woh actually..adarsh aur laksh sir ki film dekh rahi n I lost my self so much ki .. bas...(sighs dreamingly)
Sanskaar POV-
Wow .. I regret asking how she hurted herself... She in front of me is saying ki she was too lost drooling over my brothers n forgot about this world.. well just now too she is doing the same... She forgot that I am here for her n not to listen that how much hot n handsome are my brothers..I know girls are their fans but seriously.. I do not like my love ... Talking dreamly about my brothers.. hmm.. can we ban films telecasts on TV.for sometime... I hate it... Laksh... Uff u n ur films n this girl... true a heart breaking combination... I tried talking to her n diverting the topic but no she was stuck over my brothers... Finally I got an idea I forwarded her the chocolates i brought for her .. finally .. finally finally... Mere bhai ki filomn ka Puran khatam hua... Uff so much relived...
Sanskaar POV-ends
Swara POV-
Ahh... My love is in front of my eyes n here I am talking about someone else..But before u give hints.. I think u should teat the person.. I saw sir's face going pale n paler with every passing moment... Aww... I loved it...so Mr. Sanskaar is jealous.. n quite much uninterested...how cute he looks in this jealous look I was enjoying teasing him he tried diverting the topic but no use ...awwee... U are dealing with swara Bose.. u have to bear this...
Ahh... Finally he indirectly bribed me by giving chocolates... Ab the person u love gives u chocolates then ur heart melts ...so did mine... I changed the topic n there was an instant smile on his face.. positive sign.must say...
Swara POV-ends...
Finally swasan talk about lab n their on going project etc.. they shared their chocolate...
Shobha- swara doodh peele
Sw-noo..
Sa-swara doodh nahi peeogi toh theek kese hogi..
Sw-(makes a face)- naahh...
Sa-awwe swara challo phir hum office mein bahut din baad milenge.. thek h Na...
This made swara fear... N she gulped the milk in one go
Sanskaar POV-
Ahh.. now I am happy n relived my fangirl.. she is too wants to be with me... The 1st hint is what I got... Hehe.. bit next is a terrorist of weather it's me or not...
Sanskaar POV-ends

Late mid night...
Swara POV-
Today toh sir scared me ...He said we will meet after long...No i can't bear that... I want to get well soon n go back to Mumbai ... Asap... Gid pls help me...

4 months later-
I was back a foughtnight before..But things changed last. week... Idk y but sanskaar sir us ignoring me... Y .. what is this y is he away...the recent past months... Were a bliss but idk what happened now...y has he Changed..y isn't he responding... I am lost in my thoughts when... His phone rang ... It flashed a wallpaper..But it Left me shocked... It was a girl n the pic was quoted ...I miss u kavita... What... Was I wrong all the Time.. did he love this girl... N there was I thinking about him all the time...
I was loving him n thought he did the same...we used to go on slow walks... When doc asked me... We used to talk for hours.. was it a joke .. was he playing with my heart or was I a fool to fall in love with him...
Seeing this tears filled my eyes...N I left like I do now a days...yes I left without informing him or bidding a bye .. I simply lifted my helmet and left ...
Sw-aditi I am leaving...bye ...
Well mentally it was sanskaar sir I am going..bye...But no not after this ..what I saw...I am heartbroken... "Witch" I cursed that girl in my mind... Bhai was r8.. I was too late in confessing... Too late n now sanskaar sir is gone ..He loves someone else.. I just simply left .
I left the lab n then while walking to the corridors I thought y not confess but then ... Aah.. something caught my mind... what if..it turns out something like this...
Swara imagination...
Sw- Sanskaar I love you
Sa-what the Hell swara ... Look at u.. u r a complete monkey...a trouble... N pls don't ever repeat it... I love someone else... I love this girl... (Shows swara a picture of kavita...)

I jerked the thoughts in my. Mind n left...N yes not in my dhoom 4 style...I mention...NOT... In DHOOM 4 Style... Humm..the accident taught me...this n yes I will follow it..N today I learnt how much painful is a heart break... I left...
Swara POV-ends...

Sanskaar POV-
She left without saying a bye to me...great..Mr Maheshwari ignore her n one day u will lose her...But yes it I better then to do some which will make her hate u ...
A week ago..I was standing on the verge of losing control...N not that moments were too hot ...They were normal but not me... N cherry on the cake was my dream...nooo.. nightmares... N what I saw last n8 I think that will happen soon... N more than that I will lose either my sainty.. n I Don't want to end up kissing her forcefully...or will ... Turn into a lunatic..so it's better to ignore...better u stay away Mr Maheshwari... Or the results won't be pleasant... N today she ignored me...seems she is angry... It's better... Infact the best for both of us...
Sanskaar POV-ends...

2 months back...
Sanskaar was still dreaming about his fangirl..everyday... everynight...But...
Little was he aware ki it's time for them.to be replaced by the nightmares...
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Sa-swara I love you... Pls swara don't go away. After this swara..
Sw-Sanskaar ... I ...I..I...
But she couldn't complete...
N she patted his cheek...
Sa-swara kya hua ..
In a male like voice she said...
Sw- uth sanskaar..Bhai sanskaar get... Sanskaar Bhai...
Sa-swara..I am not ur Bhai...
Sw- kya bol rahe ho sir u r next to my brother...
Sa-nahi... Swara pls...
He cupped her face when it grew beared n mustaches...
Sa-swara ...tumhare face ko kya hua... Swara...aur tumhari Awaz...why it changed...
Sw- Sanskaar..Bhai...
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Sanskaar POV-
I opened my eyes my forehead had sweat droplets..when I saw laksh waking me up n it took me about a minute to understand that it was nightmare... It was horrible...I must say...

Sa-laksh...wa..wa... what happened...U here...
L- Mr Maheshwari it's 10 n ur office people are worried for u..N u r here sleeping n chantung ...Swara... I love you...

Days passed but her sweet torture increased... Even her small touch n I used to shiver .. I was getting mad day by day.. minute by minute... Second by second..her almond eyes... Her pink jucy lips... Her giggles...They were driving me crazy...

But a week before... What I was upto I would have kissed.her in public... We were in the office something flew into her eyes...I instantly came for the help n blew inhwr eyes...But then .. I blew it slowly slowly...N more slowly... Her hair flew n came on her face... I removed themm... N looked into her eyes... N then I saw her lips..a few inches apart ...I wanted to fill the space .. but then saw around where others were stairing at us... We parted..

Not that I ended things here but my nightmare forced...me...to..
Same n8-
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Swara is coming towards sanskaar... With a smile... Wearing a saree .. her smile widens as she sees sanskaar... She blinks her eyes... Sanskaar forgot to breathe...
She came close n pecked his cheek.
Sw-i love you sanskaar sir... n then.. boom...
She takes out a Rakhi n ties it to him...
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Here I got up with a jerk n opened my eyes... I was sweating.n then I cried for about an hour or so thinking about...it .N hence I decided..ki since I can't confess it's better to stay away...
Preent-.
N Today I think I am successful...
Sanskaar POV-ends

Next mrng-
Swara POV-...
I woke up...with jerk... What I saw is horrible... The worst of a nightmare...no I can let that happen...
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Swara is standing teary eyed... N sanskaar takes 7 wows.. with kavita...
He filled her partion with vermilion n ties a mangalsutra around her neck...
He looks at swara n then at kavita...N in front of her eyes...he pecked her cheeks..
Sa-I love you Kavita...
Sw-par sanskaar...
Sa-miss monkey don't trouble us see now get out of our way... We are getting late for our 1st n8.. he helds her by the wiast n starts moving close...
Kavita- sanskaar... Sabke samne..(points at swara)...
Sa-swara... Challo get out...Na..samjh nahi ata.. khana Khao aur jao...
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I sat n cried..I cried for hours...I needed it... I loved him..N every second he was going far n far n far from me... Okay I decided not to go to the lab today n then I saw the time it was 2int he mrng.. I took a bold step...
Ab if he denies or accepts I don't care bit I will confess my love... I decided n left...
Swara POV-ends...

2:15 am.. sanskaar's place ...
Sanskaar POV-
I was sleeping when someone rang the bell.. I turned to see the time it was just 2 ...I wondered who might be here... I took heavy steps n opened the door... When she stormed in n sleep flew away from my eyes...
"Fangirl" I shouted...
"Shh.." she hushed me in entered in... Closed the door n stood in my drawing room...
Sa- what is this swara... What r u doing here at this hour...(in a strict tone)
Sw-okay we need to talk...
Sa-(coldly)- what...
Sw-see sir I am jealous.. I am jealous of that girl jiski photo apne apne phone mein laga ke uspe I miss u likha..U might love her but I love u... Yes i do.. it happened long back but now I can no more hide my feelings... I saw this girl marrying u...U ignoring me in my dreams n i can't handle that... N y the hell are u ignoring me... Haan...
She was continuously speaking. .I needed time to explain her that I too loved her but she was fighting with Me... Because she was jealous from mydead Friend... Me n kvita no chance... Oh god ..
Sa-hey hey swara listen to me..
Sw-noo.. I won't ...
But before she could fight more I sealed her lips with mine... At 1st she was shocked but then responded..it became a wild passionate hungry kiss.. the kiss we both were waiting for it for so long... I bit her lower lip ..She gasped..I entered her mouth...N explored every corner of her mouth ...we parted when we needed oxygen...
Sa-listen I love you...I love u n I love..U... Samjhi...n one more thing kavita is dead n u n only u r my 1st n last love... N what u think only u get nightmares ...I too got.. I saw u calling me Bhai n I was dead... U only tell what should I do..

We embraced eachother n cried... Onour shoulders...
Sa-I am sorry swara..
Sw-no sir I am sorry...
We part n we kiss again...
She was still crying... May be too scared of the dream...we moved while kissing untill we lie on the couch in the living room... She sat n so did.. I.. I broke the kiss.. n moved to her cheejs I pecked her tear... N then.. her eyes...N then her forehead... N then the tip of her nose...N then her lips... We again hugged... Didn't leave each other after all it was tough to believe.. that we were together...we had confessed... Somewhere in the n8 we dossed of like that .. n she was over me.on my chest.. n my hand was on her back...

Sanskaar POV-ends

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Next mrng-

Sa-swara..
Sw-haan...
Sa-tum mere uppar ho Swara...
Sw-toh...
Sa- kuch nahi...mujhe acha lag raha h...
Sw-that's great... .

Sanskaar scooped her..N places her on the bed.. n lie by her side... They hugged eachother n slept again...
Sanskaar pecked er forehead... She smiled... N pecked his cheek...
Sa-I Love you...
Sw-love u two...
Sa- wese miss boss office..
Sw-aaj toh no work Na..Pls.. kal itte din bad toh we confessed ab ek date pe chalte h...
Sa-u r too demanding swara...
Sw- don't be kanjus Mr Maheshwari.. apne bf se hi toh bol rahi Hun Na..
Sa-oh.. really..
Sw-yes..sir..I love you...
Sa-Kitta zada..
Sw- bahut zada it can't be expressed..
Sa-swara baby let's go to the lab... Or date p I will take u this Sunday..
Sw-pakka..
Sa-hmm...
Sw-then let's sleep a lil more..
Sa-hmm...

Sunday...
Sanskaar was getting ready n was confused..well he was as well admiring his hair cut .. the special one he took yesterday to surprise her...
He was on phone with swara when... His tab beeped it was laksh calling for the vedio call with sujata n RP ...
Sa- haan swara bolo which Color are u wearing..
Sw-red .. or blue..or pink...Idk I am confused..
Sa-wear what u like ..N tell me fast...
Sw-y it's a surprise..
Sa-aww..Okay..
Sa-shall we talk afterwards..
Sw-naa..
N they continued...
Meanwhile..Laksh gave a second try n sanskaar this time..signalled him...to call after sometime...
15 minutes later...
Vedio call...
All the people are shocked to see sanskaar in his new Avtar ..with hair like a hero... N choosing a shirt...
L- sanskaar are u okay...
Sa-haan perfect wese bata yeh shirt blue wala better h .red..ya phir black..ya white ..pehnu...
L-oar hua kya..
Sa- I asked u something u r requestioning..me..
L-acha okay both look good but wear the blue one it suits u...
Sanskaar got ready .the Maheshwaris were too shocked to talk to him...N he was too lost in his own world to think about it..
Sa-I am going out so I won't be able to talk for long today okay...
Tc..talk to u all later guys..love u mom...bye dad..
..

Sujata was more than shocked to see her son kike this...
Su-(excited)- Laksh I think he ready to work in the films I guess..
L-no chachi..I don't think so...
Su-he is I bet...
L-may be...
Su- oki Na I will talk to him later...
N she left happy...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#97
Finally both confessed their feelings waiting for suju reaction n their date. N thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#98
Shocking update 😆
Thank god it was a dream 😳

Finally swasan confessed 😳 loved it ❤️

Swasan kiss ☺️

Sujata mood sabka bigaregi
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#99
Res.. battery down.. will unres later..

Finally.. unres..

Harshita.. buddy I know.. you won't kill me.. love you for that.. Their dream was superb... Especially Sanskaar.. Swara with bread.. calling him Bhai.. tying rakhi were awesome.. Swara fear made her to get his home at mid night.. wow.. I loved their confession.. that kiss.. spending the night together.. lovely...

Update soon.. I don't know what chaos suju going create..

With love..

Kam..
Edited by Vaiyambar...... - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Superb update
finally both confess their love & loved the way both confess love to each other...
loved it
cont soon

thnks for pm

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