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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Wonderful update especially the last part. Dialogues were superb!!!

Swara in her conflict, sanskar with undying love. very well written, please update soon pl

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Nalini Ansh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: Krishnabhisarik
Super!! Wonderful update!! I loved how they are playing on her gut instincts, a difficult path but one where she'll herself be in action, shaq ki gunzaish hi nahi.. You were right about it being emotional, quite a few times the scenes tugged at my heart.. Just cannot wait for the next update..😃
P.S. you did get my name right😉
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Akshata😊

Hello again Akshata 😊

I'm glad you think so:)..

Yes it's quite a difficult path to set. But im trying equally hard with them. Hope it goes as planned 😉

Let's see how she reverts with their each step. And also how it effects the bond between the four.

I'm sorry it was too much. Even I teared up a bit when I looked back. But that wasn't my intention. I'm just trying to put out a more in-depth view of each relationship and see how it grows as I keep going. Do try coming back for updates whenever you can. It would be a pleasure to read different such sweet comments.

Hoping you would enjoy the next ones too.

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Nalini Ansh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan
superb update
i jst live their convo
it was so emotional
loved it

Thankyou prachi :)

I was apprehensive about the conversation. Saying you could live it made my day. Thanks a ton.

😊

Yes it's quite a bit emotional. I have a thing with poignancy. I get emotional and make my readers emotional. I hope it wasn't too much. 😕

I'm so glad you loved it.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: sneharay
Superb Update.. 👏

Thank you sneha😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: Sujayricky
Superb update 👏
Awesomely written 👏
Loved the conversation between swasan

Hello sujay

Thank you very much😊

Especially for loving the conversation. That was something I was so apprehensive about owing to its leangth.

Do keep coming here whenever you can. Thanks for letting me know how you liked it.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

That was my first res - I am now unres'ing - partly. I have just finished re reading all the updates till now - and am left a little speechless . So I am going to read it once again, compose my thoughts and then unres.

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Nyna

Ooops...I just hope I didn't cause any lasting damage there (meaning I hope I didn't Cause much confusion) Nyna!

I know it was bit emotional. If this "speechlessness " has anything to do with that, I'm sorry.

Anyway. Get back when you can dear. Would love to know your take.

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P.s edited to make my comment more clear.

Edited by bennetlizzy - 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98
Hi Nalini,😊
Read all the parts together.😉 Awesome updates ri8 from prologue to chapter 3.👏 Specially loved part 4 of chapter 3. The conversation between SwaSan was so beautiful.😃 And all together, u explained each and every emotions and turmoils of SwaSan, RagLak, AP, Shomi so beautifully and aptly. I'm just speechless. Loved it.😳 Update soon.😳 And thanks for the PM.😃
With love,
Aheli.

Aheli😊

Glad you caught up dear!

And so glad you liked the conversation.

If I had really made those emotions clear aheli, I'm happy to know that from you. I hope to keep that up and while taking care not cook it too much.

You just made me so happy with that comment🤗

Thankyou sooo much

😊

Next update takes a little more time. Bear with the delay:) I'll make sure the wait is worth it.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: Aahana133
Awsm...

Thankyou Aahana😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: blindassassin
Wonderful update especially the last part. Dialogues were superb!!!
Swara in her conflict, sanskar with undying love. very well written, please update soon pl

Hello😊

This in Nalini. Glad to meet you here.

May I know you name, please?

Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it. Such compliments mean a lot.

I'll try to post the next one by next Wednesday. Bare with me for the delay while I hope you to would enjoy it all the same

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Aheli

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Posted: 9 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: bennetlizzy

Aheli😊

Glad you caught up dear!
And so glad you liked the conversation.

If I had really made those emotions clear aheli, I'm happy to know that from you. I hope to keep that up and while taking care not cook it too much.

You just made me so happy with that comment🤗
Thankyou sooo much
😊

Next update takes a little more time. Bear with the delay:) I'll make sure the wait is worth it.

Love
N

Welcome.😃 No pressure dear. Take ur time.😳

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