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...Penknife...

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Nobody and everybody haan? i like the sound of that.😉

Definitely planning to come here often. I wouldn't miss this😊

lots of love

(we share the same initial 😆)

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Posted: 9 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: ...Penknife...
@N
Nobody and everybody haan? i like the sound of that.😉
Definitely planning to come here often. I wouldn't miss this😊

lots of love
N
(we share the same initial 😆)

PS feel free to spam my inbox, i might just return the favor

Dear N😉

Thankyou so much once again🤗 I'm blowing up like Aunt Marge here with happiness.

I'll make a note to spam then! And would be happy to have the favour returned. 😊

Love

N😊

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Manisha Bhardwaj

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Posted: 9 years ago

#73

Hope she got her memory soon..

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Posted: 9 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: sneharay
Superb Update.. 👏

Thankyou sneha😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj
Hope she got her memory soon..

😉I don't think so .. But let's hope. Hope never dies😊

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 9 years ago

#76

Dear Nalini,

finally unres for prologue - will do so for the other chapters soon.

love,

Nyna

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Posted: 9 years ago

#77

Nyna 🤗

A great pleasure to see you here. I have just read your comment on the prologue, Thankyou so much. It really means a lot to me. I would love to revert soon but right now I'm working hard on probably the next two chapters, but definitely on one. So please bear with me for a while.

PS : I'm looking forward for the last installment on sweet deals, tonight. While I still hope to read more of it. They will be missed.

Love

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 9 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Res for Chapter 1 - hopefully will unres soon (hope never dies)

Unres (better late than never, I hope)

Dear Nalini,

First things first - just loved the title background - greys can also look good despite the tinge of melancholy and darkness that they indicate.

The first shadow - of her first encounter with the Avenging Sanskaar (I literally love him in that scene - his battle with himself and the subseqeunt monologue). A faint figment of memory that makes it way to the fringes of her mind, so clear that she doubts it to be a dream, and the light that washes it away, his assurance that she destroyed that hooded monster. But he is not so sure, he needs her to remember him even if it means that she walks through the darkness again for him. But then he is partly right, she needs to remember for herself also. He could have slipped in the dark, but he is responsible for her to be able to see the stars and the beauty of the night. So it is right that he fights for her memories, their shared rememberances. The pain is fleeting and the memories worth it.

love,

Nyna

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Soundharya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#79

Res !

I always miss this one ... But will surely try this time

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...Penknife...

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Posted: 9 years ago

#80

Lovely update.🤗

Unres

Hey nalini😃

A 11 hour drive reduced to a mere 6 hour one? That's a feat nine other than mr sanskar maheshwari can manage😆

I'm loving your Laksh. Hes so understanding and supportive nd is the best friend his bhai needs i always adore sanlak and making me love them more. ❤️

Lucky making tea for both of them and the little banter over it then lucky being so happy that swara is slowly accepting his brother, it was all beautifully written. I love how you exploretheir relationship.

I'm not a raglak shipper and usually skip those bits , but you've written them well. I find them very cute here especially when tags gave him an earful for her jethji's driving skills. 😆

And the little phone romance. Adorable

Also, it's great that swara, albeit slowly is accepting her husband. From kabhi to abhi she has come a long way.

Sujatha is especially wonderful. Wanting to throw party for the return of her babgalan bahu is exactly something she'd do. She is so in her element that she barely stops to think of swaras ml and is supremely excited. I love that woman 😆

Dear sanku boy knows his mom and his wife so well.

My favorite part, as you can imagine is to the end of this chapter. Swara conjuring an image of Sanskar and that little bit of memory is wonderful and really really sweet. His name written in those pots is really something I can see them doing. so in character.

Swara is well on her way to recovery, I hope she remembers all of him soon.😳

A wonderful well balanced chapter. It had a bit of everything and that's incredible.

Lots and lots of love

Nandini 🤗

Ps I'm sorry I'm late in unresing

Edited by ...Penknife... - 9 years ago