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Nalini Ansh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: sneharay
Superb start 👏
Thanks for pm 😊
Update soon

Hello sneha 😊

Thankyou so much:)

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Nalini Ansh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Guys,

I know I haven't caught up with all the comments yet. I did replied for a few but then had to stop because I'm using an iPad and the website is so not stable on it. It's really too unforgivably rude of me, but please bear with me for one more day.i promise to reply to each and everyone properly.

I'm right now working on the next installment (probably twice as long as the usual), the second half of which I have drafted out and just setting out to work on the first. It's quite lengthy and much more emotionally draining than I had expected it to be. I'm hoping to post this by this time tomorrow. It's a crucial leg of the story and will be the foundation for everything that happens thereby. Yea, I'm going to go beyond 12 chapters with this. And I hope they will not end up as an epic failure because this is the longest I have ever written (besides dandelions, I will retake them once I have a clear mind again. I'm not going to give those up at any cost. So my friends who have been following them can stay assured :) ).

Please know that all your comments have been read and I feel really thankful for them. They are a constant encouragement and with out them I don't think I would be able to make my silly tales any way presentable.

Once again my sincere apologies and a huge thank you, for bearing with me.

Love

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Nalini dear...

Chapter 2 is brilliant...

The story is getting more exciting n interesting...raglak part was good..swara as usual confused but glad she is having vision of past memory unlike serial where past recollection is no where...

sanraglak secret meeting in guest house ...love their bonding...

Im little confused ..what exactly they found in footage..pari??? Aur something else???

Waiting for next..update soon

Talia

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Nalini Ansh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: krishuuu
Hey dearie...
Fantastic update..enjoyed alot...prologue was great too...

Im also wondering if swara memory start recollecting..all bad things happened to her by all would make her hate everyone...the trust she had on ragini would break first..worried for them..hoping they plan everything carefully...loved it..

Update soon
Talia

Dear Talia

**hugs**

Thankyou so much for those words.

Im sos sorry for the late reply. I have been finding hard to balance time.

I have been busy doing the 3rd intallment. It's really emotionally draining and I might have it posted in a few hours. Please bear with my late responses on that account.

Yes she is just starting to have flashes of things. and yes things could get really complicated. Let's just wait and see how the trio will deal with it. Because everyone had their equal share in her troubles.

While also keeping mr.sahil away from her.

I hope you will stick along to read on and also enjoy them

Thankyou so much once again

Love

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Nalini Ansh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98
Hi Nalini dear,😊
Amazing prologue and awesome part 1.👏 Loved Sanskar and RagLak's plan.😉 Hope that it works on Swara and she will be able to remember everything.😃 Update soon.😳 And thanks for the pms.😃
With love,
Aheli.

Hello Aheli

**hugs**

Thankyou dear :)

Yea I hope that works well too. I'm so sorry bdw for the delayed response as I got busy working on the next one.

Will always let you know. My pleasure.

Hope you keep enjoying them

Love

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Nalini Ansh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: raaz19
Wow...lost for words...update soon...story is progressing nicely and seems like sanskaar is finding it hard to mentian his calm. ...
Loved the conflict of emotions shown in the chapters...

Update soon

Raz

Hello raaz :)

Thankyou :)

Yes he is finding it real hard to stay sane. Swara being the reason behind his sanity one can't expect him to stay calm for long:)

I'm happy you really enjoyed it.

Peep in as frequently as you can.

Love

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Nalini Ansh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: Krishnabhisarik
Awesome SS.. The confusions, plans, reactions, emotions are so in sync with the characters.. I loved the part about darkness lurking over Sanskar, especially when his sunlight is missing.. These two are so essential to each other, and rightfully so, given on the facts they have bonded over.. Wonderful portrayal!! Thanks for the pm dear😊 Eagerly waiting for the next chapter😛

Hello

It's Akshata right??

😕I hope I'm right.

Thankyou so much dear. I had a big smile on my face when read that the characters were in sync. It's the first time I tried to bring lakshya and ragini into my storied and when you say there are in sync it really means a lot to me, thankyou so much

Yea Sanskaar feels like a zombie almost. Poor boy. And poor her. They so need each other.

I'm right now working on the third installment and it get really emotional there after. I hope you won't start complaining on the poignancy

Would really look forward to listen more form you

Keep checking for Pm

Love

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Nalini Ansh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: Miss-swasan
I am absolutely in love with your work
Love this concept
What a story line ... I applauded you for coming up with these ideas
Thank you for the PM really appreciate it

Hai 😊

You have been missed and so was your Swasan story...I hope to see you working on it

Thankyou **hugs** for the love. And the words.

Hope to see you soon again

Love

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Nalini Ansh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: muktai
Hi Nalini...
Welcome Back...
Hope everything is fine now and you are okay...
Good to see your story..

Owing to the busy schedule I won't be able to leave detailed comment but trust me I have read this.
I enjoyed reading every bit of it...
What an amazing storyline👏
I loved it.
Thanks for PM