SwaSan SS: The Postern of Fate: Epilogue 2 (Final) updated on Page 48 - Page 24

Originally posted by: lucky.m

Viji🤗🤗

Hey Lucky sweetheart 🤗🤗

Oh ..I am lovin it ...reading the whole scenario from swara's pov ..its just like totally new perspective though the feelings coursing through are same 😕, recreating that part ..absolutely bang on👏👏 and that reference to sarus cranes ..aww ..so so touching and parallels drawn with swara's situation , that grief stricken period when sanskaar fell of cliff😭😭..again ..you are too good in striking right chords and totally loved how you have shed some light on feelings of family members, something which we hardly get to see other than those glaring flash of light on their faces😆

You always make me feel absolutely on top of the world as well as incredibly humbled with your comments yaar. 😊 It invariably makes my day to know that you loved the story so very much. 🤗🤗

So happy to know that you liked the analogy of Swara's feelings to that of the Sarus cranes. They are considered holy birds, for the intense devotion and fidelity they show to their mates. And I felt this was very appropriate for the SwaSan bond. They really are intertwined twin souls na---more like one soul in two bodies. They simply cannot exist without the other; and for Swara the fact of Sanskaar's survival would have been indisputable. The most clear proof was right with her---the fact that she herself was still alive!

I had a good laugh reading your line about the way they depict the family's reaction in the serial. Glaring flash light on their faces. 😆 🤣 I wanted to show how they coped with the shattering pain and grief, their alternating bouts of despair and hope. So happy to know that you loved it.

then comes next part

sanskaar ..lol.😆.I had a good laugh about at his not so successful attempts😆😆.to resist the charm of his loving wife.loved every bit of it...I cant pick a fav in that part bcos i loved whole of it ..👏❤️ It was love⭐️

😳 How could Sanskaar resist his wife, his love, his soulmate after all. He may not consciously remember her; apart from that one single, incomplete memory which causes him to have some doubts about her, about the motives behind their marriage. But at the end of the day, his heart, his subconscious and his very soul, recognizes its mate. I like to think of SwaSan as souls who have met and loved life after time, age after age, forever. (Like that amazingly lovely poem by Rabindranath Tagore)

Laksh and ragini

Its confirmed ..You are going make me love these both 😆..Though laksh is completely unaware of his bhai's intentions but ragini ..Just waiting for guru and shisya face off ..are we going to get one soon??

Hahahaha...well I have always been fascinated by Ragini's character. A lot of potential there, for a very layered portrayal of a complex nature, one with lots of angles and shades. Sigh...we didn't get a solid redemption track for her in the serial. Kya kare...And as for Lakshya, to be frank, I was not at all a fan of that character for the longest time. But I must say, he has really matured now, and become a bed rock of support to Sanskaar, an affectionate companion and husband to Ragini and a sincere friend to Swara. He has, I think, realized his own culpability in the mess which affected their lives, unlike in the past where he always put the blame only on Sanskaar, Ragini and even Swara.

You are bang on there, Darling. Though Lakshya has matured a lot, he still remains at heart, a rather simple, happy go lucky, laid back bloke. He is not given to too much analysis, and is not really perceptive the way Ragini or Sanskaar are. Hence he would not really suspect anything amiss in Sanskaar's behavior. But Ragini is much more observant and perceptive, and what';s more, her instincts are honed to detect signs of darkness/ greyness in others---she herself once was so overcome by her own inner demons!

Glad you so loved the idea of the guru--shishya face off! 😆 😉 You would have seen that in Chapter 4.

waiting waiting😉 awesome like always👏

🤗🤗 Since you have said "No Thanks" is the rule, I can only say, I feel so very touched and blessed by your wonderful words of appreciation. Really motivates me, yaar!

Love loads

Lucky

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Viji sweetheart...

What a stupendous update...bravo...

😳 Thanks so much, Talia sweetheart 🤗 🤗

Starting with swara yearning for sansku n all the pain she suffered since her childhood..she crave for love..but never got lucky...she was desperate for father love..fiance and every time destiny played its game..n finally happiness came to knock on her door in the form of sanskaar..n she was completed..she found her love ..her soulmate..all that childhood yearning fullfilled...that craving for love satisfied for sometime n then again destiny took her life away...but she didnot lose hope...everyone gaveup but she didnot..n all her prayers answered n she got him back ..not exactly how she know him ..little changed but atleast she got him back..

So happy you loved the portrayal of Swara here. Yes, she never really had a stable, protective male figure in her life right from childhood. Her father was absent from the scene entirely, and so was her paternal grandfather. Her maternal grandfather probably passed away early.

And even after Shekar came back into Shomi and her life; even when Lakshya initially was infatuated with her and pursued her so assiduously, they never really showed that unshakable trust, devotion and loyalty which was so important to her. Swara really thirsted for that lovely bond of absolute love, faith and fidelity----which she found with Sanskaar. They really are two bodies with one soul, or perhaps we can term them passionately intertwined twin souls. Neither can exist, or even contemplate an existence, without the other by their side.

Swara never lost hope, she always held to the faith and unshakable belief that Sanskaar was very much alive----since she herself still drew breath, had her heart still thrumming. She knew, that if her other half had perished, she would no longer have been alive herself.

Her belief and prayers were indeed answered, and he returned to her. The only thing was, however, the fact that he had suffered from retrograde amnesia and did not remember the powerful love that they shared. He did not remember consciously, but obviously, his heart, innermost psyche and soul, recognized Swara as their other half.

I just simply loved sansku..he was in turmoil..all confused..a fight between heart n brain.it was amazingly penned down...

Thanks so much again, dear. 🤗 I wanted to show Sanskaar's heart versus mind battle here. Where Swara is concerned, his heart always has the upper hand. 😳 So glad you loved this portrayal.

Raglak.. have their own share of guilt n regrets..but are now facing then together..accepted each ither wholeheartedly...i admire ragsan friendship alot..she know the actual man sansku who came to take revenge..she have seen his dark side...only she noticed his minute facial changes n understood that this is old sanskaar...now the proteage felt responsible..she have to look after all...her sister..her husband n her friend too.she have to help him before he do anything wrong...

Yes, both Ragini and Lakshya have realized the error of their ways, and have sincerely repented for all their missteps. They have acknowledged the wrongs they committed, which landed each other, and others in the family as well, in such a mess in the past. Both have matured, and done their best to redeem themselves.

You hit the nail on the head there, Ragini would definitely be able to see signs of the recurring grey shades in Sanskaar's nature. She herself, after all, had let her inner demons completely overcome her inherent goodness for so long. And she, being Sanskaar's friend and protege in those earlier days, would be able to recognize that the Sanskaar who now returned home, was more like the old Sanskaar---bitter, vindictive, and thirsting for revenge. The protege would be able to identify the guru after all...

Yes, she certainly did feel responsible: to ensure that her sister retained her happiness, that her friend should not commit some grave error in the grips of his amnesia, and that her husband should be protected from the consequences of this renewed misunderstanding.

Ragini resolved that she would do her utmost, because she knew that she owed Swara and Sanskaar, many, many times over. Her sincere remorse for her past sins against them, fired her resolve to redeem herself fully, by ensuring their happiness and peace of mind.

Overall fabulous dear..

Waiting for next..

Thanks sweetie. 🤗 🤗 Hope you loved Chapter 4 as well. Saw that you'd 'liked' it---thanks for that. Do let me know what you felt about it, when time permits.

Love

Talia

Originally posted by: svg98

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