SwaSan SS: The Postern of Fate: Epilogue 2 (Final) updated on Page 48 - Page 25

Originally posted by: lucky.m

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viji ..🤗🤗

That was awsome update ..Like a total blockbuster movie darlin...romance plotting planning , suspense sentiment ..where do i start ..where .??hmm ..I loved everything but let me start with first one

Lucky my dear...yaar you always make me feel so happy after reading your comments. 🤗🤗 😳 😳 Was just so happy to hear you loved the various elements of this chapter. Blockbuster movie? 😳 ☺️ I think I was almost incoherent with joy for about 10 minutes after I read your comment. 😊

sanskaar and gardening ..God! How do you manage to weave such beautiful back stories for a bit of what they have shown in ..his connection and love for gardening from childhood ..That connection was beautifully woven ..and then nakul ka backstory.that totally justifies why sanskaar holds nakul as close confident of him . In SR who would have even given a damn to nakul and here you are ..hats off⭐️ and sanskaar being sanskaar ..his planning is spot on ..dangerous he is when someone messes with with him ..I so so miss him these days ..I want him to show that dead wood what he can be and that HUF ..wow ..logic speaks viji ..I so wish Cv's ..ignore that's not gonna happen but that was such a bang on point yaar ..absolute bang on⭐️⭐️⭐️

🤗🤗 Thanks Lucky. I like thinking out and imagining a back story for the characters, as you know. Sanskaar, Swara, Annapurna, Durga Prasad, Ragini, Lakshya----I just enjoy thinking of various possibilities and imagining background details. So very glad you liked that portrayal for Sanskaar here; as well as the backstory for Nakul. I just thought I needed to flesh out Sanskaar's Man Friday, too. 😊

Sanskaar's planning certainly is chilling and ruthless. He would go straight for the jugular, after all, he believes in repaying people in the same coin. He thinks that his bade papa and Lakshya stabbed him in the back, deceived and betrayed him; so he would want to completely demolish their business, and literally send them staggering into the dust.

About the business organization as an HUF. 😊 So happy you liked the incorporation of legal background and logic there. The serial regularly makes a mockery of all known business/ contract/ marriage/ divorce laws 😆. Sanskaar would certainly know and exploit every single provision and loophole in the law---he is a person who understands the letter and the spirit of the law, after all. 😉 😊

and then patronus ..harry potter and then sanskaar...can this get more awesome ..That patronus you mentioned is so so sanskaar ..⭐️👏😛..awesome you are darlin

😳 😉 Hain na? I really felt a Peregrine Falcon would be an apt Patronus for Sunny boy. It reflects his character traits so well.

and then comes ..guru sishya face off ..like kind of ..that was so much fun ..I always felt there are only two intelligent people in SR sasnkaar and ragini .😉.though swara falls into some other category ..bakshi category ..lol..sanskaar might have hired her instead😆..ragini poking to his plan and in turn he using his ace card of her fake pregnancy and again ragini lol..that was so much fun but I loved the events afte

Oh Yes, Sanskaar and Ragini are the 2 people in the Maheshwari and Gadodia Households with the most brain. 😆 If you put all the others together too, one can't match the sheer wiles, guile, tactical and strategic brilliance of these two. Swara's strength is not in planning and perceptiveness at all, I feel. Its just not her forte. Her strength is of a different type---in her sense of justice and fairness, in her feisty, never say die attitude, her empathy, her goodness. But she is definitely not as perceptive as the other two are. And as for the rest of the people in the 2 families--Hey Bhagawan! 😉 😆

So overjoyed that you loved the guru--shishya/ master--acolyte face off. 😊 I really wanted to show that shadow boxing between them, the matchup between their respective wiles and guiles! 😉

I dont mind those kind of wrong impressions of swara it that leads to that blissful last part☺️☺️..It was ..hayee .....I am running back to read again ..my dil is going hmmm at this moment and I may end up in la la land..you know after effects of good and beautiful reads

😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ I was going like this when I was imagining and writing that scene. So I am so very glad that you loved reading it, too.☺️ The poor darlings----they needed some together time, no? That irresistible pull towards each other, that adoration and love for each other, just pulling them into that intensely romantic moment. 😳

Loved loved loved it ..

Lucky 😳...I am seriously just so touched, and feel immensely humbled and blessed with this feedback. It means a lot to know that you loved this update and the story so very much.

Love again

Loads

Lucky

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Was haunting the forum and was in a bad mood - too many angsty posts. Your tale was just what I needed. I sooo loved it.

Nynu 🤗🤗🤗

So glad I could make you feel better. And I am over the moon that you loved this chapter.

Especially the simple plan - HUF (brilliant and as you said, the most suitable - their business would be a partnership definitely not a company, cannot hand over PoA of a Company 😊)

Yeah---though the serial does not really give details, I did feel their business has to have been set up either as an HUF or as a Partnership firm. I explored the Partnership firm in my Mahabharata Analogy series----and here I made it an HUF. 😊 Yeah--the private limited company is definitely the least likely of the 3 alternatives.

Warning - will take quite some time to unres - I am going to read this chapter, then from the beginning, start my comments (I have to unres on all of them) go back to read, in the mean time you would update another chapter, I would make another res and...it starts again.

Take your time Nynu...There is absolutely no rush. It is enough for me to know that you read it and loved it so much. That gave me such a high. 🤗 Finish your hassle inducing excel sheets with nested functions, handle your Norwegian Ridgeback/ Hungarian Horntail of a fire breathing boss, get to a better place where you have breathing space and time, and then comment when convenient. I can wait, dear. No issues whatsoever. 🤗 ❤️

But I had to say - I am losing myself into this tale, impossible to resist just like Sanskaar cannot resist Swara. 😳

And that, I must confess, brought a most silly, emotional reaction from my side. A film of tears (of joy, I promise!), at the fact that this wee fic of mine is being loved so much. The analogy you used just slayed me----the love and yearning and pull SwaSan have for each other----is like the motherlode of a gold mine, as far as I am concerned. 😳 And you have warned me to not say Thanks! Yikes!

loads of love,

Nyna

Originally posted by: Nupur_5

How you manage to do it Viji? To write something so beautiful & surpassing your previous level of awesomeness by creating new level? Everytime?

Nupur my dear 🤗 🤗 I don't know what to say yaar----I feel so very humbled and blessed by the warmth and love in your words. Really made me feel so overjoyed and touched. I get a little emotional about my pieces sometimes----I pour a lot of my effort and feelings into them. So when I hear such lovely words from you, it really makes me feel very blissful. 😳

Need to say, another mindblowing update!

The cat & mouse game between Sanskaar & Ragini.

Woohoo! Sanskaar will always see through her & will two steps ahead Bt Ragini very well know how to pay Gurudakshina, don't she?

I love to envision Sanskaar and Ragini as Frenemies. 😆 😉 The cat and mouse game between the master and the acolyte, between the Ex Guru and Shishya, would be so much fun! Its nice to think of them as rivals, who ultimately become allies because they share a deep love and affection for the most important people in their lives (Swara and Lucky respectively).

And then Sanskaar & Swara, our SwaSan!

That KISS was very unexpected btw, atleast for me!

And I really think I should NOT start about that or else I won't stop! *Blushing*

😳 ☺️ I was majorly blushing when I wrote it, my dear. So I am very glad to know you loved reading it. 😉

Bt I want to say one thing about that kiss: If it wasn't Swara, Sanskaar's reaction would have been otherwise!

What I meant to say is, Sanskaar don't remember falling in love with her & even have some doubts why she shoot him! Bt still he can't stop himself when it comes to Swara! After all, we all know how deeply, madly & irrevocably he loves her! He don't remember Bt his subconscious do! And that's why he kissed back!

If someone told him that he was married to another woman, I'm sure his reaction would have been total opposite!

Okay did I make any sense? Or that beautiful kiss baffled my mind! Don't know!

Yes, dear. This perfectly right, I would say. See, there is a heart versus mind battle raging within Sanskaar. His mind plays that image in a loop---that single image which was the first memory he had when he recovered consciousness in the hospital. That fragmentary memory, of this fascinating lady, apparently leveling a shot at him.

But after he meets Swara, he is unable to hold on to his suspicions. Though he is not sure if he fully trusts her or not, he cannot but help see the pure adoration and love in her eyes for him. Each time his mind tries to question why she tried to kill him; his heart refuses to accept that. Somewhere deep within his subconscious, his psyche, his heart----why, his very soul----Sanskaar knows that he and Swara are inseparable. That they are two halves of a seamless whole, that they are irrevocably, intensely in love with each other.

And that ensures the fact that where Swara is concerned, Sanskaar's heart will always triumph over his mind. 😳 When Swara initiated the kiss, how could Sanskaar resist for more than a brief moment? His soul yearned for its mate, after all...☺️

I am super glad that you felt the kiss made your mind dreamy and baffled. 😆 😉 But what you said makes perfect sense.

Anyways awesome update & I'm looking forward to the final update!

Love ya Loads for this wonderfully warm feedback. You made my Saturday night and Sunday so very special, I can't even begin to tell you how much. 😊 🤗

You are exhausted but still you updated! That's really nice of you!

Good night Viji, take some rest :)

I am re energized now, and hope to start work on Chapter 5 soon. I have a rough outline already planned. 😊

Lots of love & hugs :)

Originally posted by: Asyalover

so proud of ragini...and wow that some passion betwen swasan

Originally posted by: khushi_shankar

What a great story! You write so well! The characters you have written just come to life.

Originally posted by: tr_eta

Awesome update.,loved both sanskaar & ragini.,their mind games were amazing.,and it seems sanskaar had fallen in love with swara once again continue soon

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

well written..

Originally posted by: svg98

Now that was an awesome update..I waited for it so anxiously and it was worth it..

Thanks so much, Piya 🤗 🤗 I keep telling you this, but I can't help it---your comments mean a lot to me. Your detailed reading, the insightful and analytical nature of your comments, the warmth of your appreciation---always makes me feel so very touched and motivated!

Part 1 was very deep in a way..Why Sanskar is the way he is..his reactions everything could be seen very well by his love was gardening.. It is really a very patience needed process..as we take care of our relationship..nurturing them..watering them..and then they blossom so are the flowers and trees..so this comparison was very marvellously described by you..I have always loved Harry potter and it made be too happy to see even Sanskar was fascinated by this..except that the dementors in his life does not really exist the way he thinks them to be..but yes his patronous is very powerful a radiance of energy protective shield protecting him..his thoughts do scare me at the moment..the intense and icy persona of his..its very clear why even Ragini shivered when he heard his voice..at the temple..

I did want to go a bit into a backstory of Sanskaar, his character traits which make him the layered persona that he is. He definitely has an earthy, nurturing side to him; as we see from his beloved hobby of gardening. He is patient, caring, very adept at planning and execution. And apart from this, he has this trait of being focused, resolute, and as you said, comfortable with exercising and handling power. He knows how to deal with people---and usually, given a choice, he plays fair and above board. But when people deceive or betray him, then he is fully prepared to pay them back in the same coin.

I am so very glad you loved this portrayal, I did intend his present state of mind to be quite chilling and forbidding. I am sure Ragini must have felt a lot of shivers running down her spine! 😆

Nakul is missing..yes he did told him to be underground when the MMS scandal happened..is this the reason he is not there..and then his call at the climax of the chapter..either it is going to bring all the happiness back or I think it will cast Sanskar into a very destructive mode..whatever it is..it surely is raising by heartbeats at this moment..because as u said Nakul anc Sanskar are very important to each other if Sanskar comes to know that somewhere his family and Swara is responsible for his state..and that will be only if Nakul is unaware of Sanskar past life..

I can't reveal more about Nakul and what his conversation with Sanskaar would be, at the moment. 😉 😛 That will come in Chapter 5. But I will tell you, that one of the two alternatives you have analyzed, is bang on. 😉

The game between Raging and Sanskar seems to be a boxing match..both casting blowing moves at each other one at a time..Sanskar detectives played a very amazing job at this..and not to forget Sanskar's plan was very dangerous..but alas countered by Ragini..seems to be he learns very much from his Guru..the temple incident made me shiver..Sanskar is so deadly sometimes..his business rivals must shiver at the very sight of him..did anything ever miss his eyes..the way he warned Ragini to get away from his path made me view like him a storm waiting to uproot every possible hurdle in his way..thank

Yes, Ragini has certainly learned well from her erstwhile Guru. 😉 Theirs certainly was a battle of wits, wills, guile and wiles. 😆 It was like a chess or poker match, or a very tactical, calculative game of shadow boxing. And frankly, these two are the most intelligent and even dare I say cunning, people in the Maheshwari and Gadodia households. There is no one to match their strategic and tactical vision; and they can even take some rather dubious steps if this is urgently warranted by adverse circumstances.

Sanskaar certainly is in a very deadly frame of mind. He is like a iron fist concealed in a velvet glove. He had made a clinical, ruthless plan to demolish the firm of Maheshwari, Karma and Sons. And when Ragini put a spoke into that plan, he was icily furious. Though he really did not intend to let any harm befall Shomi or the baby she was carrying (primarily owing to the fact, that he would not want to cause any harm to Swara's parents or unborn sibling), he certainly wanted to use this leverage to blackmail Ragini into keeping his secret, and minding her own business.

Thank God Ragini told the truth..to everyone otherwise when Sanskar will gain his memories he would never have been able to forgive himself..because by hurting his family..as his heart said he was hurting Swara and its very reliefing to see that his heart has accepted Swara..it not a surprise actually..she is her heartbeat the very breath he takes..the mind may not recognize her..but the heart surely recognize his mate..for whom it beats for..This move by Ragini did shock Sanskar to a level..but I don't think he is going to stop..Also Ragini calling him jeeju very well stated that she cared for Swara's wellbeing very much..Ragini is going to every length to protect her family..But its very clear to this Sanskar insides ache while doing this..he is not very sure whether what he is doing is right or not..It was also very symbolising when Sanskar felt distant from Swara when Ragini called him by his name..his sub conscious is already giving him hints..

Yes, Ragini had to take this step in order to counter the scheme from Sanskaar's side. Initially she was completely lost as to what she could do, but then she hit upon this plan of action. 😉 😊 Ragini definitely wants to shield the family from Sanskaar's misplaced vendetta, but she does not want to betray and malign him like she did last time. And she knows, that however confused Sanskaar might be in the grip pf his retrograde amnesia, he does love Swara from the very marrow of his bones, from the depths of his heart. She wants to keep emphasizing that relationship, the extent to which both Swara and Sanskaar had cherished their love for each other.

You are right, Sanskaar does not really like to use such a leverage in order to push his plans for revenge. He does feel bad using any secret which is connected to Swara's parents. He feels guilty about possibly doing something wrong by Swara. Though he still does not consciously recollect the love that they shared, he is unable to prevent himself from being drawn to Swara; from being enthralled by her innocence, her goodness, her warmth and her empathy.

Last part was very beautiful..he has accepted that Swara could not have hurted him..there must have been a very solid reason why she took a shot at him..he is so very powerless before her..lost in the beauty of her eyes which look at him with nothing but passionate love and adoration..as he is the only reason for her existence..his turmoil was also very well reflected..and then that kiss..it was very unexpected.. But so pure and sensual..and it was imitated by Swara as if to check that whether he has fully accepted her or not..and then his restrain finally broke free and he kissed her back..the passion was blazing..flying sparks out..Sanskar was drowning in her quite unable to stop himself..why all the assistant always call at the wrong time..

Sanskaar has come to realize that Swara does feel a genuine adoration and pure love for him. He simply cannot believe that she would have tried to harm him; and he cannot believe anymore, that the love she shows for him is farcical or an act. It is far too genuine for that. And he is unable to resist the burgeoning strength and depth of his own feelings for her.

I was so very happy that you loved the passionately romantic moment that they shared. 😳 I was going all ☺️ ☺️ when I wrote it, so I am overjoyed that you enjoyed reading it. And yes, the phone always rings at the wrong time, na? 😆 😉

Still the most amazing this his even without hai memories..Sanskar could not stop himself how much he tried from taking in his arms every morning..watching her very move when she dresses up specially for him..and then his heart which start beating at the very sight of her..and the thought of hurting her filling him with agony with 10 times more pain and hurt..and then his love and and passion which seems to be growing very second he spend with her..falling deeper and deeper..your words truly bring them to life..I would say once again you write beautifully..you not only make them fall in love with other but also make us fall in love with them and that too hard..

Thanks so much, my dear. 😳 I feel so humbled and blessed, truly, with your warm words about my writing. And for you to say that my portrayal makes you fall further in love with this magical couple----that is really the ultimate compliment. 🤗

As for Sanskaar, I wanted to show how he is irrevocably and inexorably drawn to Swara, and to her intense adoration for him. Though he consciously hasn't remembered too much about their time together at all, his heart, his innermost subconscious and his very soul; all recognize her. They are such passionately intertwined twin souls after all----they would always recognize their mate at a subliminal level.

Can't even wait for the next update.don't want your chapters too ever stop..want to read on and on..

Have started preparing the outline for Chapter 5. 😊 I should have it up during the course of this week. I guess it should complete this Fic; though I might have a small epilogue as well. (Haven't decided on that finally as of now). I will surely come back with another fic, though, all going well. 😊

Piya