SwaSan SS: The Postern of Fate: Epilogue 2 (Final) updated on Page 48 - Page 23

Originally posted by: Sakkiyah

Eagerly waiting for your next update...
Iam waiting for Sunday...

Originally posted by: piccola1

Superb update! Love the emotional conflict so artfully described..WHY cant our CVs show this for our Swara on tv?

Waiting to relish the next bit, Viji !

Originally posted by: svg98

Hello..

Hi My Dear Piya 🤗 🤗

Me again..I don't know whether I have said this before..but u are an amazingly beautiful writer and that was a mind blowing update u just wrote..u breathe life into Swara and Sanskar literally..

I know there is supposed to be no "Thanks" between pals----but I can't help but thank you from the bottom of my heart, for your very warm and motivating words. I always cherish your comments. Your detailed, in depth reading; your amazingly analytical, perceptive and insightful replies, the keen interest you show in reading and discussing the story. It just leaves me feeling so very touched and blessed, trust me. Your feedback means a lot!🤗 🤗

Coming to the update..The beginning was absolutely beautiful..this is the Swara I always wanted to see..yearning every moment every second for Sanskar..the comparison to the cranes for magical..the symbolism was epic..Sansake and Swara are exactly like them..two halves of a single soul..if anything happens to the first half the second half would wither away slowly in the pain of separation..the scene of Sanskar falling from the cliff was somewhat like the show but still had a huge lot of difference at the same time..Swara pining for Sanskar..it has always been my secret wish to see that..every time one or the other way Sanskar is the one who suffers the most..pines for love.. But reading this story I know Swara love'e Sanskar with the same intensity as that of him..the scenes of Sanskar falling from the cliff had the power to send waves of pain right through one's heart..the family emotions were also portrayed wonderfully..everyone lost a huge part of their lives.. But everyone believed at some point of time that Sanskar is not there and as expected Swara refused to believe that.. It couldn't have been possible..Sanskar promised that they will spent their lives together and she knows he never breaks his promises.. She was alive that was proof enough to that Sanskar is alive too..three months..anybody would give up but the she didn't..the nightmares of her having that scene repeatedly losing him every night must have been so painful..but her faith stood like a strong pillar..he was her center of universe..now the sun can may hide sometimes but always rise..

I really wanted to explore the back story for Swara, sketch her childhood in a way that would explain her intense desire for a loving relationship, based on trust, faith, adoration and fidelity. The cranes were indeed a symbol for that, they are revered for their devotion to their mate. This really reflected Swara's intense love for Sanskaar, and her belief in his survival as well. They complete and complement each other so well, they really are two halves of a seamless whole. Once simply cannot exist without the other. Am so very happy that you liked the portrayal of Swara's unshakable belief----that since she was still breathing and alive, Sanskaar just had to be, too.

Part-B was soothing literally..Swara seems to have seeped into his soul at the first sight all over again..it was as if Sanskar fell for her the moment she came dashing is his arms..you know it was i felt like I have started watching their love story once again..just the other way round..Swara already in love with him..and Sanskar in confusion and dilemma..She blushing prettily at Sanskar's snide glances at her underneath his long lashes was like first rays of their love..Swara is so innocent..she don't even have an idea what's is going on his handsome husband's head..Sanskar's pride knowing Swara is his and his choice of manglsurtra could made my heart flutter..It is so Sanskar..I knew Sanskar can never hurt Swara..his pain thinking what he might have done to her and when her eyes teared talking to him how his ring came with her proofed this very well. Sanskar might be in anger and confusion by his slowly incoming memories but I know as Swara would tell him of their marriage..his doubts on their marriage being a loved one will fade away..Swara's pain was so very evident..it brought tears to my eyes to see her mixing his and hers clothed just to fell him..clutching his ring to live though the nights of agony and despair was heart-wrenching..but it is also very evident at the same time that Sanskar's heart has recognized its other half..his eyes never leaving hers..raising of his heartbeat.. Thoughts of his wife..would surely down his revenge plan.. As he is still trying to bring his family down..this Sanskar really sends chill down your spine..but once he contact his detective and Nakul it may clear of his all doubts..
Sanskar thinking so deeply about his wife's beauty and their conversation about the bed was so intense and romantic..his mind seem to betray him..he already have started falling her and soon will not be able to control heart and it assures me to a certain point that even that memory of Swara taking a shot on him would not allow him to hurt her in any way..because if he hurt her it will not only shatter her but him too..he will not be able to live without her as is does not have the enought strength to stay away from her..just want him to believe Swara and in her love for him..trust her..because him doubting her love and their marriage can cause a lot of trouble..just want him to leave himself lose as u said like the ocean and let Swara the wave merge in to him..

Thanks so much for your lovely words about this part. I wanted to show that undeniable soul connect between SwaSan. Even though Sanskaar has no real memories yet of Swara, except that one single, incomplete one which causes him to doubt if she had tried to shoot him; he is unable to resist that pull towards her. From the start, he cannot but acknowledge the intense and pure adoration in her eyes for him. Despite all the doubts, all the uncertainty owing to his lack of memories for that 15 month period, he is still intensely drawn to her. And like you rightly said, how could he not be----she is his other half after all, his soulmate, his love, his wife.

The fact that Swara had obviously missed him so much did impact him deeply. Though earlier, he might have had a small doubt about whether she was putting on a farce, he could not but be affected by the obvious sincerity and love in her eyes for him. The way she had arranged their clothes to hand all together; the way she had cherished the ring which came off from his finger, the way she had carefully repaired and preserved the old, broken mangalsutra...all of this had an immense impact on him. He is still unsure about a lot of things, but he simply cannot hate her or try to hurt her. Even a remembered pain which causes her voice to tremble and tears to pool in her eyes, makes him feel a sharp agony in his own heart.

Ragini is going to play a very important part in their love story..she knows her guru very well and only she is the one who can tackle him now as you said when the friend consider himself as a foe..true Sanskar can never hurt Swara but still he needs to be back as he can hurt himself and everyone else if he continues to move the way he is doing right now..but it would amazing to see the guru and student amazing encounters again..that too for Swara where last time Ragini was the destroyer this time she would be the protector..

Yes indeed, as you would have seen in this chapter and now the next one (Chapter 4) as well, Ragini will play a major role. She herself, for a long time, had allowed her own goodness to be completely overcome by her negative emotions of jealousy, spite and malice; before she had sincerely repented for this, and tried to redeem herself. She is, therefore, very attuned to signs of negativity in others. And the way Sanskaar reacted, reminded her of the rather cunning and diabolical Sanskaar who had first entered their lives about 15 months back. This is definitely going to be a battle between the master and the acolyte, the expert guru versus the smart shishya. 😊 And Ragini, this time, is absolutely keen on making sure Swara does not get hurt. She knows Sanskaar will not and cannot voluntarily harm Swara----even the last time, he was not able to bear the sight of her pain. But Ragini certainly is worried, if Swara would have her heart broken if Sanskaar makes her feel he does not value her, thinks her love to be a farce, or cannot grow to love her again. Ragini's main intention is to ensure Sanskaar rediscovers/ recollects his immense love for Swara; and also, that he recalls his reconciliation with his family and does not try to plot their downfall again.

Again thanx for the beautiful update..can't wait to read more..update soon..as I say always just want to read your stories on and on..

Thank you, again, for this lovely comment. 🤗

Piya