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Posted: 8 years ago
#61
hey hi...
awesome update..
update next part soon..
so swasan plan is ready and on want to see how swasan will expose them...
awesome update ... post next part soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#62
Thanks dadi.
Raglak are drooping so low..

Precap is damn interesting..
Thanks
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Posted: 8 years ago
#63
Nivijo...
Read all chapter in one go...it was magnificent...enjoyed it...missing swasan moments...when will they realise their love..raglak plans something nasty...woondering how swasan will counter it...update soon..

Talia
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Posted: 8 years ago
#64

Hello guys. Aww plz don't get angry. I'm really sorry for being late. Kaan pakad ke maafi mangti hoon. But I have come back with new chapter. After reading this plz mujhe maaf kar do. Ready to jump into the the story. 3...2...1... Chalo.
Chapter 12

Everyone come down for breakfast. Laksh and ragini go to dadi to say their plan.
Laksh- dadi plan bohot simple hai. Ragini ne swara ke liye ek breakfast banaya hai jisme humne drugs milaye hain. Wo drug bohot powerful hai. Swara jaise hi use khayegi drug uspe asar karna shuru kar dega. She will behave like a talli aur pariwar wale ye samjhenge ki swara drugs leti hai. Isse pariwar wale swara se nafrat karne lagenge. Surely sanskar swara ko support karega jisse sab logon ko aur gussa aayega.( dadi plan is really very simple. Ragini has made something for swara in which we have mixed drugs. That drug is really powerful. Just as swara will eat it the drug will start affecting her. She will behave like a tipsy and family members will think that she takes drugs. This will make them hate her. Surely sanskar will support swara and because of this everyone will be more angry)
Dadi- theek hai. (ok)
They both leave towards the table.
Dadi( monologue)- hey bhagwan. Main swara aur sanskar ko ye bata bhi nahi sakti. Sab idhar hi hain. Kya karun. Haan wahi karti hoon.( oh god! I can't tell swara and sanskar also. Everyone are here only. What should I do. Yes I will do that)
Everyone settle near the table. Ragini goes to kitchen and brings swara's breakfast.
Ragini- swara humne ye tumhare liye specially banaya hai. Hum jante hain swara pichle kuch dino mein jo bhi hua theek nahi tha especially hum dono ke beech. hum chahte hain ki hum dono ke beech ke sare gile shikwe door ho jaye. is liye agar tum ise khaogi to hum samajh jayenge ki hum dono ke beech ab koi misunderstanding nahi hai. Plz swara.( swara I have made this especially for u. I know swara that what ever happened recently was not at all good especially between us both. I want all the misunderstandings to be cleared. So if u eat this then I will understand that now there is no misunderstanding between us. Plz swara)
Swara was quiet because she felt something fishy. She felt as if it was raglak's plan to defame her but she just can't blame them with out any proofs. She is not able to understand what to do. One side if she doesn't eat then family members will think bad about her and if she eats and some scene is created then also family members will blame her. Both the sides she will be blamed unnecessarily.
Swara gives a fake smile. When she was about to keep the spoon in her mouth some sound comes.
Ahhh mera kamar.( ahhh my back)
Yeah it was dadi who is pretending to have fallen down. Swara drops her spoon. Everyone rushes to her.
Sanskar- dadi kya (dadi what happened)
Dadi- Arre mera kamar. Pata nahi kis khambakth ne yaha pe pani dala. Meri haddi toot gayi hogi( my back. Don't know which idiot poured water here. My backbone is broken for sure)
Laksh- nothing happened to u dadi. Don't worry. Take her to bedroom. I will all the doctor.
Aadarsh and sanskar helped her till the bedroom and made her lay on the bed.
Soon the doctor arrived. The doctor asked everyone to go out from the room. Everyone left as per his instructions.
Doc was checking her.
Doc- aapko kuch nahi hua hai(nothing happened to u)
Dadi- mujhe pata hai. Ye natak hai apne pote aur bahu ko bachane ke liye. Sab ko plz aap ye batayiye ki mujhe aaram ki zarurat hai.( I know. This was a drama to save my grand son and daughtein law. After going out plz tell everyone that I need rest )
Doc- lekin main jhoot kaise( but how can I say lie)
Dadi- plz doctor. Hath jodti hoon ( plz doctor. I join my hands)
Doc- theek hai. Aap hath mat jodiye plz. Aap mujhse badi hain( ok but plz don't join hands. U are elder than me)

Doctor comes out. Everyone asks him how is she.
Doc- dekhiye pani me slip hone ki wajah se unhe kamar mein moch aa gayi hai. Unhe at least 1 week ke liye aaram ki zarurat hai. Ye pain killers unhe khane ke baad dijiye. Main chalta hoon.
Aadarsh goes to drop the doctor.
Everyone enter in her room.
Laksh- dadi ye kaise hua. ( dadi how did this happen )
Dadi- mujhe bhi nahi pata ki ye kaise hua. Main table ke paas aa rahi thi ki achanak slip ho gayi.( even I don't know how this happened. I was coming near the table and I slipped.)
Sanskar- koi Baat nahi dadi. Aap aaram ki jiye( it's ok dadi. U take rest)

Everyone leave her room.
Swasan room

Sanskar was working in his laptop and swara was roaming here and there in the room. Sanskar who watching this silently got pissed off and stopped working and went to swara.
He stopped swara and dragged her till the bed and made her sit. He sat beside her.
Sanskar- so may I know what is making swara the great behave like this.
Swara- I'm confused sanskar. When I was about to keep the spoon in my mouth dadi slipped.
Sanskar- swara waha pe pani gira hua tha so she slipped.( swara it was watery so she slipped)
Swara- nahi sanskar. Sanskar ye aisa ho sakta hai ki ragini and laksh planned something against me. Since dadi is pretending to be on their side it is obvious that they must have told her their plan and to save me she pretended to slip.
Sanskar- hmmm ye bhi ho sakta hai. Must say swara tum pe sangat ka asar ho raha hai. Good.
Swara- what! What did u say mr maheshwari. Sangat ka asar. What do u mean. Main pehele chalak nahi thi. ( what! What did u say mr maheshwari. Influence of company. What do u mean. I was not clever before)
Sanskar- I never said like that swara. It is u who is accepting that. With a smirk on his face.
Swara- u are so mean mr sanskar maheshwari .
Sanskar- is it mrs sanskar maheshwari.
Swara- yes yes yes she was standing so close to him.
Both of them were lost in each others eyes. This proximity was affecting them. Both of their breathing became shallow and heart was beating faster ( sanskar's bg in the background) sanskar was the one to break the trance.
Swasan(together)- sorry
Then they both look at each other and laugh.

Sujata who was seeing them from the door was finally happy to see her son smiling. She left from there after asking the Almighty to always protect them.


Precap- same as the previous.
Will disclose the suspense of the letter soon.
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Edited by Nivijo - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#65
Nivi...
Awesome update...

Dadi saved swara but scared if raglak get suspicious of dadi... swasan moments was fab...waiting for swasanlicious moments...praying like suju for their happiness..n mutual love confession...

Talia
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Posted: 8 years ago
#66
Nivi... Awesome update... 👏
Clever swara and season small nok jhok was good. Continue soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#67
nivi
awesome update
reveal about letter soon
what if raglak get suspicious over dadi
waiting for next part update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#68
Dadi is too Good..
Thank god Swara is safe
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Posted: 8 years ago
#69
Hello everyone. I'm so happy today. My holidays start from today. Yippeee. Isi khushi mein I thought to give u the 13th chapter. Have a happy time in reading. Hope I reach upto ur expectations.
Chapter 13

Raglak room
Laksh was roaming here and there and ragini was standing confused seeing him walking here and there.
Laksh- something is wrong.
Ragini- kya
Laksh- yes something is wrong. Today I felt something fishy in dadi's behavior.
Ragini- aapko aisa kyun lagta hai.( why do u think like that)
Laksh- like when swara was about to eat that time only dadi had to slip. Don't u feel ki kuch gadbad hai.
Ragini- offo laksh. Aap aisa kyun soch rahe hain. Aaj kismat ne swara ka sath diya. Is liye dadi slipped. Lekin har baar aisa Thodi naa hoga. Aap kuch zyada hi soch rahe hain. ( offo laksh. Why are u thinking like this. Today luck favored swara. That's why dadi slipped. But every time it will not happen like this. U r thinking too much)
Laksh- are u sure.
Ragini- haan laksh. Ye plan kamyab nahi hua to kya hua hum dusra rasta nikal lenge. Aap chinta mat ki jiye. Main aapko aise pareshan nahi dekh sakti.( yes laksh. What if this plan was not successful. We will find out another way. U don't take tension. I can't see u like this.)
Laksh- may be u r right. Main hi zyada soch raha hoon.


Swasan room
Both of them were laughing when swara's phone started ringing.
Swara- maa ka phone hai. Main aati ( it's maa's phone. I will just come)
Sansakr- ok.
And he again starts working in his laptop.
Swara goes to balcony and starts speaking with shomi.
Swara- hello maa. Kaisi ho aap. Dida kaisi hai.( hello maa. How are u. How is dida)
Shomi- hum theek hain swara. Tum batao tum kaisi ho aur sanskar kaisa hai. Tum use zyada pareshan to nahi kar rahi (we are fine. U tell how are u and sanskar. U r not troubling him )
Swara- maa kya main aap ko choti bachi lagti hoon. Jo sabko Pareshan karti hai. Waise aaj kal bohot pyar aa raha hai apne damad par. Beti ko to bhool hi Gaye.( maa do I look like a baby for u who always troubles others. But I am seeing maa now a days u are showering more love on ur son-in-law. U totally forgot ur daughter)
Shomi- nahi baba.
Swara-main mazak kar rahi thi maa. waise maa aapne call kyun kiya. Kuch hua kya waha pe. Main aaun kya in a tensed voice.( maa I was just joking. But why did u call maa. Anything happened there. Should I come.)
Shomi- tumhe aana to padega. Lekin Durga puja mein. Bhool gayi ho kya.( yes u should come. For Durga puja. U forgot.)
Swara- oh shit! I forgot maa. Main pakka aaungi. ( oh shit! I forgot maa. I will come there for sure)
Shomi- pure parivar ko bhi leke aana.( come with whole family)
Swara- maa woh( but maa)
Before she could say anything to shomi sanskar took the phone from her
Sanskar- maa aap bilkul fikar mat ki jiye. Hum sab aayenge celebrations ke liye.( maa u don't take tension. We all will come for the celebrations)
Shomi- theek hai. Acha ab main rakhti hoon. Bohot sara kaam baki hai ghar mein.(ok. I am cutting the call. I have lots of work)
She cuts the call.
Swara- sanskar tumne maa se aisa kyun bola ki pura parivar aayega. Agar koi nahi aayega to.( sanskar why did u say like this to maa. What if no one comes.)
Sanskar- don't worry swara. Sab log maan jayenge. Mere upar bharosa rakho. Ok
Swara- hmm
Sanskar- kya yaar phir se tension ke lines chehre pe. U know tension se chehre pe wrinkle jaldi aa jati hain and keeps on blabbering.( what yaar again tension lines on ur face. U know wrinkles will come if u take tension)
Swara was staring at him. That black jet hair, the black orbs, the muscles everything make him look perfect. She was just staring him without concentrating on what is he saying. He stops talking and looks at her. He waves his hand infront of her making her come back to real.
Sanskar- staring is rude
Swara- what
Sanskar- but u can stare ur husband. At that time ye wala rule apply nahi hota.
Swara- aisa kuch nahi hai.( nothing like that )
Sanskar- it's ok swara. Tumhara pati itna handsome hai. Chalta hai. No problem.( it's ok swara. Ur husband is very handsome. Not an issue)
Swara- uuu
Then they both start running in the room. Swara caught sanskar but then he landed on bed. He pulled swara along with him. Swara was on top of sanskar. Both of their hearts were beating very fast. They both were lost in each other's eyes.
Sanskar- swara tum mere upar ho( swara u are on me)
Swara- koi problem
Sanskar then rolls. Now he is on top of swara.
Sanskar- this is perfect. Giving a teasing smile
Swara- acha lekin mujhe to pehela position hi pasand hai.( but I liked the previous position)
She then rolls over him.
Swara- tumhe kya laga haan ki sirf tum flirt kar sakte ho.( what did u think haan ki only u can flirt)
Sanskar- my bad. But abhi plz uth jao mere upar se. ( my bad. Plz get up from me)
Swara- kyun mere sath flirt karne mein bohot maza aa raha tha.( why. U were enjoying when u were flirting with me)
Sanskar- acha baba main nahi karta tumse flirt. Sorry.( I will not flirt again. Sorry)
Swara- ab aaya na akal thikane mein ( now ur mind came to its correct place)
She gets down.
Sanskar- main bahar jaa raha hoon. Important office call ( I am going out. Important office call)
He turns to leave but turns around and says- aise hi haste rehna. Bohot khubsoorat lagti ho haste wakt ( always smile like this. U look beautiful when u smile.
He leaves. Swara smiles after listening this.

No precap.

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Sorry for the short update. But I wanted to show swasan scenes at the maximum. Do tell me how is it and what changes are to made through ur comments and replies.
Love
Nivi
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Posted: 8 years ago
#70
Aww.. Tum mere upar ho😳
Thanks for creating it again and adding few flavors to it...
Love you..
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