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Posted: 9 years ago
#51
Awesome junior... Just the way they used to be before in serial.. So their partners are helping them.. I'm happy that suju to join them..
Lovely update... Love you sis...

With love...

Kam...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update.
Waiting for plan executed
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Guys I promise that by every friday u all will get the updates. Wo kya haina Fridays ko main thoda free rehti hoon so u know.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hola guys. What's up! Did u all miss me. I missed all of u a lot. Aaj meri chuti hai to main aap ke liye 10th chapter update kar rahi hoon. Padhne ke baad comment zarur karna. Enough of my bakwas. Lets jump into the story.
Chapter 10
After a terrible breakfast everyone went to their respective rooms. Today all the men were at home.( why? Simply). All are in the hall chit- chatting.
Dadi- waise sanskar tumne kab gaana sikha hai. Bachpan se to tum wo baagwaani me shoukin the.
Everyone were curious to know how did get interest in singing.
Sanskar- actually dadi main jab ghar se bahar tha tab main business me involved tha. Lekin maine socha ki kyun na main kisi hobby ko develop karu isi liye maine singing choose kari thi.
Dadi- acha theek hai.
Everyone were again engaged in some talks. Just then post man comes to their house.
Swara- main dekhti hoon.
Swara goes to the door and receives the letter. She opens the letter and was happy but next moment shook her head negatively.
Swara- main ye nahi kar sakti.
She returns back to the hall.
Ap- kya hai swara beta
Swara- kuch nahi badi maa bas mera phone bill. Main kamre mein rakh ke aati hoon.
Ap- acha theek hai.
Swara goes to the room and keeps the letter in some corner of her Almirah. She closes the cup board and returns with a fake smile. Sanskar who saw this thought to ask her later as to what happened.
Ragini- maa khaane ka wakt hone ko hai. Kitchen mein chale Khana banane ke liye.
Ap- haan chalo.
All the women go to the kitchen and start making lunch.
Table
All were seated on the chairs. Pari. Swara and Ragini were serving everybody. Swara goes to dadi to serve her.
Dadi- rehne de chori main khud paros lungi. Tumhe kuch karne ki zarurat nahi hai.
Swara backs off.
Three of them sit on their chairs and start serving for themselves.
Swara was eating when sanskar held her hand. She signals him what. He signals are u okay. Swara signals what happened to me. I'm absolutely fine. Sanskar signals is that so.
Swara signals yes. Uttara who saw this started to tease them.
Uttara- bhai kuch to sharam karo. Ye dining table hai tumhara room nahi.
Sanskar gives her what expression.
Uttara- don't give such expressions okay. Mujhe bohot ache se dikh raha hai ki aap dono kya kar rahe ho. Table ke niche dono hath Pakad ke rakhe ho aur upar aankhon se bate kar rahe ho. Wah kya Baat hai.
Swasan were so embarrassed but sanskar managed to speak.
Sanskar- chup kar Uttara hamesha meri taang khichti rehti hai. Jab tumhari baari aayegi na tab dekhna sharam se laal ho jaogi.
Uttara- aisa kabhi bhi nahi hone waala hai.
Sujata- are bas bas tum dono ladna band karo. Bachon jaise lad rahe ho.
Sanutt- mom ye hamara pyar dikhane ka tarika hai.
Everyone smile seeing this cute bond. Everyone quickly complete their lunch.
Raglak room
Laksh - Ragini mujhe lagta hai ki Hume dadi se Baat karni hogi. Shayad wo humari madad kar sakti hain.
Ragini - lekin kaise laksh
Laksh- tumne aaj subah dekha na ki unhone swara ko kitna bura bhala kaha. Ho sakta hai ki agar hum unhe swara aur sanskar ke aur kaand ke bare me bataye to wo gusse mein aakar humari madad kar sakti hain
Ragini- aapka idea to acha hai laksh. Raat ko hum unse Baat karenge. Theek hai.
Laksh- haan theek hai.
Swasan room
Sanskar- kya hua swara tum itni pareshan kyun ho
Swara- sanskar mujhe bohot dar lag raha. Agar wo log humari jaal mein nahi phase to
Sanskar- aisa kuch bhi nahi hoga swara. Tum dekhna aaj raat tak wo log dadi ke paas zarur jayenge. Theek hai.
Swara-hmm.
Sanskar- waise swara mujhe nahi lagta ki sirf yahi Baat tumhe pareshan kar rahi hai. Aur kuch zarur hai
Swara(nervously)- na...nahi sanskar aisi koi Baat nahi hai. Tum to bas aise hi pareshan ho rahe ho. Agar kuch hoga to main tumhe bataungi naa. Kuch bhi nahi hai.
Sanskar( not satisfied)- okay. But agar kuch Baat hai to mujhe batana.
Swara- haan theek hai.
Night
Nobody was interested to have their dinner so everyone are in their respective rooms only. Laksh and Ragini thought this was the best time to talk to dadi. So they slowly went inside her room.
Laksh- dadi kya hum andar aa sakte hain
Dadi- haan andar aao naa beta. Kya Baat hai.
Laksh - dadi actually Hume aapse kuch zaruri Baat karni hai
Dadi- kya Baat hai
Ragini - actually swara aur sanskar ke baare mein
Dadi- un dono ke baare mein
Laksh- ji dadi
Dadi- tum dono pehele baitho.
They both sit on the couch.
Dadi- ab batao
Laksh- dadi swara aur sanskar ko ghar se bahar nikalne mein Hume aapki madad chahiye.
Dadi- un dono ne aisa kiya hi kya hai his ke liye tum unhe ghar se bahar nikalana chahte ho.
Ragini- dadi aap ye puchiye ki unhone kya nahi kiya hai. Itne sare kaand kiye hai un dono ne. Aap janti hain dadi wo swara drugs Leti hai. Pata nahi aaj tak kitne Ladkon ke sath ghumi hai.
Laksh- wo sanskar is ghar ko barbad karne ke liye aaya tha. Itna hi nahi usne ragini ko bhi apne taraf kar liya tha . Ye to acha hua dadi ki wakt rehte hi ragini ne mujhe sab kuch bata diya warna pata nahi kya hota.
Ragini- aap nahi janti dadi wo swara kitni characterless hai chi. Pehele kitne sare Ladkon ke sath ghumti thi. Uske baad uske haath mein laksh lage Lekin shadi wale din Mandap se bhag gayi aur ab sanskar se shadi karke is ghar me aa gayi.
Dadi( who pretends to be shocked)- kya un dono ne itna sab kuch kiya. To phir gharwalon ne unhe rehne kaise diya.
Laksh- aap janti hai na dadi ki papa kitne udaar hain. Unhone swara aur sanskar ke galtiyon ko maaf kiya aur unhe yaha rehne de rahe hain.
Dadi pls aap humari madad ki jiye un dono ko ghar se nikalne ke liye. Hume lagta hai wo dono aaj bhi kuch plan kar rahe hain. Mujhe to lagta hai ki unhe humari property chahiye.
Aap pls humari madad ki jiye.
Dadi( who pretends to think)- main kya tum dono ko soch ke kal bata sakti hoon.
Raglak- ji dadi
Ragini- dadi ab hum chalte hain. Pls aap kal apna decision batayiye.
Then they both leave.
Dadi chupke chupke se go to swasan room
Dadi- kya main andar aa sakti hoon
Swara- are dadi aap aayiye na. Permission kyun maang rahi hain.
She enters inside the room.
Sanskar- kya hua dadi. Is wakt aap yaha
Dadi- abhi abhi laksh aur ragini aaye the. Wo log meri madad maang rahe the.
Sanskar- aapne kya kaha dadi
Dadi- Maine kaha ki main sochke kal bataungi.
Sanskar- that's great. But aap itni disturbed kyun lag rahi hain
Swara- kya hua dadi
Dadi- Main to bas ye soch rahi thi ki koi itna ghatiya kaise ho sakta hai. Apne bhai behen ke bare itna ghatiya soch koi kaise rakh sakta hai.
Swara- un logo ne kya kaha dadi.
Dadi narrates whatever they have told her. Shock would be an understatement for swara and sanskar.
Swara- meri apni behen mujhe characterless samajh ti hai.
Sanskar- dadi aise logon ki baate Hume nahi Sunni chahiye. Kafi raat ho gayi hai. So jate hain.
Dadi- good night.
Sanskar- good night dadi.
Dadi leaves their room.
Swara- sanskar ragini
Sanskar- shhh. Unki baaton ko dil se mat lo swara.
Swara- Lekin
Sanskar-kuch nahi so jao.
Both of them sleep.

Precap- mission raglak ka bhanda phod starts.
Guess what was there in the letter.
Edited by Nivijo - 8 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55
awesome..
letter may be about her study/singing.. just guess...
update next part soon..
Edited by chinnni1992 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update.,but what is in d letter is it related for swara's dream of opening a music school
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nivu darling...
It was awesome update. I enjoyed it. The letter is about Swara's ambition.

How cruel raglak are. I loved dadi swasan bond. I can't understand fully coz hindi dialogues.. but I understand after reading many times sissy.

With love..

Kam..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Uttara is so cute..
Well done dadi..
Raglak are gonna be doomed..
Thanks
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello guys. How are you all doing? Hope you all are fine. Sorry for the late post.
@vaiyambar...- I'm sorry akka. I will try my best to give their dialogues in English but if not then surely will add translations.

Chapter 11
This morning brought a new hope for swara and sanskar. How can it not when they are all set to gather proofs to expose their siblings. Those siblings who have given only pain to them instead of love and affection.
They both are all set with their partners to expose ragini and laksh.
Swasan room
All of them are in swasan's room.
Dadi- plan ready hain na.( plan is ready, right.)
Sanskar- plan ready hai dadi. Bus use implement karna hai.
Sujata- to chalo implement karne ke liye.( then come we will implement it)
Swara- dadi aapko bohot saavdhaan rehna hoga kyunki wo dono itni jaldi se kisi ke upar bharosa nahi karte aur agar karte hain to us insaan ki har information unke paas hota hai.
(dadi you have to be very alert because they don't believe any one so easily and if they beleive anybody then they full information about that person)
Dadi- tu chinta mat kar. Wo log mujhe kuch nahi kar sakte.(dont worry. They can't do any thing to me)
All of them together- hum unki asliyat sabke saamne laakar rahenge( we will surely bring their truth infront of everybody)
Sujata and dadi go to their respective rooms.
Swara- sab theek ho jayega na sanskar( everything will become alright no sanskar)
Sanskar- sab kuch theek ho jayega swara aur agar nahi bhi hua na to hum dono sath milakar sab theek kar denge okay(everything will become alright swara and even if it docent happen we both together will make everything alright, okay)
Sanskar- now come we have to go down. Aarti ke liye late ho jayenge.(we have to go otherwise we will be late for the Aarti)
They both go down where pari has already started the Aarti. They quickly come and stand behind ap and dp. Pari turns and gives Aarti to everyone. Everyone take Aarti and the prashad. Everyone disperse to their rooms as today was Saturday.
Laksh and ragini go to dadi's room where already dadi was waiting for them and swasan hiding near the washroom listening to their talks.
Laksh- dadi kya socha aapne. Aap hamari madad karengi naa.( what did you decide dadi. You will help us naa)
Dadi bends her eyes and secretly looks towards swasan. They show thumbs up sign.
Dadi- theek hai main tumhari madad karungi Lekin meri ek shart hai ki agar tum dono ki sachai sabke saamne aa gayi to tum mera naam nahi loge sabke saamne. Bolo shart manzoor.( okay I will help you but if you both get exposed then you should not take my name infront of everyone. Tell me if you agree to my condition)
Laksh and ragini think for a while and- theek hai dadi Hume aapki shart manzoor hai.( okay dadi we accept your condition)
Dadi- to bolo phir kya plan hai unhe ghar se nikalne ka.( then tell me what is the plan to throw them out of the house)
Laksh- plan bohot simple hai dadi. Hume un dono ke characters ko sabke saamne degrade karna hoga taki papa khud un dono ghar se dhake maar ke nikal de.( the plan is simple dadi. We have to degrade their characters so much that papa will himself throw them out of the house)
Dadi- theek hai. Kya karna hai pls baad mein batana abhi mujhe bohot thakaan mehsoos ho rahi hai.( okay fine. What am I supposed to do pls tell me afterwards. I'm feeling very tired)
Ragini- okay dadi. Abhi hum chalte hain.( we are leaving now)
They both leave and swasan come out from their hiding place.
Dadi- tum dono ne suna na. Abhi bhi tum chahte ho ki in dono ko doosra mauka diya jaye.( you both heard what they said. Now also you want to give a second chance)
Swara- dadi wo dono chahe jitna bhi plotting kar le hamare khilaf Lekin wo dono hain to hamare hi bhai behen na to un dono ko maaf karna hamare liye bohot asan hai. Agar wo log apne galtiyon ke liye pachtava kare to hum un dono ko maaf kar sakte hain.( dadi how much ever they conspire against us but at the end they are our brother and sister only na. If they regret to what they have done we will forgive them easily)
Sanskar- dadi hum dono unhe ghar se bahar nahi nikalna chahte. Hum to bas ye chahte hain ki unhe apne galtiyon ka ehsaas ho jaye aur kuch nahi.( dadi we both don't want to throw them out of the house.we just want them to realize their mistakes nothing else)

Precap- Raglak ki chal padegi unhi par bhari.

Edited by Nivijo - 8 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
Hey Nivi darling... This was a wonderful update.. but you maintained the suspense about the letter.

First of all thank you soo much for adding translation.. that to for me... Mmmuah for that..

Soo the plan is on.. hope they'll expose them to the family... Ohh why swasan are soo nice.. Why can't they throw them out of the house...

Update soon sissy...

With love..

Kam...

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