The Heart Tells No Lies- A SwaSan Mini Shot - Page 5

Originally posted by: Alvapriya

Dearest Shruti ...
I don't think I need to say this was awesome , do I ?
The fact that you are the author... gives the guarantee that it has to be brilliant...

Coming to the OS, it was lovely reading this one...

Beautifully penned down Swara's battle in her mind due to all the sudden happenings in her life... sudden piece of information she got that the person who tried to kill her [ Credit goes to her all time flashing memories... though I am still wondering how Rajat is disappeared from them 😆 ] is her husband...

I loved how Swara's heart didn't take any time in recognising Sanskar inspite of his disguise ...

No use of saying I wish we could get to see this in show... coz cv's are definitely not gonna show something like this ...

I am anyway skipping swaragini nowadays, tired of hearing Khooni Khooni 😆... but waiting for Kissan's entry...

But awesome shot ...
Loved it a lot ...
Thanks for the pm...

- Harshada

Originally posted by: dilwali

hey Shru I loved it a lot n you have portrayed swara's feelings in true way n I m completely in love wid ur writing n waitinng for ur book which u hv promised to me I just want the same monologue of Swara in the show as well kash asa hota ki tum...
I know u ll understand my emotions
lots of luv

Originally posted by: ..NightDragon..

Unreserved

Shru... 🤗
Its one absolutely delightful read. 😳 After recent episodes and OLVs, this OS is like a balm to my heart. Like always, you have done an amazing job in explaining her perspective. Poor girl, her heart and mind is in constant conflict.😳😆 You know I seriously hate CVs for not including monologues when needed. 😡 Just like earlier during malkin track, they hadn't given us Sanskaar's POV and now they are doing the same with Swara. I know its useless to wish but still my heart wants to see something like this in show where Swara is alone and a war is raging between her heart and brain. Kissan and Swara meeting; again you have done wonders in describing it. 😳 And once again its a wishful thinking but damn why ?? why cant cvs show something like this. Here in this shot you have so beautifully managed to capture the purest bond SwaSan share.(** which is conveniently forgotten by CVs; just to shove down USH down our throats 😡😡**). I absolutely loved how her heart and soul recognized him under all those disguising he was wearing and finally decided to go with her heart. 😳 Okay, so long story short , you have again cast your secret magic with words and made my day/night. 😳

With tons of love,
Nitzy 😳

Originally posted by: Princess_Mansi

Hey Shruti

The write-up was amazing

So sorry was too busy with my personal stuff

I have to catch up with the dark knight

Will surely check all the PM and give my views

I loved the way Swara was portrayed here

I find her nowadays in the serial a psycho

Loved it

Do continue it

Thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: Apudeep

Hello Shruti 😊

Beautiful OS 👏

The ending must be different from the show, I can assume😕

Loved it, write more 😳

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Thank you so much Aparna (I have that right?) 😃

So glad you liked it! Oh yes, there is no chance this would happen in the show 😆, it's one of my frequent alternative takes I like to dream up:) This was my "taking a break" piece after just finishing a big FF also on SwaSan. If you were ever interested in my other writings, they are all on the Index at the bottom of my biggie 😊. Thanks so much for appreciating this!

Love,

Shruti x

Originally posted by: Apudeep

I haven't finished Dark Night till now, so refrained myself from commenting. That is an epic, I just enjoying and enchanted by it. 😳