The Heart Tells No Lies- A SwaSan Mini Shot

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

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The.Lannister

@The.Lannister

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Posted: 9 years ago

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It is so good to know what Swara is feeling, the reason even behind her being unreasonable. I wish the show spent a little time on this too rather than showing her being such a complete shrew & constantly screaming Khooni Khooni 🤢 It is not even a question of whether Swara is right or wrong but more a question of why they never show what prompts her actions Instead they end up making Swara look fickle when they dont explain what causes her to react in a particular way unlike how you have done in this OS. Good work Shru👏

How I wish in the show too Swara recognizes Kisan herself instead of Sahil exposing him or Sanskaar telling it to her. I want her to recognize the Sanskaar hidden under those layers of cheap & I want her to ponder long & hard about how much this man must love her to go to such extents for her. Well a girl can dream...😆

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Nityah

@-StarlitFire-

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Shru... 🤗
Its one absolutely delightful read. 😳 After recent episodes and OLVs, this OS is like a balm to my heart. Like always, you have done an amazing job in explaining her perspective. Poor girl, her heart and mind is in constant conflict.😳😆 You know I seriously hate CVs for not including monologues when needed. 😡 Just like earlier during malkin track, they hadn't given us Sanskaar's POV and now they are doing the same with Swara. I know its useless to wish but still my heart wants to see something like this in show where Swara is alone and a war is raging between her heart and brain. Kissan and Swara meeting; again you have done wonders in describing it. 😳 And once again its a wishful thinking but damn why ?? why cant cvs show something like this. Here in this shot you have so beautifully managed to capture the purest bond SwaSan share.(** which is conveniently forgotten by CVs; just to shove down USH down our throats 😡😡**). I absolutely loved how her heart and soul recognized him under all those disguising he was wearing and finally decided to go with her heart. 😳 Okay, so long story short , you have again cast your secret magic with words and made my day/night. 😳

With tons of love,
Nitzy 😳

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Dear Shru,

And indeed, that heart tells no lies. You have captured Swara's turmoil so flawlessly, as her mind battles each of the facts, it remembers, recollects and reconnoiters. Sanskaar shooting at her - fact, she falling off the cliff - fact, married to Sanskaar - fact, not remembering anything of her life for almost a year - fact. Then her heart counters - she should be hating the man who shot her, but cannot; she noted guilt and an unnamed emotion in his eyes, the intensity of which frightens her, she screams that she hates him and that hurts her instead.

And what a resolution to this conflict - she crashes into him and as usual, he holds her before she falls. And in spite the ridiculous get up, despite the fact she cannot see his eyes, she does recognise him. And in the final vindication for the heart, her mind gives the first rational clue - if he indeed wanted to murder her, why would he be pulling such a ridiculous stunt? So she decides to hear her heart - rather than admit that she has recognised him- asks what she has been wanting to know - "Who are you?".

Loved this OS and it quite makes up for the horror unleashed by that video of Rockstar Kissan (I wished I was dead after I watched that - somethings just cannot be unseen)🤢

love,

Nyna

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Shall un res after I return home, am out of station for my cousin's wedding, Shru.

Love

Viji

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 9 years ago

shru🤗 ..just in one line ..this os is dhak dina din dha in kisan's style⭐️

Started off with swara's struggle her fight with conflicting emotions ,totally loved how you incorporated promo and OLV and everything is coming alive more beautifully in your words 😳 and swara recognized him I am sure which will not happen in SR but that was 👍🏼 bang on 👏

lol and kissan ..that line of village bumkin dressed as brassy rock star🤣 it just cracked me up😆 and I am sure we all will be soon singing dhak dina din in Kissan's style after his entry

Love

Lucky

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manasi

@manasie23

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Posted: 9 years ago

One word to describe this- BEAUTIFUL

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shamina

@Sakkiyah

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Posted: 9 years ago

Shruti...my friend.
In one word it is beautiful.
The thoughts of Swara was beautifully portrayed.she was in a mess.her heart was saying something and her brain was not accepting it.she was thinking about Sanskar.she was trying to neglect the thoughts.but it was impossible for her.but why?the answer was unknown to her.
At last the kissan's entry...it was awesome.
She identified him.but her brain was not ready to accept it.
What will happen next?
Eagerly waiting for your next update
Thanks for the pm
With lots of love
Shamina

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swathi90

@swathi90

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

Indeed a much needed update dear a nice one.u really portrayed swara feeling her turmoil very well.feeling bad for sanskar😭 but I know this track s going to be 'very memorable.waiting for kissan leela😉

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: lucky.m

shru🤗 ..just in one line ..this os is dhak dina din dha in kisan's style⭐️

Started off with swara's struggle her fight with conflicting emotions ,totally loved how you incorporated promo and OLV and everything is coming alive more beautifully in your words 😳 and swara recognized him I am sure which will not happen in SR but that was 👍🏼 bang on 👏

lol and kissan ..that line of village bumkin dressed as brassy rock star🤣 it just cracked me up😆 and I am sure we all will be soon singing dhak dina din in Kissan's style after his entry

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Lucky

Lucky dearest 🤗

Wah wah, if I can earn that "dhina dhin dha" accolade for this total time pass scene I am super happy! 😆 I have this mad desire to watch Ram Lakshan again 😆. Oh yes, of course in the show she is no way going to recognise him but Lanny and I had this discussion where we both had said, having co-incidentally thought the same thing, that it would be so great if she did recognise him and still let him carry on . Total wishful thinking on my part of course but makes me feel better given the current angst and in anticipation of our wannabe rockstar who is a bumpkin 😆 but an adorable one 😳. Thanks so much for this Lucky- mmmwah!

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