SwaSan OS - A Love Like None Other - Page 8

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Posted: 9 years ago
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This was such a beautiful read !Loved it !
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Soundharya_01

Res..
*UNRES*
nyna .. i am sorry for the delay dear .. hope you will forgive me

Hey Soundharya, Please no apologies - life can be downright hectic😊

This is the best OS I have read till now. You have done a great work . The story is simple but, the way you have written and described makes it more Beautiful .

That comment truly leaves me happy and thrilled☺️

SwaSan's first meeting in the hospital and sanskaar's getting fascinated towards her Aww.. it is so sweet and since then Sanskaar's admiration and Attraction towards her ..

The height of soul connect, I had to write it that way to get over my frustration over the way the soul connect in the serial was murdered😉

Sahil here too ! I hate him .. Poor sanskaar .. But he has greatly masked his emotion ... I loved the way you described swara not opening his gifts for some reason .. But the shock was when she slapped him for kissing her and he smiled instead of any angry action .. He is very gentle

Sahil - not so bad, he knew Sanskaar loved Swara everyone did, but he also knew that she loved Sanskaar, which is why he never proposed. So it is okay

Then his behavior since then and swara feeling bad and missing his company .. And then the accident and sanskaar being the first to be informed and he rushing to see her .. I was feeling bad for him .. Even after so many humiliation he faced from her , he is always there for her and I feel Swara could have also undergone this pain too ..

True, Sanskaar really know how to love someone, it does not make any difference how they react, even if it hurts, you just keep loving them.

There childhood memories ..she protecting his bat and he being surprised by the little one ..was very funny .. She taking share of all his things not even leaving his books ! I loved these a lot

I had a blast writing those lines, too😃

At last Swara opening all the gifts and finding a infinity ring and realising her feeling was the most beautiful moment in the OS .. She feeling sad for not trying to understand it previously and all her family members knowing it and at night her father dropping her at MM .

Yes - finally Ms tubelight realises what the entire world knew about, which is why she had everyone's blessings.

SwaSan Union ! The best moment too ( I think all are best I am not able to differentiate between them ) and she repaying kisses on regular basis ..oh my ! It was like Much more on store ..

Yes - the repayment of the kisses - the only one where both the payer and payee seem to be loving it😉

Lovely ..It is ..Do write more I am craving for more from you but pls don't mind if I reply late !!

I will keep writing (I have ideas but currently my work is driving me up the wall I have so many pending res and my own SS to update.

Love

Soundharya..


Dear Soundharya,

Replied in blue above,

love,
Nyna
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: bones123

This was such a beautiful read !Loved it !


Dear Priya, (I hope I have got the name correct)

Thank you so much for reading and loving it.

love,
Nyna
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Posted: 9 years ago
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The os is really beautiful...
The concept of love...it is eternal,selfless...
You beautifully portrayed it...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sakkiyah

The os is really beautiful...

The concept of love...it is eternal,selfless...
You beautifully portrayed it...


Dear Shamina,

Thank you so much for your lovely comment.

love,
Nyna
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey Nyna :)
Though this is not directly related to this OS, Bt I wanted to ask you something since long! A request actually! Why don't you make an index for your writings!? I mean it will be easier to find your works!
Sorry if I bothered or offended you!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nupur_5

Hey Nyna :)

Though this is not directly related to this OS, Bt I wanted to ask you something since long! A request actually! Why don't you make an index for your writings!? I mean it will be easier to find your works!
Sorry if I bothered or offended you!


Dear Nupur,

Firstly, please no apologies, I am actually quite touched by your request.😳
An index- maybe I could, will do once sometime next week - this week is going to be quite hectic and I sneak into the forum whenever I can, (lunch times, boring meeting, now while watching Swaragini😆). But the index sounds nice, so once I do so, will send a pm to you😊

love,
Nyna
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nynaeve


Dear Nupur,

Firstly, please no apologies, I am actually quite touched by your request.😳
An index- maybe I could, will do once sometime next week - this week is going to be quite hectic and I sneak into the forum whenever I can, (lunch times, boring meeting, now while watching Swaragini😆). But the index sounds nice, so once I do so, will send a pm to you😊

love,
Nyna

Great then! An index of your works will be great!
Will be waiting for it 😃
And thank you so much for your consideration Mam 😆
Take care!
Lots of love :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey Nyna🤗
Chanced upon this one first thing in the morning😳...Such a heart-warming tale it is😭...Sanskaar's unconditional,overpowering,all-encompassing love for Swara❤️..I wonder if anyone can love the way Sanskaar does..so pure & undiluted...& with an unmatchable intensity❤️...I couldn't stop crying for a second😭...All those childhood memories,Sanskaar's gifts-that gold bangle with "Double-infinity" sign❤️ & the charms❤️,his letters especially the last one💔😭...
Swara's love for Sanskaar has always been the neglected & unacknowledged one😔..She tried all possible means to suppress her love,to ignore the call of destiny..She kept battling with her heart which seemed to beat only for Sanskaar💔..But finally her love could conquer all ...How it was only & only him who occupied her thoughts when that truck was about to hit her❤️...Loved her break-down in front of Sanskaar...

Totally agree with your Sun & Earth analogy...Their love is equivalent indeed😳

Beautifully written😳..Loved it to bits..
-Mishti
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: SizzleDazzle

Hey Nyna🤗

Chanced upon this one first thing in the morning😳...Such a heart-warming tale it is😭...Sanskaar's unconditional,overpowering,all-encompassing love for Swara❤️..I wonder if anyone can love the way Sanskaar does..so pure & undiluted...& with an unmatchable intensity❤️...I couldn't stop crying for a second😭...All those childhood memories,Sanskaar's gifts-that gold bangle with "Double-infinity" sign❤️ & the charms❤️,his letters especially the last one💔😭...
Swara's love for Sanskaar has always been the neglected & unacknowledged one😔..She tried all possible means to suppress her love,to ignore the call of destiny..She kept battling with her heart which seemed to beat only for Sanskaar💔..But finally her love could conquer all ...How it was only & only him who occupied her thoughts when that truck was about to hit her❤️...Loved her break-down in front of Sanskaar...

Totally agree with your Sun & Earth analogy...Their love is equivalent indeed😳

Beautifully written😳..Loved it to bits..
-Mishti


Dear Mishti,

The Sun and the Earth analogy - it is indeed an equivalent love, right, very much like Sanskaar and Swara. They will always love each other though the intensity and the way they express it would vary.
Sanskaar - no one can love like him - with that all encompassing, soul crushing blinding adoration - Swara is truly blessed that the first person she sees (almost😆) on being born is her soulmate. But then she had to take her own sweet time to recognise, so long that the fates decided to be kind to Sanskaar.

That gift opening scene - I should be sorry for making you cry, well I felt very emotional penning in down, so as a writer, I am happy that it was emotional enough to bring a few tears to your eyes. Those gifts were a testimony to how much he loves her and how well he knows her.
A near death experience made Swara realise exactly what Sanskaar was to her, and in this case, Sanskaar would agree with the Bard - All is well that ends well.😊

love,
Nyna
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