SwaSan OS - A Love Like None Other - Page 7

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Dear Tia,</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">No, I am actually a Chartered Accountant (sometimes a shattered one, on account of the work pressures😉) but I have always loved mathematics and numbers. Why did you ask BTW?</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Nyna</font>

Originally posted by: dreamy.tiara

Hi Nyna :)

You are a CA..!. That's awesome (though I didn't expect, because you write so beautifully 😊, I know the idea is odd and cliche 😆). I asked for two reasons - First, and obvious reason, the way you described the difference between equal and equivalence, you seemed a mathematics student (or person) to me. Second reason, I am a majoring in mathematics right now, so I seem to catch any little mathematical signals 😆..
Feels good to know that you love numbers :)...

Unresed on pg-6, do check it out..:)

Tia

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Nyna dearest...

It was breathtakingly amazing ..fabulous OS...swara has tortured n hurted sansku alot...but finally she realised..ahhh...lovely

after watching disasterous swaragini episodes..this is like a soothing balm...loved it tilll moonn back...

Waiting for more...

Love

Talia

Originally posted by: dreamy.tiara

Beautiful..❤️

Res because I want to be elaborate😊... By the way, are you also a Mathematics student?

Unres (sorry, for being so late. Too much work at college)

No apologies, Sweetheart - too much work is a fact of life

Hi Nyna :)

This was so so beautiful.. I am in love with the alternate universe you create with SwaSan as childhood buddies. Their bond is so endearing - that soulmate moment at hospital, Sanskar finding Swara cute in his T-shirts, Swara defending his bat (I remembered a childhood incident at this 😆), little joys over ice-creams and chocolates, standing for each other - and how the bond slowly matures into love, so beautifully written. I can't blame them for falling for each other, it was meant to be😊..

After the CVs so marvellously butchered the cosmic connection, I wanted something to make up for that. And nothing better than childhood sweethearts, who should have had their affection mature to friendship and blossom into love. But then life rarely goes down the expected paths. And the bat incident brings back your childhood memories - I take a couple of brownie points here😆

Well, I had expected Swara to slap Sanskar; but I didn't expect him to give smiles after that, that is pure "Sanskarish" attitude 😆. I find Swara little immature at how she deals with it - pushing him away, and even dating someone else. Poor Sanskar was so hurt, still he stood by her constantly, until her foolish behaviour. I remember Gone with the wind's Scarlet'O Hara at this point and how she drove away Butler..but she was more bratty than Swara. Swara is too confused with her feelings.

Sanskaar realised he did cross a line but then decided against actually apologising (tell the truth, that would have ruined it even further, and it is more fun this way - how would Swara get those 5.2 trillion kisses otherwise😉) so he tried to laugh it off.

Swara is actually quite immature - remember she was only sixteen when this incident happened and that would be the most rebellious of all teenage years. And once she embarked on this route, she just could not turn back - she knows that she needs him, constantly but refuses to accept that she loves him.

Swara is too cute 😆, she didn't want to turn nine because she wanted to be forever. I was touched at each of Sanskar's gift, especially the gold bangles with double infinity. It is true that we learn the value of something only when it is out of our reach. Glad that she finally realised that she running away from her own existence. What a heart warming confession it was! Especially loved the part where she asks Sanskar to give back her kiss 😊 He must have taken aback to hear it from the same girl who slapped him over it.

Oh, she was a cute kid, indeed. Sanskaar gifts, the value lay more in the meaning behind each one, without that they would be mere baubles, albeit expensive ones. It took Swara to almost die to realise that without Sanskaar she was truly not alive.

You did love Swara asking the repayment, I had great fun writing it out and computing the actual quantum too. Taken aback - very briefly, he is so going love repaying that one borrowed kiss.☺️

I am particularly happy that your Sahil is not an obsessive lover and is done with pretty quickly 😆

I was sure he would not turn obsessive, which is the only reason I decided to use the readily available name rather than go about creating a whole new name (a little lazy😊Swara needed a diversion, she got one. End of his role.

I am in love with Rumi's quotes. Loved each bit of the story...:)

Rumi's quotes- are so wonderfully mystical and profound. Thank you for loving my story😊

Lots of love,
Tia

Originally posted by: memmu

Hello!!

Hello and welcome to the forum.😊

Okay I m totally out of words!!! I guess now I realise what is the meaning of speechless...

This os is by far the best os i have ever read n i guess i would ever read...

After every line , my heart would just say beautiful.n i mean it when i say that.bcz it took me almost 3 hours to read this os...bcz i would read every line, every paragraph again n again just to feel it all the more.

Your words leave me humbled and very happy (ecstatic is a better word)😳 And you re read each line and para, again and again☺️

N I really liked the incident when baby swara smiled at sanskar.bcz it refreshened my memory of holding my lil bro first time in my arms when I was 7 n u know , when I took him in my lap he gave a sweet smile n then a very short giggle n my aunt there had told me that it was the first time he smiled.

After reliving the moment I feel more love towards my bro n the fact that his 11th birthday is on 11 i.e on Saturday made me to settle my fight with him .which in deed was a big one as today he got some scrathes on his arms bcz of my nails.

Okay I think I had bored u enough by narrating my own tale.

That struck a chord! I am quite happy that it brought back your childhood memory and also help you make up with your brother😊. Baby brothers are pure fun, I have one (he no longer is a baby, quite grown up but once an elder sister always an elder sister😉). And it is your brother's birthday on Saturday, please wish him from me too (as Sanskaar wrote' "Many happy returns of the day. Have a great day and a great year ahead")

I m new to forum n not familiar with the ways n still needs to know about many things here.I don't know anybody here . as u can see with the number of comments.the fact that I m not good at words doesn't help either.

I have tried my best to convey how much this os touched my heart but I m afraid will never be able to that considering to my pea sized vocabulary n even smaller brain.But believe me when I say that all these words are from my heart bcz I have never said anything like this for anyone.also ur os has forced me pen down this long comment( when I usually don't write more than 2-3 lines).

You are new to the Forum, today - tomorrow you would have friends and maybe even write a few stories of your own. And for somebody who states that she is not good with words, you have written a beautiful comment, one that has made me a little misty eyed. While it is quite lovely to read comments that my friends have written for me, it is always gratifying when someone new comes along, stumbles on my story and then takes out the time to write a comment. That is a reward in itself. So please, do not think so low of yourself. As I wrote above, I am humbled and happy beyond measure.😊

I would also like to mention about the note sanskar wrote on swara's 24 birthday that brought tears in my eyes .I m myself astonished by the fact that how just 5-6 lines can made somebody cry.

Hats off to u.

That note - I myself was a little teary eyed when I wrote that, so when any reader confess to tearing up on that note, as a writer I am very very pleased. And sometimes it is those few lines which actually say a lot - Sanskaar managed to convey his deep eternal love for Swara and the sorrow he felt when he realised that he might lose her forever.

N if u don't mind plz give ur short intro plzz.

I am Nyna, a Chartered Accountant - and as I refuse to be ' 'creative' with my numbers in my professional life, I write stories on SwaSan (well, not written many, still...) where I let my imagination go. I currently have another SS (short story) going on - Sweet Deals. Do read if time permits. Will send you a buddy request too.

And...would you let me know you name, if you do not mind? It would be nice to address you by your name!

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Hi,

Replied in blue above.

love,

Nyna