SwaSan OS: Unexpected Gifts - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: The.Lannister



Hi Sakshi 🤗

Swara kuch bhi bhool sakti hai par jasoosi? Nah! Never!😆

Another puppy lover I see😆😳I love puppies as well. Arent they the cutest thing ever to walk the Earth


I know!! Dogs and puppies are just the cutest!! I'm a biggg dog lover!! Just love them! Can do anything for dogs<3
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Res

Unres!

Dear Shruti,

Late to unres - as usual - I seem to have a penchant for delayed Unres.😭

The start - Swara hacking tomatoes (it appeared she was sort of imagining that she was hacking Sanskaar - how dare he not wish her !) And Sujata blessing her to have loads of kids (seriously - but then I do love this Sujata).

So Swara is at Maheshwari Mansion - which is logical given that she is the one suffering from amnesia and not the rest of the families (wonder how it would be treated in the serial😕). And Daadi is the one who sends her packing with support from her father - I like them too (quite a refreshing change from the black/ blacker / blackest shaded Dadi and the Baba-who-discovers-a-spine-in-the-most-unnecessary-moments characterisation in the serial)

But there was one minor hiccough for me - Sahil - her friend (???) guess that is what Swara thinks of him but still... 😡And thank you for not mentioning that even he wished her while her husband who loves her a lot did not wish her.

And then her master plan - of using her defective ..err...detective skills to prove that Sanskaar is a murderer.
But then Sanskaar is wrought of a different mettle - that fact that she is alive, hale and hearty, and in front of his eyes and in his home was enough for him. For his is a love like none other. So though Swara, expects him to be upset with her being angry with him, in reality, she is upset with his indifference.
Ragini, did hit the nail on the head, and Swara dismisses her as a hopeless romantic.

And finally the gift - he got her, did he not, completely with his gift. Then when she finds herself in his arms, her heart remembers! Her mind will need some more time (***sigh***)

Such a lovely OS. Just one request - please write mores OS on this ML (you will - you have got us hooked) and maybe you could simply reserve the at least first two pages of the next post so that all of the OS would be on consecutive pages. (lazy me😆 )

love,
Nyna



Yayya you got the hacking thing😆 That is what I had intended it to be like😆 Sujata belongs to the category who think couple ke beech ka harr problem bacche solve kar dete hai😆

Even here daadi has no love for Swara, its more like "log kya kahenge" I guess. But then even that works for us😉😆 As long as Swara is back in MM we dont care about the how's?😆


@Sahil: oops! I had it planned that he had wished her too but I think I forgot to mention it while writing😆

defective skills 🤣 ab Swara jiski hormonal problem hame pata hai, she will naturally find Ragini a hopeless romantic😆


Thanks for this wonderful comment 🤗 I will definitely write if I can think of more😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53

Thanks😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54
It was just sooo awesome ...it left me out of words...plzzz continue this if u can ...its was sooo adorable...n truly here sanskar is the most ideal husband...means I will really wish if anything like this over CVS could show in the serial ...plzzz continue this I want tonsee more of this version of ml track... Plzzz
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55
Lanny dear...
After getting depressed seeing sansku in pain...this OS was antidepressant...

Swara after ML...can feel his love..whole concept was great..no sahil...only swasan..wish this happen in show...no words for sansku..he is heavenly...muahhh

This OS made me sooo happy..i cant describe..im all smiling...thank u...

Love
Talia
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
Shruti such a cute and fabulous OS... Keep coming up with more such Oneshots 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: memmu

It was just sooo awesome ...it left me out of words...plzzz continue this if u can ...its was sooo adorable...n truly here sanskar is the most ideal husband...means I will really wish if anything like this over CVS could show in the serial ...plzzz continue this I want tonsee more of this version of ml track... Plzzz


Thanks a lot😳 Sanskaar is an ideal husband not just here but almost everywhere



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: krishuuu

Lanny dear...

After getting depressed seeing sansku in pain...this OS was antidepressant...

Swara after ML...can feel his love..whole concept was great..no sahil...only swasan..wish this happen in show...no words for sansku..he is heavenly...muahhh

This OS made me sooo happy..i cant describe..im all smiling...thank u...

Love
Talia


Thanks Talia😳

Glad I could make you smile after such a heart breaking few weeks😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: manasie23

Shruti such a cute and fabulous OS... Keep coming up with more such Oneshots 😃


Thanks a lot Manasie😳 I will definitely try😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
Such a cute and adorable OS.. I loved it 😃

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