SwaSan OS: Unexpected Gifts - Page 3

Originally posted by: ..NightDragon..

reserving .. 😈 and I promise I will unres tomorrow ...

Unreserving... Lanny... you do know na I love you for writing this... Its is perfect read for going straight to SwaSan heaven. ❤️ Currently I am floating there after re-reading it Loved it immensely... From Galodia telling Swara what really happened, not only that but also standing beside Sanskaar. How I loved that they will rather believe Swara is crazy than to doubt him 😈 Shomi... you go Mama !! you're daughter is stubborn mule ... play as many tricks with her to set her on right path... We are with you.. 😈 😆 And Sanskaar ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ this man... how much I love him... He is just content with her being in front of his eyes alive and doing jasoosi on him 😆 😆 Loved that he is giving her space but not letting her forget that he is there on every turn she takes... Chocolates and Puppies ❤️ such a cute and perfect gift. No one can resist that. Just by reading description about the puppies, my heart went awww ❤️ ❤️ About Swara... I would say poor girl... you're doomed 😃 😈 Your this mission of finding proof AGAINST Sanskaar will fail spectacularly 😆 😆 as well as trying to not fall for him 😈 Seriously if something like this happen it will be great because with her heart ..Sanskaar will be on her mind 24x7. Just like he is here in this OS 😈 Unknowingly she has so many expectation from him. I love this heart vs. mind war she is experiencing here... 😳 And the SwaSan scene in the last my heart is fluttering like crazy ... such a sweet.. romantic scene ❤️ ❤️ Lanny.. really loved this OS... as always you have created magic with simple words and situations. Will be looking forward for more of your work...

with loads of love,

Nitzy 😳

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Res res res 😆

Unres

Lanny 🤗

What a lovely OS as I told you already and I think this makes it to my fave from your list as it contains Sanskaar, puppies and chocolates all together- a few of my favourite things (singing in proper Sound of Music style- my favourite film of all time 😆)! You called it fluff to me but if it is, it must be counted as exalted fluff if such a thing exists, but hopefully the sentiment I wish to project comes through 😆.

I liked so many things here. Let's start with the best- Sanskaar- sighhh- how amazing is this man, his whole self aware confidence in himself and yet his forbearance and totally unconditional love which never makes him use any degree of force or undue coercion- no matter I am mush when I think him 😳 .

I so wish we get this sort of stuff in the memory loss track. I loved how Sanskaar played this- perfectly! Leaving Madam to stew over her misplaced doubts and using total reverse psychology on her- best tactics ever 👏 . I also really liked the way he is in cahoots with MIL, who is so sweet and a true SwaSan shipper always. So wish Shomi plays a role on the show to help Swara understand the truth. Also the way Swara has been sketched is perfect for me- she is so attracted and wants to think ill of him and not like him and find reasons not to but cannot 😳 . Who could resist a husband like she has? I could so feel the growing attraction on her side and inability to control herself which is exactly what appeals to me if we get it in this track.

The whole present giving was perfect! Oodles of effective romance mixed in and when those puppies were revealed I squealed so loud in the car as I read from my phone poor hubby just looked at me, dismissing me for the hopeless case he knows me to be. And the subtle touches of what ended up a cheek kiss but was so meant to be more and oh how much our Princess wanted it was so 😳 😳.

I have dealt with this towards the end as with the actual track, I prefer to think as little as possible about the latest third wheel entered who will of course turn psycho 🤢 - wish the CVs would make him similarly curtailed to a few scenes (even this I begrudge 😆 ). I so want Swara to be totally focussed on Sanskaar as it was here, it gives me great pleasure to imagine it this way.

As I said, lovely- and penned in your usual style which whilst being perfectly succinct really delivers with so much effective panache and leaves one wanting more 😃

Lots of love,
Shru xoxo

Originally posted by: Apudeep

Thanks Lanny for this beautiful os. My romantic heart is fully satisfied Swara is 'detective' again 😆but I love swara's hidden attraction towards her husband. Sexual tension is beautifully executed 😳

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Sigh...

Sanskaar's happy, contented smile. Swara unable to prevent herself being drawn to him, despite her passion for jasoosi. Cute and cuddly pups. Chocolate. That completely seeti worthy SwaSan moment, when our Sunny boy prevents her from stumbling, holding her in his arms. 😳

Weekend made. 😃 Thanks Lanny. So many of the things I love in this little gem of a piece.

By the way, Sunny boy is just amazingly smart. Masterstroke truly, giving his wifey the space to do her jasoosi, and make her secretly pine for his presence and attention. 😉 And thanks for relegating Sahil to a one word presence in this piece. 😆 And yes...despite all of Swara's wild misgivings, she does realize that her hubby always looked at her like his world revolved around her. So true of Sunny. She IS his world after all.

Ermmm...I dearly hope this would come to pass, but do you think Dragon Daadi and her jelly spined son would actually insist Swara goes back to her sasural? Well...one can always hope and pray. 😉😆

Originally posted by: ...Penknife...

Such a beautiful story. Thank you so much for writing this. :')

Swara is so in character and it is just typically something she'd do.

I loved how shomi used the my daughter doesn't trust me line to send her home. 😆

Raginis deduction on why Sanskar keeps smiling was so apt I'd say.

I was thinking something along the same lines the other day. While I was watching Sanskar cry over Swara's memories I thought of how how he'd react once he figures out she's alive but has lost her memory.

But I think the mere knowledge of her being alive and healthy will put him of his misery. Seeing her would make all him better. His love is that pure.

And the gift. Uff. I can't tell you... those puppies made me so happy. ❤️

I surprised Swara didnt pounce on him. 😆

I mean who wouldn't fall in love with that man. Hell I'd let him murder me thrice 😳😆

Absolutely wonderful. Keep writing beautiful stuff. I love all of your works.

Thank you so much for the pm too btw. Made my day 🤗

Nandini

Originally posted by: BookWormV

Heya Shruti,

That was a truly adorable OS.

I burst out laughing when I read Swara screamt murderer and promptly fainted🤣Picturing it had me ROFL! Hilarious!🤣

Each of the family members coaxing Swara to believe Sanskaar loves her and Swara going into her detective mode to prove them wrong. hahaha. Amazing use of here detective tendencies.! And I thank you for finishing off the Sahil variable in one sentence.

Swara's anger on not being wished by Sanskaar was so cute!!! 😆

Puppies and chocolates!!! I looove this gift! And that classic bump, fall and eyelock!❤️ and added bonus of a kiss!! *floating in SwaSanland*

Would like to point out that Sanskaar would truly just be happy to find Swara safe and well and in front of him and alive. Fabulous way to put it - his content smile, although his eyes speak so much!.

Damn girl! Just made my weekend! Been waiting for OS/SS/FF on this memory loss track. Thank you.

Love,

-V

Originally posted by: ria.april18

Wonderful os...loved so much swara's jasoosi and sanskar's unconditional love and care...and the awesome gift too...