Swasan -FF - Fanaa ~ Destroyed In love ~ Epilogue- Pg 85 ( 5th august)

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#901

Originally posted by: Anahita_Leve
Res for chapter 21

Take your time Dyuti.🤗 I know you are caught up😊

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#902

Originally posted by: Trisha_magnet
Damn it's turning to be soo soo emotional ...😭 n lovely...the Swasan moment was amazing...
I m litrally dish yo tears ...every emotion felt so real...plzzz plzzz don't let swara die...get done solution for her plzzz...

Thanks trisha😊

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

@krishuuuuuuuuuu

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#903

Lucky darling...

If such soul stirring and heart touching words could kill...I'm dead already...how can u write so brilliantly. ..it was pure magical...

Right from Swara's apprehension for sanky's proposal...Dp's much awaited reaction to swara's confessions...and lastly my most favourite swasan proposal...it was outclass...just made my day...

You left me speechless...I just loved how sanky convinced swara after her hesitation to say yes...those conversation was amazingly penned...

How much I appreciate this tale it is less...lucky i want to see swara's family too...after all they also wanted to spend time with their dying daughter...plzzz add their scene too...

Eager for more..

Love u

Talia

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#904

Originally posted by: Nynaeve
Me and mine - Will get back 😊

And she said yes, which is what I wanted, she said yes...yes and yes.

The honest truthful conversation as to why she first said no, was just so natural, from both of them, her fears of wanting too much, her worry that in her "greed" of taking all his love, she would only hurt him and her fear that she was being selfish. And balanced by his declaration that wanting to be with her, as friend, confidant, lover and husband was him being selfish, for he could not bear being away from her, he did not just love her, he needed to love her as much as one needs air to breathe, as simply and as truly as that.

It gave her the strength she needed, to address both her fears and the doubt placed by DP - it shook him up, did it not. So would there his and Annapurna's blessings?

(And when he recalls her saying - Aise pyar ke samne ne toh Bhagwan bhi jukh jaye - a hint for a happy ending??)

And under the starry skies, with their hearts as witness they pledged themselves to each other. A simple band and a tiny stone, but enough to bind them for eternity. ❤️

It was amazing and now eager to know more😊

love,

Nyna

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#905

Originally posted by: lucky.m

@ Nynu🤗🤗

One or two parts to go ..Max and I am gonna miss this story too😕 very badly

Take your time .. Will wait

Love
Lucky

I will miss this too, but then it is always there for me to go back and re read😊

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#906

@ Nynu and Talia🤗🤗

😳 Will need more time to revert on your lovely comments .. severe time crunch and gonna be on and off IF for next few days ... and need to start working on final part too .. I am jsut trying to suqqeze some time ..

Love

Lucky

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#907

Originally posted by: lucky.m
@ Nynu and Talia🤗🤗
😳 Will need more time to revert on your lovely comments .. severe time crunch and gonna be on and off IF for next few days ... and need to start working on final part too .. I am jsut trying to suqqeze some time ..

Love
Lucky

Take all the time, even though that is what you seem to be running short of. And do be prepared for DOTW#3, I will put up sometime tomorrow - I have the topic decided, I think you would like it. Also planning to pm the DOTW members, so you would know.

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Madhushani

@StardustBliss

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#908

Wow! You made me go through millions of emotions in this one update.. And I loved every bit of it.. ❤️ ❤️
Especially that whole proposal scene.. It was so romantic.. Dreamy..
Tremendous work dear. Loved it. 👏

PS: Hey dear, I'm not new to your stories.. My old account is 'Eranga'.. Can you please send your PMs about your work to this account from now onwards..
😊 😊