SwaSan SS: Love that binds two hearts- Ch.1 pg 6

Mallika-E-Zain

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: CarpedeimRose

I really loved it sweety and pls don't be nervous and all ,u will do it well ,Rock it pls do continue and send me pm 😃😃

Yup thanks!! I'll defo PM you!

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Ginny potter

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

hey sakshi... awesome start. sanskar's pain is so evident 😭 and swasan's cosmic connection moment was brilliant and I loved that sanskar have the mangalsutra and swara have the SS locket. 😳 loved it. will wait for the next one. 😊

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Mallika-E-Zain

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Helee
hey sakshi... awesome start. sanskar's pain is so evident 😭 and swasan's cosmic connection moment was brilliant and I loved that sanskar have the mangalsutra and swara have the SS locket. 😳 loved it. will wait for the next one. 😊

Thanks Helee!!
I wanted to make his grief evident and I'm glad I could managed to do so to some extent. Oh of course, she needs to have that SS locket at any cost😉
Will update chapter 1 as soon as possible!

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Nupur

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Hey Sakshi, Awesome start! Interesting prologue!

Plz continue! I'm always ready for everything when it comes to SwaSan!

Will wait for your next update!

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Mallika-E-Zain

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Nupur_5
Hey Sakshi, Awesome start! Interesting prologue!
Plz continue! I'm always ready for everything when it comes to SwaSan!
Will wait for your next update!

Hey!! Thanks!
Will update soon!

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svg98

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Awesome storyline..
Would really want to read the separation and angst track..
And how Sanskar handles the pain of living without Swara and how Swara gets attracted to him and she tackles these emotions..
Do pm me please..

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Dear Sakshi,

That was a very interesting prologue - Sanskaar must be truly heartbroken on seeing the mangalsutra and the pepper spray (which as you said, none of us can forget how he tucked in )

And the Cosmic connection is still quite strong - he screams her name in agony and she is startled awake.

Eagerly awaiting for updates.

love,

Nyna,

PS: Please do PM me for future updates, do not want to miss out on any of them

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Nupur

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