SwaSan SS: Love that binds two hearts- Ch.1 pg 6 - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
Hey tomboy.. Red the prologue it was heart wrenching... Ohh man.. I had tears..

Awesome.

With love...

Kam..(tomboy) ;-)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
Yes yes sakshi.
Its awsome.
I so wntd it lk ths.no maa baba,no behen.total blank swara with tht only ss pendent.
Bt cvs gving bk swara bose,so i strt imaging it tht way nw.
Its very awsm 2 read it hw i dream it 1st.
Aaahhh!sanskar's pain i badly need tht.
I knw m sadist.
Cntu soon sakshi & pm me if possible.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: svg98

Awesome storyline..
Would really want to read the separation and angst track..
And how Sanskar handles the pain of living without Swara and how Swara gets attracted to him and she tackles these emotions..
Do pm me please..


Hey!! Thanks for these words.
I hope I'll be able to give you all what you want as this is my first try!!
Surely, will PM you!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Dear Sakshi,

That was a very interesting prologue - Sanskaar must be truly heartbroken on seeing the mangalsutra and the pepper spray (which as you said, none of us can forget how he tucked in )

And the Cosmic connection is still quite strong - he screams her name in agony and she is startled awake.

Eagerly awaiting for updates.

love,
Nyna,

PS: Please do PM me for future updates, do not want to miss out on any of them



Thank you so much for these words Nyna!! They matter so much!
Sanskaar definitely was! After all, Swara is the most precious thing to him, right? Oh yes, the pepper spray! Well I had to put it there. I just loved that scene!😳
I just love the SwaSan cosmic connection shown often in the show and want to continue it here. Surely will PM you!!
Thanks once again
Sakshi
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: Nupur_5

My pleasure 😊
Plz do PM me if possible!


Surely will! 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: Amreee

Hi sakshi..

Nice start..loved the way u narrated sanskars pain n fear of loosing swara...it was so emotional...
Will b waiting for the next update. .

N u r not a pathetic writer...actually u r a brilliant one..
Dont disgrace urself..

Amreen


Thank you so much Amreen!!
Your words made me tooo happy!! Thanks!
Will try to update as soon as possible!
Sakshi
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: DivineDarkness

Damn you female you wrote a story and I had no idea about that..arrgh HATE YOUUU.. Not going to comment

Heartbroken Me (u) 8-)


Leks!!🤗
I did say on the group buddy! But seems u weren't OL! Sorry!
Atleast you read, that matters more😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...

Hey tomboy.. Red the prologue it was heart wrenching... Ohh man.. I had tears..

Awesome.

With love...

Kam..(tomboy) ;-)


Thanks so much Kam!

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Posted: 9 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: LoveSonu2408

Yes yes sakshi.
Its awsome.
I so wntd it lk ths.no maa baba,no behen.total blank swara with tht only ss pendent.
Bt cvs gving bk swara bose,so i strt imaging it tht way nw.
Its very awsm 2 read it hw i dream it 1st.
Aaahhh!sanskar's pain i badly need tht.
I knw m sadist.
Cntu soon sakshi & pm me if possible.



Hey Sonu!! Thank you so much!! It just propped in my mind and I thought to write and surely I won't write too much...lol!
I hope it i good enough!
Will surely PM you!
Sakshi
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: chavi12345

Nice prologue continue soon


Thank you! Yup, will continue soon!

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