SwaSan TS: Shattered Hearts (final part 3 updated on pg 1) - Page 2

Originally posted by: Sujayricky

Awesome start 👏
Seriously i loved it
Beautifully written 👏
Felt bad for sanskar
Update soon
Please pm me next time

Originally posted by: spatika

nice update..
continue soon

Hey Jessica! Just managed to read this on my phone and posting comments from there too so forgive the brevity! You wrote this so well! Sanskaar's POV was expressed very powerfully and lucidly and the emotions blazed through, even Swara's. Liked how you so logically brought out in this situation that Sanskaar is so right to be frustrated, hurt and even angry and despite Swara as usual having the best intentions, not sharing the Rajat truth asap would only lead to more issues. Indian shows love showing illogical drama of female leads coming under pressure to keep quiet from their life partners and liked how here you showed the stupidity of that. Will wait to read more and am really busy so forgive any late comments but wanted to say how nicely I think you expressed this:)

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Hey Jessica! Just managed to read this on my phone and posting comments from there too so forgive the brevity! You wrote this so well! Sanskaar's POV was expressed very powerfully and lucidly and the emotions blazed through, even Swara's. Liked how you so logically brought out in this situation that Sanskaar is so right to be frustrated, hurt and even angry and despite Swara as usual having the best intentions, not sharing the Rajat truth asap would only lead to more issues. Indian shows love showing illogical drama of female leads coming under pressure to keep quiet from their life partners and liked how here you showed the stupidity of that. Will wait to read more and am really busy so forgive any late comments but wanted to say how nicely I think you expressed this:)

Love,

Shru xoxo

Awesome start

Hello guys.. As promised, i have updates the 2nd part of the three shot. Finaly part should be up by tonight, or max tomorrow morning. Hope you like this part.

Originally posted by: Vini224

Awesome start

Glad that Swara realized how it feels when you're not allowed to share in the pain of you're loved one.

But can't see both of them in so much pain.

Please update soon.

Hey Jessica it was a perfect update 👏
Seriously i loved it
Sanlak scene was nice
And swasan was lovely
Finally sanskar will handle rajat chapter
I hope cv's will also show the same in the show
Update soon


P.s- I known i have told you pm me but i am a pure stalker so sometimes i read stories without pm's also 😆

part 2 is also as good as part 1. sanskar in action...I can't wait to see what he will do to rajat. sanlak bond was good too and swasan to swasan hi hai... 😳 update soon.