Swasan OS - Zeherilin Raatein Updated part-2

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soumi gupta

@soumi93

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: ll_megha_ll
Omg what a beautiful update..
Lovely
Continue soon
Thanks for pm

Thnx megha...sujoy will pm u as i cant do it...

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Amreen

@Amreee

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Posted: 9 years ago

#72

Wt a painfull update...

The part where sanskar left swaras hand was so emotional so painful...I felt like crying. .

Must say u r an amazing writer...

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Anamika sharma

@anu012

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Posted: 9 years ago

#73

nice & emotional update dear
loved it
cont soon

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sujay kumar

@Sujayricky

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Posted: 9 years ago

#74

Res for now
Will unres tomorrow after i update my stories finally 😉 😆

P.s- Pm sended successfully

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sireesha76

@sireesha76

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Posted: 9 years ago

#75

Beautiful update

Loved it

Thanks for the PM

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hadiali

@hadiali

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#76

Wao superb yar 👏
N very emotional
😭

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soumi gupta

@soumi93

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: mix_of_emotions
awesome update
soumi

heartbreaking part where their hands were clutching each other
n she was in pain so he had to left her
rajat ki toh dunno how I will see him in actual episode w
lovely writeup
continue soon

Rishu 🤗
glad that u liked the hand clutching part i was so tensed that whether i should able to make it proper or nt?????
will update the final part asap.

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kritz4ever

@kritz4ever

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Posted: 9 years ago

#78

Loving it

But want more

Hope swara will be fine

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akanksha

@luvakanksha

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#79

Awesome start loved the update

Please continue soon

Brilliant work 👏

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#80

Res

Dear Soumi,

Chapter 2 - so the action continues and inspite of Sanskaar and Lakshya having rescued Parineeti, they have not been able to stop Rajat completely as he takes Swara hostage. The unspoken conversation, of Sanskaar's reassurance and Swara's faith in him - was the best. It was a beautiful moment, a single frame of frozen time when both knew exactly what the other said.

And then you end in on a cliffhanger - what did Sanskaar see that shattered him?

Nyna

Edited by Nynaeve - 9 years ago