Swasan OS - Zeherilin Raatein Updated part-2

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Anamika sharma

@anu012

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Posted: 9 years ago

#61

Awsome update dear
loved it
plz cont soon

thnks for pm

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reeyacute

@reeyacute

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Posted: 9 years ago

#62

Thinking abt this track...i already have butterflies in my belly.

U r writing a OS...awesome...i wonder how will sanskar react to swaras situation.

Good job keep it up.

Khub bhalo

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Shweta Gupta

@ll_megha_ll

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#63

Omg what a beautiful update..

Lovely

Continue soon

Thanks for pm

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soumi gupta

@soumi93

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Posted: 9 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: ayeshamukhtar
Ohhh dear it's amazing update soon

Thnk u so much dear.

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mix_of_emotions

@mix_of_emotions

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Posted: 9 years ago

#65

awesome update
soumi

heartbreaking part where their hands were clutching each other
n she was in pain so he had to left her
rajat ki toh dunno how I will see him in actual episode w
lovely writeup
continue soon

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soumi gupta

@soumi93

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Posted: 9 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: sneharay
Nice Start..update soon

Thnx sneha part-2 updated

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soumi gupta

@soumi93

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Posted: 9 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: anu012
Awsome update dear
loved it
plz cont soon

thnks for pm

Thnx dear for praising it and liking it.

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Ginny potter

@Bluehue

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Posted: 9 years ago

#68

Nothing is worse than seeing your life going away from you and you cant do anything to stop it. 😭

Beautiful update soumi... I thought that story will go in future but it went back in past. their last moments together before the great tragedy. reading it, is making me sad...I m not sure how will I see this on screen tomorrow. poor swasan. 😭 and the hand moment you described was so beautiful and sad. will wait for the next.

Edited by Helee - 9 years ago

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soumi gupta

@soumi93

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Posted: 9 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: reeyacute
Thinking abt this track...i already have butterflies in my belly.
U r writing a OS...awesome...i wonder how will sanskar react to swaras situation.
Good job keep it up.

Khub bhalo

Thnk u Riya...for liking it...
i was waiting to see sanky reaction on screen.