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unres (finally)

Hey Shruti!! First of all my sincere apologies for the extremely late unres😭😭 I really wanted to reply earlier but sadly it wasnt possible... thus, i'll start straightaway...

Rama Rama so much Drama 😛😛Packed chp this was!! First up I loved how you have portrayed the effects of those horrible incidents on the family in such perfect words... the toll on their health, the shaken power, the strengthened beliefs, the grief, the bond!!! Superb!! And each development acc to individual characters.. different for Annapurna, as a queen, as a mother, as a human; different for DP, as a king, a husband; Sharmishtha, Sujata, RP, as parents, humans, and friends... Charming! 👏Oh and sadistically i loved the idea of 'release' that AP suggests for KB.. Its fitting for her😡

Janaki Gadodia- wow! It was like an intelligent chess game.. each chaal matched by a behtar one (Loved AP here😉) That whole part brought forth how she was unconsciously digging her own grave, blinded by the revenge frenzy, and now obviously has to be buried alive under all that dirt and live suffocated and pained for life... That showdown was so seeti-worthy, i tell you.. Twist pe twist... but the biggest surprise was laksh.. He was bang-on.. I loved his decision! He seemed so tired and cornered in a way.. but you have managed to make these tragic incidents as ones that moulded and enhanced the individual qualities and natures.. class yaar⭐️ Anjaamgadh-perfectly named, as always- where the two females met with their much deserved anjaam.. Its actually tragic that they ruined their lives themselves when they could have been hundred times happier, jitna effort revenge mein lagaya agar usse aadha bhi forgiveness and acceptance mein lagate toh...

Uttara and Pawan.. Can i just say AWWW.. In just a few words you managed to create the essence of their love, as potent as some of the greatest.. I was grinning ear to ear during this very adorable part... Dadi Saa knows exactly what is happening, probably better than the couple and she is enjoying their predicament heartily😆😃 Also the battle of egos, pride, care, love.. fabulously written Shruti⭐️👏

And then the part which i was waiting for with bated breath!! I was almost feverishly reading through it to ascertain both my sweeties are alive and together.. and i admit i did a lil jig when i got the desired written proof The best part was the treatment tactic for SwaSan.. convincing them the other is alive so as to will them back to life... ohhh i cannot tell you how much i loved this!!! tooo much, i think... it was something right out of all my romantic dreams.. super!!! so soulful, and epic in every sense... love love loved it!! This was the highest point for me⭐️ Thank you so much for this XOXOXOXOXO🤗

This was my fav chapter (a lil weird i know).. loved it😛😛

Much love,

Akshata😊