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Boo Hoo Hoo Hoo - I get upset with love stories that have happy endings too. It means the story is over😭

The ending was outstanding.atlast they got there love.

But this story is ending...it is painful for me.

I must say you are a brilliant writer.

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Awww Shru!!!... Such a lovely surprise that was!! I always wanted them to visit Ehsaas Nagar once they are back together and as soon as the word 'surprise' was mentioned i had my fingers crossed for this😛 Sanskar is an unabashed romantic yaar, making every single moment of the wedding extraordinary, planning an amazing surprise (with everyone in on it), wanting to spend undisturbed time with his mermaid, taking his wife away on a honeymoon, that too during those times😆😆 The way you described the mandap sky, stars, candles, diamonds, flowers, crystals and the love of your life... how perfect is that❤️ The grandeur and splendour of a royal wedding, alongwith the ethereal aura of the coming together of two souls came through so amazingly well.. The way you have written it👏👏

Bechari Swara.. all that teasing and predicting of 'ahem ahem'... seriously yaar.. even i find this 'saji hui sej' concept so embarassing.. its like everybody assumes the obvious even if it may not be so obvious, rightly said its all too public.. hey bhagwan!😆😆 Poor royal ladies, had to forego sleep so as to surprise their chhora's jaan..😉😉 And the Knight whisks away his princess on a romantic getaway..😳😳

'Being close but not enough'- SwaSan's state throughout the journey😆 Loved that lil piece of 'crossing the threshold..😊 Yay!! the bangle enters!!! With the Gadodia seal and the Maheshwari insignia, almost interwoven together❤️ And the comb and pins too... oh so cute!! Symbolic of the new sparkling life enriched by the past that shaped them... Super!!👏

And then the ultimate,much deserved romantic time for our sweethearts..😉cannot comment on it in detail☺️😆

All in all, what a chapter Shruti!! lovely, lovely, lovely!!👏👏 I'm so gonna miss DK...😭

Much love,

Akshata😊

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Shruuu love...😉

Im back..well i was never gone...😳 but i need time to write to you.. as u are special to me... ur 1 person i interacted on forum...😳😃

Coming to DK...i have been associated with Dk from beginning..im getting nostalgic n emotional that this beautifull journey is completed now...😭but it is etched in my HEART..MIND N SOUL...😳

Chapter 34...it was full of suspense...after the crucial chapter 33...after reading paragraphs my mind was gripping a certain fear that may be swasan died.. uget all credit for writing so magically...😊

Annu n dp scene..ram sujata n sharmistha scene..uttara n pawan scene...all dialogue were showing that maybe swasan died...😭but finally we find swara.but her emotional side made me think that just sansku died...but finally our price charming appears...it was pure magical scene...i just adored it...😳😃

U should be praised again n again for ur writing skill...ur ETHEREAL BABY...👏

Janki n ragini😕...as i already told u ..i felt pity for her..but she deserve punishment for whatever evil doings she has done...we nearly lost pawan..due to her..but her circumstances did this to her🤢..turned her dark...i personally dont like ragini but felt bad for her...coz now she is pregenant..😭n may be with staying with lakshya she turn over new leaf...but now she will also become another janki😭...n her child will suffer...😭

I ask u to give some ending to PaRa n Raglak story😭...it bcoz we never get ragini redemption on show but we can get one from ur story...will wait for anything from ur side...

Chapter 35...i have no words to describe my feelings for this chapter...it was beyond my expectation..it was MAGICc...BLISS...PURE LOVE..HEAVEN...

Swasan they took my breathaway...sansku how i wish my prince charming to be exact replica of him...plzzz pray my wish come true...☺️

The way he loved swara no one can else do...his care..his devotion..his faith in his love..its driving me insane..all minute n major things he did for her was sooo breathtaking..i literally cried out of happiness...how anyone can love sooo deeply...????i was in swasan dreamland...🤪

Reread it soo many times...i just lost my sanity for swasan...🤪

Love u shruuu ...muahhh🤗

Thanks for DK...may Allah gave u all happiness...health n wealth...ameen...😃

Lots of love hugs n kisses🤗

Talia❤️