DARK KNIGHT-A SwaSan FF-T4-DELETED-AN PG1- Creations-Pgs 98/9 - Page 56

Beautiful dear... 👏

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Res 34

Part unres - thank you for turning my red rose which turned to white back to red🤗🤗

This was amazing felt reallybad for ragini poor her and wowlakshya stood on his decision amazing and aww pawan is healthy again and still marriage is on cards cant wait for their marriage now...continue soon di totally loved it

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

I had been about to almost tell you off for having so little faith after I read how upset and disappointed you were but it would have spoilt my suspense 😆. Plus it gave me great joy that I did manage to write in a way that there was at least some doubt for many that "what if" I did send them the "twinkling stars" way 😈. There were actually 2 alternative endings in my head and just to be contrary I toyed with writing the second "tragic" one too to post that IN ADDITION to this one but am now to focused on finishing off to bother 😆.

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

To be fair, you did turn my red rose pink, at least. Fine, I admit I was a trifle hasty -Woe on me! me of little faith!

But then as you said you should be pleased that you wrote so well that the alternate ending was quite plausible. 😭😭😭 And you admit that you did have an alternate ending too. 😡 I almost spent a week hoping against hope and steeling my heart.

And I loved the little fact that the healer was named Durga, it brings to my mind a small couplet that my mothers often quotes: When Lord Shive stood ready to swallow the poison he was encouraged by none other than his wife, Goddess Parvati, who had absolute confidence on her ''sowbaghyam"; she has so much faith in her love for him, that she is sure that no harm would befall her love.

I am not very sure how this fits in her, but that was the couplet that came my mind.

Will unres for a detailed comment.

love,

Nyna

Hi darling Shru...first of all a very very big hug for the happy happy ending I know its not end but I m relieved for swasan n uttara n pawan love u for this n sorry for late reply. Now coming to update what a relief this update was in each aspect specially the punishment I wanted for Jaanki. Its not necessary to give physical punishment to a criminal but making person lonely is too a punishment. I want to confess one thing may be I am wrong but its my feeling I think Ragini should not be given life long punishment rest you know better. I really thought that for treatment of pawan n swasan they will need someone who will just be like Durga n yes you actually did that. you really know now how we all think n want you to write for us. I liked the change in Uttara. I liked firm decisions of Sharmishtha and Laksh. I loved each n every part of this story n specially my darlings swasan. I m looking forward to last update n thanks for giving us so lovely n beautiful story but I will always say to u that write a book after this now.
lots of love n take care n take a break after this n u need it really because u really did a lot for us in ur tight schedule.
with love Kawal

Res for 35 😊 will un res my previous slot for 34 and this one soonest I can. Off to greedily read now. 😉

Un Res

Shru my dear 🤗🤗🤗

We had had some PM exchanges over this, so I knew we were in for a treat. 😳 ☺️ And like I said, you made the whole flow so very sensuous, romantic, passionate, and tasteful. It was a joy to read, with the obvious smoldering dynamics very subtly portrayed--Erotic without being bawdy. 👏 👏

The whole chapter was so well researched and described---starting with the wedding preparations, the amount of almost obsessive zeal with which Sanskaar planned each and every step. He really wanted to make this a cherished moment for his Mermaid Princess didn't he---their symbolic coming together for this life, and for the seven to come. What is so special about SwaSan is, that the wedding itself was only a formality, an official rite marking their union. Their hearts and souls were already married in every sense of the term, committed to cherishing, adoring and being faithful to each other, through all eternity.

That timeless sense of pure love, encompassing the spark and passion of physical love, but transcending that to a union of hearts, minds and souls, was so beautifully captured, Shru. A joy to read. I kept thinking, I was witnessing the eagerly awaited wedding of someone in my family, or someone I was very close to! You've made this enthralling saga come so alive for all of us.

I know I can't say Thanks----but I was so, so, so happy that you gave that kangan moment. That was something I had asked you for, several chapters back, at the time when Sanskaar took the kangan from Swara's wrist at the village fair, remember? He put those other bangles on her wrist with so much love, care and reverence shining from his eyes. 😳 I SO wanted him to place the Gadodia kangan back on her wrist, along with another bearing the Maheshwari crest. You gave us such a beautiful moment with him giving her the kangan embellished with diamonds, with the Gadodia and Maheshwari heraldry intertwined. So symbolic of their union. 😳

And those hair pins and the comb which he had swept from her luxuriant hair during their moments of passion earlier. 😉 I just knew he would hold on to them as talismans, to keep him company when he was away from her. And now he was placing them back in her lush tresses which he adored so much, again, embellished to show his immense love for her. He really does think of her as an angel from the heavens, bestowed by a kind fate in answer to his heartfelt prayers which he never even knew he uttered, na? So magical. 😳

And I just knew that Sanskaar would take his wife back to the haveli at Ehsaas Nagar for their honeymoon, for the first magical weeks of their wedded bliss. That was where they fell in love after all---Sanskaar realized that he had completely, irrevocably fallen in love with her; while Swara, too, felt an irresistible, mesmeric pull towards the man whom she realized, was honorable and gallant without peer. I wanted them to relive all those precious moments, and so, so happy that you made them do so! 😊

Their lovemaking---was filled with such tenderness and love, it truly was divine. Like I said before, the intense physical desire for each other was there, as it should be. But this encompassed and transcended that---to a union of their hearts and souls.

I just loved it. 👏 👏

Waiting for the epilogue, dear! 🤗