DARK KNIGHT-A SwaSan FF-T4-DELETED-AN PG1- Creations-Pgs 98/9 - Page 48

Yay ! Going to snuggle into a cozy corner with this one! Res until then 😃

The only feeling I felt after reading the part👏 this s for u proved ur self an amazing writer. Felt bad for kavita 😕happy that rog died😡 he deserves that.and for swara and sanskaar😭😭 wat can I say sanskar proved once again that he s knight their love s very pious and pure felt like crying after reading last chapter janki and ragini shouldn't get away after all the evil things they had Don e😡 they both deserve some severe punishment😡😡 so r u planning their death if so can u show their punarjanm where they can have peaceful life would love to read their rebirth story also😊 ll be fun to read even I dnt miss ur story like that😊 waiting for the update eagerly update soon lot's of love swathi

Such an Amazing Update. That SwaSan Moment Awww 😳 Finally Devendra is out of the story. But please dont let SwaSan die 😭 I was anxiously waiting for their Marriage. Please dont let them Die. 😭 Kaveri wasn't present in this Part. Where is she? I just dont want SwaSan to Die. Please dont kill them. Waiting for the next part...

Thanks, Shaheenq

Fab update!⭐️ finally sanskar saved swara. Hope both r safe

Hi Shruti...

Oh.. No.. What will happen next.. 😭 plz plz don't let swasan die.. It's a humble request..

hey i m silent reader of this story ,well I once commented before... when I wasn't able to keep silence...today again I can't stop myself from commenting here.

so what a chapter it was...! it was a rollercoaster ride just like the whole story... well I hope swasan won't die in next chapter... 😔

but today I m commenting here to tell you that I love your story so so so much. it is so beautifully written 😳 and you are a brilliant writer. 👏 will wait for the next chapter.

Gosh chapter 33 is seriously like a boom..a strom waiting to uproot everything in its way and then leave behind either a chilling silence or a beautiful, passionate and a love filled spring..
Part 1 i would say was a dangerous update..As a girl myself i cant even image the pain and humiliation Swara must have felt..Devendra is literally insane with hatred.. It runs through him as poison..i was literally shaking when he was slapping her,manhandling her and when he talked about that imprinting that cruel symbol on hwr skin it was like Swara should somehow take a sword and run it straight through his heart..the surroundings were beautifully explained..the statue of Shivji was a symbol that if his devotee would soon in form of Mahakaal will kill that disgusting Rakshas.

When Swara said that He will come and when he does he will regret..that was so amazing literaly had goosebumps with that line..When she came to know of Janki it was obvious that she would be devasted..a person whom you have considered a mother all your life suddenly gives you away to an animal like Devendra to ruin her..Swara must have not imagined that she hated her so much..The way Devendra was hurting Swara was too painfull..but even the blow at her leg must have not caused so much pain than this blow at her heart..

Swara courage and bravery has to be saluted.. Even after knowing Kavita..and being herself in love with Sanskar so deeply..to call her Sanskar's Kavita only Swara can be so selfless..it surely melted Kavita's heart that what Sanskar must have seen in her and how wrong she was to let Swara in the hands of this animal..

Sanskar's entry was superb like a true warrior that he is..Veer was so amazing..like his master..nothing could have stopped Sasnkar from coming today for Swara..the way he fought and reached the chamber was amazinly written..Devendra reaction was absolutely right..the strom he has unleashed he knew he will destroy himself..and Sanskar was such a tornad today that he will stop at nothing.. His fear when Sanskar reached said it all..Sanskar reaction for Kavita was correct and she deserved it..she knew it all along and still ahe sujected him to such torture and insult to everything his love his respect his very being..she inflicted such wounds on his heart and soul that she deserved Sanskar's coldness and Sanskar is so selfless even after knowing all this he was ready to save her..

When Swara and Sanskar so each other and called each other..it was like an oasis in a desert..mesmerizingly written..Sanskar has learnt that key..very well explained why nobody ever found it..and also that why Sanskar is so amazing..the part where he saves Swara for the arrow had my heart thudding like anything and when that arrow hit Sanskar it was painful..but still atleast Kavita learnt and at the stake of her life..stopped Devendra..atleast she will take atleast this one good deed with her..she tried to be selfless..she never actually loved Sanskar but with this act she paid a tribute to humanity and respect to Swara who she understood was made for a man like Sanskar and Sanskar reaction too was justified because he have always loved Swara since he understood was love was..Still he moved forward to pay his respect to a women who for her own selfish reason but still suffered badly at the hands of the animal..

And now he moved towards the animal like an angel..an angel to save his love..an angel to save humanity avenge for what he and his love suffered all along due to the disgusting and selfish man.Like a dark knight who know nothing but to shred the man to peices who dared to lay a finger on his princess..

Continued in the next post..

Part 3 is like a most awaited climax to the end of the villian..the lines bu Sanskar couldnt have benn more appropriate.. A man to man fight..no hiding behind women and innocent people which a coward always does to save himself..Each cut made by Sanskwar was an avenging move..to avenge what his beloved suffered..to avenge what he has to go through..to avenge Veer..to avenge Pawan..to avenge all his soldiers..to avenge every drop of innocent blood that the animal shed for his selfiish reasons..his trick to divert Sanskar that he could hurt Swara was so lame and cheap..It could have never stopped Sasnkar..the way he iciliy replied to his warning could have sent shivers down anyone who was standing against this avenging angel..

When he informed Sanskar that the arrow was poisoned.. Swara scream was filled with so mich agony and anguish..but the calm way with which Sanskar stopped his blow was chilling..and atlast after Sanskar left him to die a painful death..but still he himself took away his life..

Part 4 leaves me speechless..there was everything in it..the love,pain,passion,anguish,agony,pain and the list goes on..the way they held each other was so very beautiful.. Sanskar knew his chances of living was very less and so he encouraged Swara to leave this place and go to safety..but it was no way Swara could have left leaving his Sanskar like this..and thus she choose to be with him if not in this life then in till eternity..the scene where Sanskar shouts to stop her and she even does stop..but when she shows her palms that the dagger was poisoned too..i was literally shaking.. Tears formed..the whole part was so very beautiful and too painful at the same time..
Absolutely right though Swara is they cant live without each other..still their undying love for each other will always live..the declaration of love by Sanskar for his Nymph and Swara admiration of his eyes was mesmerizing..

Atlast when they both lied on each..ignoring the pain and registering each others heartbeats.. It was so very beautiful.. They way they held each other thier fingers intertwining seamlessly..gazing into each other eyes and echoes of their love in they very air..so very rightfully she said they have to be together if not in this world..then some other world..though the essence of their love will continue to live through eternity..
The lines at the last were mind numbing and soul searing..they had the power to tear apart your very heart and soul..you are truly an amazing writer..one can see everything happening right in front of his eyes..you bring them alive..their love and their very souls.. Swara and Sanskar..you make us fall in love with them all over again..

Cant wait to read more..
Update soon..