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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Red.orchid

Hi shruti u r a brillient writter👏

Chp 29-31
How cunning kaveri n kavita. Kavita herself cheated on him now she wants him back😡 if she cannot 've him back she wants him to be dead wicked women.


Title itself suggests it is to test swara's trust on sanskar. I loved annapurna here, but after that letter incidents I had doute on her but traitor non other than janki .
No words for janki.
Now how Will sankar saves swara. Already he knows truth abt kavita. Waiting what twist will come next 😆


Thank you so much for your kind words Sadhana 🤗. I guess DK has two wicked mother and daughter duos, both vile in different ways . Yes the chapter was all about Swara's test of trust in Sanskaar as the previous was his:). Janaki- . Hopefully what came next was satisfying despite the angst 😳

Love,
Shruti xoxo

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: chandanagimsy

Di please don't let pawan die...plzz...plzz...never let him die...please save him some how please can't see him dead and one janaki how is it possible... Didn't expect this at any cost..omg...and sankaar and lucky aww.. Resolved their issues awesome...continue soon..but PLEASE DONT LET HIM DIE PLEASE CONDISDER OUR WISH DI.. Please


Hello my dear! Hopefully you will have liked the chapters that came after although they too contained their share of shocks and some harsh realities . You saw how Pawan did convey the crucial message to Sanskaar; let's see whether he eventually pulls through or succumbs to those terrible injuries . I know no one wants any of the main characters to die but regardless of what I do in the story, I genuinely believe a heroic death has its own beauty 😊

Love,
Shruti x
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Kaveetha

Superb.. 👏

Ha.. Even i request from you.. Don' t let pawan die. He is a brave loyal soldier, good friend & good lover.. So don't let him die..
Well done update the nxt one soon.


Thanks Kaveetha, glad you liked it. I know no one wants Pawan or even SwaSan of course to die but I can't make any promises and soon you will all know if there are any final casualties

Love,
Shruti x
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Posted: 9 years ago

Thanks Mystic 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Pihu.k11

Ehhh.. First time out of shadows.. Dayummm. I knew I so knew it that It would b janki who would give the ultimate blow.. I got an idea about it at the time of that letter scene.. Oh boy.. Everyone would have immediately thought about Ragini but It was janki.. I wonder if Ragini knew.. *Sigh* Nothings pains more than knowing the one you look upto always decieve you.. I feel bad for everyone.. Swara, Shekhar, Sharmishta, Sanskaar.. And Pawan.. This man.. This valiant man who did more for Sanskar than sanskaar's own people.. I always respected him but thank you for making me fall in love with someone other than Swasan in a story. He fought literally till he could oh no more than he could. Please dont let him die.. I feel bad for Mahesh Mahal.. So many double faced people lived by their side all these years and none of these experienced kings and samvant's could even come close to see the real faces..

*Sigh* No comments on anything else, I am too sad..

You dont know but DK is a part now :p Too much attachment here..

And you craft is so beautifully that I have no words to explain!

Awaiting next installment. Please update soon :)

Love,
Palak


Hey Palak!

Ah yes, it was Janaki all along and I tried to play that card close to my chest 😊. Yes the letter scene was my precursor and some were grasping it by then. Ragini does know and she's no saint either but yes, she has been more pawn than dark Queen. All those are to be pitied but most of all Swara as her betrayal from this would be the worst of course. Pawan is the best brother and friend anyone could hope to have 😃 and so deserved for a man like Sanskaar I thought! Awww- you made me so happy saying you fell in love with my Pawan, he is special no? Pawan was my Abhimanyu there in terms of how he fought fearlessly. Yes, again, none at the Mahal are greenhorns but they surely don't deserve this- they weren't traitorous evil people. A lot of DK is sad but I hope a lot is the polar opposite too 😃

Your love of DK touches me so deeply- am humbled and so happy! Thank you!

Lots of love,
Shruti x


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sneharay

Mindblowing Update..
It really gave me goosebumps..
Update soon


Thanks a lot Sneha!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: manasie23

Chap 32

Now I know why I never did like Janaki much inspite of her sacrificing nature...
And I thank the lord the Pawan is alive... I cried bucket full of tears in the previous update when I thought he was dead..


Ahh- you had bad vibes from Janaki before? She was rather wonderful it seemed huh? I know your state at Pawan's was bad so glad that made you happy 😊

Love,
Shru x
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: LoveSonu2408

amaizing updt..

finally sanskar get to knw abt swara..
lets see hw he save swara..
love it.


Thanks a lot Sonu, glad you liked it! 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaheenq

Chapter 32
I was able to get rid of the stress developed due to chapter 31 *Phew*
Firstly, the Dark Queen Janaki Gadodia: I should say she was able to mask her emotions perfectly whilst supporting Ragini and Planning against Swara. Thank God Sanskar got to know a Part of the Actual Truth.
I just cant wait for Sanskar to save hus Lady Love from the clutches of the Beast just like before. Uttara's outburst on Pawan's state was so overwhelming and his Words that he is back for her are just Amazing. I seriously wish that nothing happens to Pawan. I'm waiting for SwaSan Encounter after so many Chapters. Poor SwaSan are surrounded by so many Enemies: Ragini (well technically she just wanted Laksh and wanted Swara gone otherwise I guess she doesn't have much problem with SwaSan and considering her conversation with Pawan in Chap 31 I think she means no harm to Swara now), then we have the duo Kavitha and Kaveri then Devendra Rathore, who just wants to possess everything that Sanskar has and now we have Janaki as well. So I hope SwaSan will be able to overcome all of them. Cant wait for the Next Part. Update Soon.


Hey Shaheen!

I did cause a lot of trauma with 31 huh! Yes Sanskaar does know something but he doesn't quite know the full extent yet. You will have to tell me what you thought about Sanskaar's rescue mission and his disregard for himself to see Swara safe . I feel so much for Pawan and Uttara 😳, such potential there but only of course if he makes it. No no don't be deceived by Ragini, she wasn't as bad as Janaki but she is totally jealous and in her way there is hatred fed to her for years which she has absorbed against Swara too 🤢. You will have seen the unfolding in 33

Love,
Shruti x


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: dilwali

Hi Shru

First of all thanku so much for having Pawan alive n its such a relief among so much terrrible things happening here. 😆
You tried to portray Jaanki's emotions beautifully which led her to the way she has become now but still i cant accept and consider her action justified even for the pain she suffered. If you dont like someone you dont n u dont need to be fake to do all that n harming them in such way😡😡😭 but its my point of view n yes coming back to update It was well written by you specially all the dots you are connecting now. You said chap 32 will be imp for mysteries n yes it was without doubt. Sanskar is very brave n i m sure n i hope so he will save his Swara. Wat an honest n good person is Saamvant Ranjit.😃 I really liked when he told Sanskar about Jaanki n khte hain na khooni apne khoon ka nishan chod hi jaata hai just like that for Jaanki's revelation that letter to Ranjit will play imp role 😉😲i think but you know more than us. I really liked this update n looking forward to next updates. Plz take care of urself n get well soon
Lots of love - Kawal😊😊


Hey Kawal!

😆 The demands and threats I had about Pawan 😲😆. I did want to explain Janaki and hope I managed but of course I never intended to justify her and agree with you that nothing can be enough reason to do what she did do 😡. Glad you saw the need of 32 and felt it joined more dots that needed to be done before we end. Ranjit turned out a true Rajput and a gentleman. Hope you liked the rest and in fact having read your comments I know you do 😊

Love as ever,
Shru xoxo

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