DARK KNIGHT-A SwaSan FF-T4-DELETED-AN PG1- Creations-Pgs 98/9 - Page 46

Originally posted by: fangirl1012

NOOO

Ok sorry for that. Btw I am fangirl 1012 but you can call me Zara. I discovered your story by accident but once I started reading it I couldn't stop. You have captured the essence of Swasan so eloquently. I am hoping they don't become stars in the sky and we get to see or in this case read about their royal wedding😉 How do you write so well? Your writing skills are amazing👏

Originally posted by: Sree8410

Res for chapter 29

With a migraine so bad that I can barely sleep or stay awake I was refreshing this page to see when you'll update. Shruti, what have you done to me???? This obsession with DK is not good help me contain this madness you have unleashed in me.

Sree

Unres

Shruti 🤗

Sree 🤗

Since we have already discussed this on PM I'm just unresing this with most of them copied from my PM.

So to begin with as expected Swara and Sanskar doesn't get much alone time before he leaves for the battle at Baadigunj. To see them separate even for a while - short while- is heart breaking and that too in this situation. But they never needed words to express their feeling for one another earlier so why would they need them now? Loved the silent communication between the two were both touched the talisman as a gesture to let the other know that they will be together soon and that they will be fine.

Yes indeed, these two can talk years worth with a single wordless exchange. And yes the talismans were symbolic but also foreshadowing there as you well know from the subsequent

Pawan is not going😲. I know this last minute change of plans has come as a result of the message from that (Oh I hate her so much that I don't want to take her name) Kavita. But somewhere I feel he is asked to stay for protecting Swara as well. Sanskar couldn't risk her safety and with Ragini lurking around he might have put his best man on guard for his wife till he comes back and take over. I mean I get it that his actions show how much he is trying to figure out whether the person who wrote the letter was Kavita or an imposter and he might be waiting for the reply to Sanskar's reply too. But I like to believe that its for Swara's protection along with this kavita mess.

Yes, very right, Pawan stayed as something big seemed wrong to those two perceptive friends and Sanskaar will not trust anyone else other than him or his soul brother with regards to Swara especially. Also, they have no idea at this point what is happening but the Kavita letter has triggered alarm so Pawan will also make enquiries.

Now coming to Kavita, I hate her. No matter how you portray her I hate her. I do sympathise with her or as close as that for all the torture she had to endure in these 5 years, but that is what you get for betraying the one who placed you above every thing and every one else. I get that when you are taught from childhood on how to woo men true love or genuine feeling will come after material pleasure. I would have accepted everything considering her mentality but the moment she said she would prefer Swara to get caught by Devendra just so that she will be removed from her path is not right but then again we can't expect great deeds from a woman who is brought up to be a mistress of someone. Loyalty will be the last thing in her books. I hate her for wishing to harm an innocent soul who has not done any harm to her directly. She is the reason for her own misery but then again like Ragini she too believes that she was a victim and all others are the reason behind it.

Noted re the Kavita hate 😆. I get it- she wasn't written to be "liked" or even justified; she is who and what she is and of course 33 will show you how it ends with her 😊

How can she trust her mother again. Didn't she already betray her once? How can she be foolish to think that this time things will be different? Oh! I hate her. (You know half of this is filled with this same word repeated over and over again, but I'm helpless I hate her that much and even if you tried to make her a victim of circumstances I would have still hated her, the impact of the show)

"And if the worst should happen and the plan fails, if I cannot have Sanskaar, he may as well be dead. After all, I am all but a living corpse myself so unless he is returned to me to bring me back to life, I will rest with him six feet under." And this is love I suppose. If I can't have you then better you die!! Wow!! But I'm not expecting her to think other wise.

Some part of me would also like to see Kavita and Laksh situation to be out in front of Ragini she needs to see that the woman she is so fond of in helping to get rid of her sister also had a connection with her husband and that too a rather different kind than what Swara had. Then lets see how she will handle the situation.

Hmm, there isn't enough scope and time in the story to really explore Kavita with Ragini even in a remote way, that chapter had to be closed and Ragini's still isn't but she too will be dealt with one way or the other. 😊

And Ragini what the hell is her problem? How can she sent such a message? Help them get in and out just to remove Swara from Sanskar. Doesn't she know what that vile creature did to Swara when she was caught earlier? She deserves to be punished, punished badly for this act. Let her try to harm Swara and then she and her new friend will see what hell raised on earth will be like. I would soo love to see that.

Hmm, I think this was of course before we knew who the real betrayal came from and although Ragini is far from blameless, she and deserves punishment too, she did have her share of conscience about handing Swara over to someone like Devendra 🤢

Love

Sree

P.S. I've missed something which I wanted to say, but I seriously can't remember.

Never mind 🤗 and thanks for this!!

Originally posted by: aamias

res

hi how r u?

sorry cannt unres

janki gadodia so blood is thicker than water

Originally posted by: Sakura24

My dear lord just how many devils are lurking in the shadows here? Res dearest Shru...I'll come back for a lengthy reply. However I did doubt Janki as you might remember at one point we discussed about her. Now sitaharan has been done waiting for Ravan's end...
Love,
Saku

Originally posted by: Meself

Hey Ram!!! And all the while I had been suspecting Shramishtha??? Although I remember I had raised my doubts over Janki and Shramishtha's relationship but this was a massive blow! Like mother like daughter!🤢