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Posted: 9 years ago
Sorry im late...unres @ pg 34...for chapter 29...😔
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Posted: 9 years ago
Res for chap 30...
Unres😊
Shuru love...😃

Chapter 30 was epic...👏😉 this chapter defines swasan relationship..although swara was disturb to know about kavita being alive...but the trust that she shown on sansku define their deep love... brilliantly woven...👏 shruuu...😊

Whole chapter has amazing moments...starting with uttara ..pawan n every other member from maheswari n gadodia family trying to cheer her up...😉

Sujata convo with swara was high light..concern she has for her family's unity ..😊.advice she given to mend her relationship with ragini...n swara answer n concern for only sanskaar 's safety was beyond words..i was in awe..😳.
I have some doubt like sujata knew something???..n wants to mend swaragini relationship...may be im wrong???😕

Coming to janki n swara time spent together n that shocking letter which momentarily changed everything..i was soo scared for swasan...🤢cannot bear another misunderstanding between them...😲 i cried soo much with swara..😭.was praying that swasan do not get seperate...or swara thinking about leaving kavita n sansku together..n left the mahesh mahel...thank God nothing like that happen...😭

the way swara share whatever was in her heart with annapoorna..n realizing that sansku loves only her...they are meant to be together..they are soul mates..the trust she ahown on him was stupendous...loved it...cherished it..😳😃
But little seed of doubt grown in my brain...why annu ask swara to write letter..what she want??i feel that may be she is the mastermind..n want keycode from sansku...n ragini is innocent just acting as her pawn...😕 may be im wrong or right .???dont know??

Janki n swara scene was good...she loves both her mothers verymuch...the concern of janki n swara confession was beautiful...😃

Waiting for next...update soon...😃

Love
Talia😊

Edited by krishuuuuuuuuuu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Unres page 33 for chapter 29
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Posted: 9 years ago
Unres page 40 for chapter 30
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Hello lovely people! Thanks so much for yet more wonderful comments! I am trying to deal with a huge caseload at work so I have some time to start on 31 tomorrow guys. But please be warned- I have work tomorrow and then I am away this weekend so it might be Monday before I can post 31- it is a difficult chapter and I need decent time to write it too so am working furiously but as I am not around most weekend it is difficult! I'll do my best and hope you all will understand!
Love,
Shru x
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">Hello lovely people! Thanks so much for yet more wonderful comments! I am trying to deal with a huge caseload at work so I have some time to start on 31 tomorrow guys. But please be warned- I have work tomorrow and then I am away this weekend so it might be Monday before I can post 31- it is a difficult chapter and I need decent time to write it too so am working furiously but as I am not around most weekend it is difficult! I'll do my best and hope you all will understand!</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">Love,</font>
<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">Shru x</font>


we will wait eagerly for update. Take ur time n tk care dear. Dont be hard on yourself
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Hello lovely people! Thanks so much for yet more wonderful comments! I am trying to deal with a huge caseload at work so I have some time to start on 31 tomorrow guys. But please be warned- I have work tomorrow and then I am away this weekend so it might be Monday before I can post 31- it is a difficult chapter and I need decent time to write it too so am working furiously but as I am not around most weekend it is difficult! I'll do my best and hope you all will understand!

Love,
Shru x


Take your time dear. Will wait...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: prerulalli

Res

Will comment in detail later 😊



Unres,,,,

Swara is so disturbed with the seperation from sanskaar😕😕😕
Uttara trying her level best to cheer her up😊
Sujata nd swar's convo-------It was so beautifully written without any compromising promises made lyk in our telly
Purely logical----I so loved it!!!👏👏👏
Annapurna overheard the convo--Both sujju n annu are stunned with shona's bravery---Aah i so love this girl😊😊😊
Ragini Ragini Ragini--😡🤬---I so knew it!!! it can only be she who cannot see her sister's happiness...Hopeless case i say...Well Thankgod someone had an eye on her...😃😃
The parchment and the message contained in it...😡😡
First of all better that sanskaar ignored her plea to accept her back..but how can that lady expect him to keep her as his mistress...Damn pissed off iam😡😡
These two girls------Ragini and Kavitha---I swear i would love to dig their grave personally and make sure that they remain in that forever and evr🤬
Swara's anger is quite justified...But i loved the way she composed herself saying that Sanskaar can never ditch...By chance if he wanted to go back to kavitha, she would move out of his life (thats my girl get going...Not lyk that sadu rago...Grrr i so hate her 😡😡😡)
Swara analyzing the situations in her mind 😊😊😊 That's so quick and impressive yet she was scared...and she was found by the right person at the right time..Annu😊😊
Their convo is so very amazing👏👏👏
The way annu says to swara to remove all her fears from her mind by writing them on the paper and burning it later is so thoughtful 👏👏👏
All the ladies in this part are so impressed with her bravery
Thats so nice to read
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon
Love,
Prerana😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
Dear Shru,
Unres page 40😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 28-
Hey hun! No sorries from my side this time. I'm just unresing it now without any intro okay? So, coming to the chapter, Pawan and Uttara are so adorable man! I'll call them PaRa okay? So yeah! And PaRa are such big teases. Swara's blush, Aww!! Nymph Princess is all red<3 I love Uttara, she's really sweet, I guess I''ve said this before too, but still. And the best thing of this entire scene was Sanskaar holding Swara's hand throughout and not realising it. I was literally grinning wide with a 'Chhooo Chhweeet' in my mind...lol

Pawan and Sanskaar! Dude, I love their brotherhood. Really man! These two are like brothers and are so amazing ones. Swara finally lashing at Pawan was amazing. The guy has been a tease for too long, he deserves a dose of his own medecine na? Swara rocked here!!

Sujata, well I actually liked this lady always in your FF. In the show there have been instances where I've despised her for being herself, but in your story, I never felt any dislike for her and I guess I was right in doing so. She made me so happy with this dialogue of hers. Even SwaSan were so happy!! Bliss

Ragini...ugh! This lady disgusts me like no other. She has got her love yet she won't let her sister be happy and content now even! Jealousy and Insecurity are man-eaters dude, honestly! And the web that she has women, I hate her I hate her I hate her!!

Swara's worries show that something bad is gonna happen? What do you have up your sleeve haan? Man! You don't know how curious I'm to know whats gonna happen, but in your case, the wait is always worth it! Swara refused to eat until Sanskaar comes back! Aww...chooo chweet! She tried to sleep without eating* jaw drops* Dude, I can't stay more than an 1 hour if I'm hungry! I'll go mad and my head and tummy will burst with pain! Kudos Swara *claps* She was so childish! But yeah man, she fasted for him and Prince Grumpy didn't even show his face! Not fair, Mermaid is angry now! *smiles wide*

I knew it! This window is a SwaSan shipper! Sanskaar has to come from there or throw stones! Just loved it. And Swara's taunts were sooo Oh-worthy! I hope you get it! He hates it when she continuously calls him Prince! Man I just love this nok-jhok wala jhagda! These two are so damn adorable<3 When such a lovable Prince Charming says sorry to you and asks for forgiveness in the most sweetest way possible, who can resist man!! After explaining the way he asks her if she fasted and if she ate and if she forgave him, sheesh man, can there be any guy better? NO!! I just loved this hun! Loved it<3 The way he requests her to please keep no distance between them...damn! I went all flat. Look, you better not provoke me to take this step okay!! This Prince is becoming too sweet for me to take it! I'm gonna rob him for sure now!!

Those touches and kisses were so sensuous and blissful! Just loved the entire para buddy! The sexual tension that prevails between them and flares up between there cute and sweet scenes is a treat. 'I shall have to keep telling to myself it will be all the more sweeter for that' I so loved this line! *blushes* Of course it will be sweeter Prince! But you better come back soon, cuz ur Bhabhi is upto huge mischief...dang it! Both SwaSan are hungry since morning!! My babies<3 This so reminds me of SwaSan KarvaChauth in the show! Although Swara wasn't in love with Sanskaar by then, yet I just remembered that.

My poor babies are so sad because they'll have to stay away from each other for so long. Both of them want to stay with each other only!! Such angst, such deep love!! Damn, I love them! Even I used to wear a Rudrakshta before! It is believed to be the third eye of Shivji! Swara tieing it on Sanskaar's hand was a source of positivity..lol! This reminded me of the Mauli Dhaaga during Diwali, when Ragini was similarly planning to malign Swara and separate Swara from Sanskaar! Her single tear drop! Such a sweet scene that was! Then the ring and necklace left him with no words! Once again SwaSan sleep together just like the Haveli and Tent. Those days were so beautiful na?

Didn't I tell you once, that I don't want Kavita at any cost? I clearly remember doing soo...This is not done! Kavita name reminds of that Kro Nikita and I start sulking! Sanskaar will not leave Swara at any cost that point makes me so happy!! His love is so pure and he won't leave Swara at any cost! I loved this. And Pawan was so concerned for him and Swara! I love this guy.

Waiting for chapter 31 badly!
Loads of love
Sakshi

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