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Shweta Gupta

@ll_megha_ll

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Posted: 9 years ago

#331

Wow didu...

It's awesome and mind blowing update...

Just loved it...

Each paet of this update were full of emotions...

Do continue soon

Thanks for the pm...

Sorry for short comment

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#332

Hello lovely people!

I have just posted Chapter 31 on Page 1. I have inserted a note there with my apologies for my delayed replies to your wonderful comments but I hope you will all understand and bear with me. I read and re-read even the comment multiple times and they endlessly bolster me so please be aware I have read them all and appreciate them so much. I will reply too but am in a fight against time and pressure to keep going to the end of DK!

I am so nervous about 31- I hope I don't disappoint. Please do let me know!

Love to all,

Shru xoxo

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aamias

@aamias

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#333

res

hi how r u?

sorry cannt unres

janki gadodia so blood is thicker than water

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Vini224

@Vini224

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#334

Shruti

Please don't let Pawan die.😭Hope by some miracle he's still alive.That whole scene was so heartbreaking.Why do you have to kill him off? Please bring him back Shruti.

That Janaki😡As you know how I changed my opinion and thought the culprit to be Janaki but still somehow never expected her to be this ruthless.Yes she wants to destroy Swara but I thought she will just play behind the scenes causing havoc but not do anything like what she did here.And the way she is described ,holding the blood dripping dagger calmly and her eyes were sad and wise as always was quite chilling.So there was no agitation or even slight remorse on her part for what she did.I want her to meet a miserable end😡

The talk between Sanskar and Lakshya was good.Finally misunderstandings were cleared between them.Was very glad that Laksh told Sanskar about Kavitha.Now Kavitha will not even remain as a pleasant memory for Sankar.Good riddance.laksh is in love with Ragini does that mean her evils will go unpunished .

Ragini did let Pawan know where Swara was,is it because she's changing or her confidence that Pawan would not be able to rescue Swara.Was Ragini also in on her mother's plan.

The beast Devendra is back and he hurt Swara by ripping the chain.😡I'm so waiting to see Sanskar rip Devendra apart.So in the next chapter will Swara meet Kavitha since now Swara is Devendra's captive.?.

Still not clear about Annapurna.Where did she go and what did she do to the letter?

Is it the same letter Sanskar received ?.Too many questions.Hope everything gets cleared in the coming chapters.

Love

Vini

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Sree

@Sree8410

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#335

Res

Shruti love you will unres soon. Can't wait😳

Sree

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The.Lannister

@The.Lannister

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

#336

Chapter 31:

"veterans like shekhar" ...for some reason this made me laugh😆

Finally the cousins have a much needed heart - to - heart. And oh God Laksh actually loves Ragini now?🤢In hind sight it seems Laksh has matured over the years. Of course he is nowhere near his brothers or Pawan but he seems to have come a long way from what he was. If only he had told Sanskaar everything about Kavita then, the story would have been very different today.

Now what letter did Sanskaar receive? Did AP send him Swara's letter?

I had a bad feeling about this whole thing when all of a sudden Pawan & AP went missing, Shomi was ill, the priest performed the Pooja only at a particular time & hence Janaki HAD to be there ASAP Everything seemed so wrong.

Ragini continues to confuse as always. Now knowing the end I know she refused to divulge more information since it would mean outing her mother but then had she told Pawan about Janaki then he could have taken more help with him which could have helped him save Swara. So even here, knowing everything about Dev, knowing Swara has forgiven her, in spite of fearing for Swara...she will only help in half measures?🤢 Mother & daughter are truly rotten. Loved that little moment between PaRa. Oh God but Uttara is going to be so shattered when she learns about Pawan😭

So loser Dev got an army to kidnap a woman. Real brave man. And he calls himself a soldier👏 👏 👏 This man is sick & like all twisted people he knows how to inflict maximum pain. Tearing off that chain from Swara was too painful to read about

Janaki! What a 🤬 I think i hate her more than Dev because at least Dev is an outsider. But to do this to your own daughter, step daughter yes, but still your daughter! And more important than that...a woman doing this to another woman. But then history has proven that it is always a woman who leads to another woman's ruin🤢 I always wanted a painful death for Dev. I still do. But I want Janaki to live. I want her to live & suffer & I want her to see her daughter suffer as well. No more forgive & forget for Ragini please!

Though you keep referencing the Ramayan throughout this story Pawan here reminded me of Abhimanyu. A lone soldier who fought alone, trying to save the day. He fought against so many & then he fell

Pawan cannot die. Uttara is waiting for him😭 My Pawan!😭 My PaRa!😭 😭 😭 That little PaRa moment was a dagger to my heart. You give them their ONE single moment at such a time when their future together seems so bleak. You are cruel Shru😭

Edited by The.Lannister - 9 years ago

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#337

Originally posted by: aamias
res
hi how r u?

sorry cannt unres

janki gadodia so blood is thicker than water

Hey Asmita!

I am ok, thanks- struggling with my back now after sitting in a stiff position for hours but received this is posted. How are you? And yes, for some people blood is thicker . Take your time to unres and thanks for reading x

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#338

Originally posted by: The.Lannister
😭

I wanted to dedicate this chapter to you but that would have been a spoiler almost 😭. Had to be done- sorry!!!

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Sree

@Sree8410

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#339

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11
Hello lovely people!
I have just posted Chapter 31 on Page 1. I have inserted a note there with my apologies for my delayed replies to your wonderful comments but I hope you will all understand and bear with me. I read and re-read even the comment multiple times and they endlessly bolster me so please be aware I have read them all and appreciate them so much. I will reply too but am in a fight against time and pressure to keep going to the end of DK!

I am so nervous about 31- I hope I don't disappoint. Please do let me know!

Love to all,

Shru xoxo

Why do you always apologise for not being able to respond to comments😡? We all can understand your situation so don't take tension in this regard. See I'm wasting my precious time consoling you rather than reading my chapter. So chill!! Don't you know sorries are not allowed?

Sree