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shamina

@Sakkiyah

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Posted: 9 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Dear Sakkiyah

Replied in blue above 😃

Love,
Shruti x

Shruti, my friend

Iam really happy after reading your reply.

Waiting for your next update.

Take care of your health

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_InDreamWorld_

@_InDreamWorld_

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Posted: 9 years ago

#72

Shruti congrats for new thread

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dilwali

@dilwali

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Posted: 9 years ago

#73

Hi Shru first of all so sorry for late comment got very busy so could not I hope u ll nt b angry with me
now coming to update it was as usual ur brilliant way of expressing pain n love of swasan which impressed me again as always. I really got worried after reading that Shekhar is fixing Swara's marriage with someone n I am eagerly waiting for next updates n my fingers are crossed that it will not happen ( By the way I know u wont make that happen u r also a mad swasan fan like all of us still worried thoda sa you never know what writers can do...hehehe ). I am also surprised how Ragini is behaving. She is still behaving as if she has done nothing but again I know you must have thought something for her. I really got impressed the way DP honoured Swara. Eager to read coming updates
Loads of love n take care of urself

wrongly posted at third thread earlier

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#74

Hey guys!

I am so sorry for not responding to so many detailed comments yet. I am frantically working on 27 as I know so many of you are eager to know what happens next so I really hope you will prefer a delayed response rather than a delayed chapter.

Please bear with me!

Lots of love,

Shru xoxo

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

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Posted: 9 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11
Hey guys!
I am so sorry for not responding to so many detailed comments yet. I am frantically working on 27 as I know so many of you are eager to know what happens next so I really hope you will prefer a delayed response rather than a delayed chapter.

Please bear with me!

Lots of love,

Shru xoxo

Dear Shru,

That choice is a no brainer - obviously the chapters, your response to our comments can wait till hell freezes over. Hopefully, this will not be another heart breaker. Please!

And what's more important is your health so please note the priority order is your health and then the chapter update.

loads of love,

Nyna

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 9 years ago

#76

@ Nyna

I second that

Edited by lucky.m - 9 years ago

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The.Lannister

@The.Lannister

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Posted: 9 years ago

#77

Chapter 27:

Shru 🤗

You seriously need to work on your timings Shru. How do I always end up reading all your work (with such content that too☺️) when I am in a crowded train?! Balancing myself with one hand is difficult enough but to shield the phone so no one can read what I am reading & understand why I am blushing to the roots of my hair is another herculean task. Now of course like a grown up person I can just bookmark the thing & go back home & read but utna sabr bhi nahi hota na!!!🤔 And naturally I wont blame myself😆 so let me blame you😆 😆 But I love you so much 🤗 What an awesome mindblowing chapter and I do not mean just the ending😉

OK so shuruwaat se shuru karte hai...

Swara too is wearing the dress he chose for her & the bangles too😳 How does she really plan to stay away from him? Does she not realize it would be impossible for her Ragini had been silent for way too long. I did wonder about that...now that she has spewed her venom my mind is at ease now😊 Though why is she unhappy? I refuse to believe she is scared of Sanskaar's accusations. She is too thick skinned to be much affected by mere accusations. And then there are enough fools there to side with her😊 Some moh moh problems maybe I am so happy Swara shut her up & in what a way👏

I do not like seeing Ranjit in the same room as Swara. Don't look at her. She is not yours. She is Sanskaar's! Look away NOW😵

Now you know how much I hate tamashas. I sincerely believe that things should be resolved by talking in a civil manner instead of resorting to theatrics or cheap antics which our show loves so much. Hence though I wanted to see Sanskaar fight for his right & love I dreaded the moment equally. I just did not know how he would resolve this issue without creating a big tamasha. But he did ...my Prince!! Could he be any more perfect. He did it all: politely asked for Swara's hand in marriage, let everyone know how serious he is about Swara, did not budge when every single person in the room was trying to make him see "sense",, set a concerned mother's heart at ease, shut up his own mother, stood firm in front of the entire Rajput clan...but but but cherry on the cake was when he allowed Swara the ultimate choice😳 It reminded me of an old story I had read about King Arthur's knight where a witch had asked him a question no one could answer "what does a woman truly want." The answer was she wants the right to make her own choices😳

And Swara will never ever let him down. That is the best part of this story that they BOTH are in love, that they BOTH care for one another, that they BOTH fight to be with one another. Sanskaar literally just handed her his heart & pride when he gave her the right to choose. And she chose wisely. I am so proud of her 🤗 Ranjit was never even an option. She would have chosen to remain single...and that too just because she thought that would benefit Sanskaar in some way, but as soon as the choice is between Sanskaar & another man her reply is unequivocal: Sanskaar! Always!😳

It is so good to see a couple so well matched & so worthy of one another. They are a rarity, an almost extinct species😆 But they sure have the good sense to understand what they have found in one another & aren't just throwing it all away carelessly as we see happen most often with the truly blessed.

So Ranjit wasn't that bad huh? I hope he stays this way & doesn't do some douche stuff by going & making fraandships with Dev🤢 How surprising nai that people like Dev. Ranjit, Pawan, were able to understand that SwaSan love one another just by seeing them together but Swara's own Pitashri doesnt get it? And how lame is he looking to Janaki for guidance in everything?! How come men like him are only able to man up when they are cheating on their wives😡 I felt so bad for Shomi today...those lines spoke volumes of how her life has been with Shekhar...always on the fringes blamed for the mistake of the son of the house And Laksh siding with Sanskaar😲 Ye ho kya raha hai? Wifey is gonna be super pissed off😆 Jo thappad padte nahi wahi sabse jyada lagte hai...Ragini ko kya jhannatedaar chaata pada hai aaj Swara ne acchi khaasi sunai, fir pati ne naiyya dubaai & end mein Sanskaar ki sarcastic smile😈 BURN! You deserve much worse😡

That whole scene with the water gardens lit up with tapers & candlelights & moonlight reminded me of the Jalte Diye sequence from PRDP😆 It was so romantic Shru I have no idea why you were unsure about this sequence. It was ethereal in its beauty. Surreal almost. Finally everything is cleared up between them. Both know that they love & are loved back with equal measure😳 Swara's dialogue about having to be both Janaki & Shomi reduced me to tears. If only parents realized how much their behaviour affects their children & influences all their future decisions Would parents be more careful then? But chalo all is well that ends well & Swara need not fear. She will not be the next Shomi, Janaki, Annapurna, Sujata, Ragini. She will be the one about whom stories will be written...such will be her love story so complete & so beautiful.

Most never get lovemaking scenes right. Either it ends even before its started😆 or they make it all too cheap to be enjoyed at all. But this one was just perfect😳 since it concentrates more on the love these two have for each other. It is their love which guides all their actions, hence Swara though bashful is still bold, she is willing to try & give free reign to all that she is feeling for the first time in her life, her complete trust in & surrender to Sanskaar so obvious here & naturally Sanskaar stops when he does for these same reasons😳

MORE MORE MORE!

Edited by The.Lannister - 9 years ago

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#78

Hello lovely people!

I have just updated Chapter 27! It's 2 am here and I am working tomorrow so please understand if you see delayed responses and anyway, I have many replies to also make on Chapter 26. Hope you won't be disappointed with 27 and I anxiously await the verdict!

Love always,

Shruti x

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Sree

@Sree8410

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Posted: 9 years ago

#79

Res chapter 27

Shruti love you for this one. let me read now.

Forgive me love, I'm too happy to find right words to express anything right now. All I can say right now sitting on a cold floor is that you have simply made my day. I knew he would take action but not like this, but I love it anyway. If I could I would be dancing but like you know my husband has already declared me crazy don't want to put a stamp on that one again.

Will unres today latest by tomorrow.

Unres

Shruti 🤗,

Sorry for the delayed unresing. As I've already said my favorite parts are the 2 and the 3rd. I have no idea how many times I must have read them, simply because the way Sanskar fought for his love.

Part one the only thing worth was the way she chose to dress up from the ones her Prince bought for her and shut her sister up. I don't get what her problem is? She got all that she wanted and more then why can't she stop snooping around Swara?

Ranjit turned to be a good guy. Thank you for that. Not that he had a chance against Sanskar. I like him not just for backing out but he was the only one who voiced the feeling both our love birds share. So no Kavya or Urvasi for him. We can get someone nice for him since he was good.

Coming to Part 2 - Sanskar alone stole the entire show here.

The time Sanskar arrived there I was holding my breath to know what he was going to do then. Then he went and told DP that he wanted to talk alone and I was a bit unsure about Swara here as she was forced to be there and was wondering if she will chose to ease her parents dilemma. Then he goes and declares to the world that he wants to marry Swara and asked DP to not interfer in it. No wonder he was alarmed at such a request. His words to his uncle were clearly stating her importance to him when he said he will forgo every title and honour for her. Well we knew that didn't we?

Sanskar was just not asking for her hand infact if anything he was persistant and claimed it to be his right to marry Swara. Her place in his life was emphisised time and again by him. (I might end up quoting the entire part so I'm trying not to do that, but these ones touched my heart more than the rest) He was not ready to take "no" for an answer this time. I LOVE IT!!!

"You have my word Lady. I will stand as her shield always. Anyone or anything that comes for her will have to go through me first. And I am sure my family will give their word too that she will not be mistreated but frankly, if they do not, I will leave with her and ensure she gets what she is entitled to." What more can a mother ask for when her son-in-law guarentees to be with her daughter to this extent.

Their psychic conversation was even more highlighted here. The way he asked her to support him and she did it. That was a greater relief for me. I was worried more about Swara than anyone else. All others did respond the way we can expect. Love the part where he says if you don't agree I'll simply kidnap her again😆.What more can a girl ask than a man who will fight the whole world to be with her?? I love your Sanskar.

"If, after this, there is still any question of not having her married to me, I shall simply kidnap her again and whoever wishes to stop me is welcome to try!"😆 This is not a request it is a declaration forcing them to chose wisely or be ready to face another scandal.

Part 3☺️ I always wanted a mindblowing confession from Swasan. And thank you for that. Loved the confrontation before the confession equally. All MU's sorted followed by the right sequence of proposal. Finally they chose to do it the right way.

"Oh I am not pinning anything on you! I am the fool who is so eager to marry you after all and doesn't care that he has to announce it to the world and threaten war if it doesn't happen or to kidnap you again!" "Yes damn it! And I would! If you refuse to see sense and our idiotic families too, what am I to do?" I simply love these words.

"Of course I love you, you foolish girl! God- what did you think? The way I have been with you, my actions, those kisses- could you not tell?" You have any idea how many times I've read this ? Just love they way they both get shocked to know that they were in love with each other all along.

Don't ask about the remaining part of part 3. I was sitting on a cold floor still I was feeling quiet hot.☺️ Again you made him stop abruptly. Well my Sanskar is too Sanskari he won't cross the line without permission and right. I did ask you once whether there was a need for bed and bedroom when the passion and love for each other is so much and here you answered that as well. I've became shameless now.😳

I also loved Ram, AP and Janki here along with Ranjit as he is the only one who voiced the reason behind Sanskar's actions and pressing them to give in to his request of getting married to his love. Apart from Shekar and Sujatha all seems to be in right set of mind. And why does he need his wife's approval on everything. If Janki refused then will he have said no? Like I've said AP and Janki stand out as two strong Rajput queens. They both have their own stand and spoke up when needed. AP's dialogue to Sujatha made me proud.

Loved the scene where Ram and Pawan ask Sanskar to go for a short while if he wants to take some breath after all that talking😉 What a father giving ideas to his son to meet with his princess before marriage. 😆 Para scene at the end was also a good touch. All the four embarrassed and loved Uttara's bush and smile at her bhabi and Pawan's smirk with Sanskar's glare.

Laksh ko kya ho gaya? Suddenly he is channelling Lakshman to Sanskar's Ram? Anyways good to know he won't be a hurdle. I don't want to talk about Ragini.

Next time let me know you will be updating. My battery completely ran out by the time I received your message and opened DK. My crazy is such that I chose to sit down on the floor with a blanket over my head and read the whole chapter. If it wasn't enough I wanted to wake my husband and ask him go to work so that I can read it again without fear of him waking up and seeing me like that. Seriously yaar, you and DK has made me crazier than I was before.😳

Love

Sree

Edited by Sree8410 - 9 years ago