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Posted: 9 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: Helee

finally u r back... I was waiting for this chapter... its awesome not boring😳 loved it.


Thank you , m sorry again for the delay , but glad u like what ended the wait 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62

Thank you 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: harshitaloomba1

Read all the parts n loved them


Thank you harshita😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: SwaSan4ever

So good to see ur updt was waiting for this story to cont ! Really getting more interesting .. Very well written .. Will b waiting for the nxt part want to knw how SwaSan 's relation develop & wht is the secret of being gay but not a gay in real


thank you , sorry for poating late m gonna try be more regular and u'll get answers to ur queries 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: raaz19

Wow after days you updated and that with a bang...so.happy and please update soon...

I won't get bored at all...loved this chapter as much as the last...

Update soon...

Raz


Yes after days finally i got hit by Swasan's arrow 😆 so glad u found this good worthy i will surely try to update as soon as i can
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: Sanya17

In this story we had one big question why the hell kavita chose to accuse him of being gay😡 I can guess she was big oppurtunist who betrayed sanskar , smhw sanskar got to know her true colours and she put the blame on sanskar but why the hell she accused him of being gay which he clearly isn't she could have opt for smthing else why this one

I always wanted a story on both of them being drunk my naughty wish got fulfilled by this story 😉

This story has comedy comedy part too the sixer in the first run dialogue made me laugh and people think he is gay🤣🤣
I am loving this story plz update soon😊



Hehe i know the gay part is a bit intriguing , i shall try to give logical explanation to this unlike whatever cvs throw at us , Glad to having fulfilled ur wish , that was mine too :p thank you soo much for loving this story i will update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
Well i soo wanted to reply to all's comment but newbie complusory we aint allow to reply more than 10 comments in 24 hours so i gave priority to updating , but you guys are awesome <3 ND extremely encouraging , i shall try to give regular update , thank you all for your comments & likes :*
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 5

She sat looking at her husband who has been trying explain her his brother is the right choice for his sister

"Had he been the right choice then why did he use our name to threaten Swara???" She asked glaring at her husband attempts

"Ragini Sit down and listen to me, hadn't Sanskaar done that Swara would have had ran to London and turn his marriage proposal down" he himself lost the count of how much times he said that line



"okay i know Swara is wrong here , running away is not always a way but Anyone will do that if asked to marry a ...a gay" She hesistated to say the last bit fearing to offend her husband

"Sanskaar is ..." He stopped as he remembered his promise to his brother , but then he decided an alternative way pulling his wife close to him

"Do you trust me?"

"More than myself"

"then trust me Sanskaar is the perfect choice for your sister and you'll see that someday"

Though his words weren't as convincing to her , she decided to go along with it , they all helped Swara and Sanskaar to disclose , her pregnancy but hid the conceiving months

After 4 months

"Jiji i always knew my Sanskaar isn't...that...what those people said" She said happily looking at her son supporting his pregnant wife down the stair

"I feel tired to walk" She whine as she placed her head against his chest, day by day she found him growing more possessive and protective for her wait not her but their baby, and she developed this laziness out of nowhere , she stopped asking him for anything , since he wouldn't answer her

"Walking is good for health ,specially for you and the baby"
He started admiring how she was adapting in his lifestyle but somehow he started hating her silence , was he missing her bubbliness?

He held her tight as she stepped on the last stair

"Sanskaar i want you to do something!" he heard his bade papa

"Yes bade papa , anything for you"

"Well there's this best businessman Award ceremony tonight and you're nominated ,am mostly sure you will win it and i want you to attend it with Swara" He announced rigidly , she always found it funny How fierceful Sanskaar were infront of others but quiet infront of his bade papa

"But bade papa, Swara is Pregnant , she feels tired..."he tried to make an escape

"No no , m completly fine Sanskar and you said it yourself walking is good for health" she could feel he was pissed at her objection and throwing his words at himself and she was happy for that , all those days she din't want to walk and exercize yet he forced her

Later in the day , She sat infront of her open wardrobe eating her nails

"Whats wrong with you??" he asked looking at her all dishelved

"Its a party tonight and i have no cloths" she replied fixing her eyes at her wardrobe

He gave a quick look at her wardrobe and found it filled with cloths

"Girls!" he shook his head

"What girls????" she was back in her angry mode

"You have soo many cloths yet you are confused about what to wear, that's typical"

"Really Mr Sanskaar Maheswari , all these clothes Used to be my size until you decided to fit your Child inside of me" she blasted at him as he backed behind , that was a very first time he din't retort back probably he was liking how she said "His child" , " 4 months ,only 4 months and it seems like a mini football club tent" she said pointing towards her little baby bump

Next she heard was him bursting in laughters , she could swear that was the very first time she saw him laughing like that, she dint know how but her lips curved a smile as she watched him laughing whole heartedly

This girl was impossible , no matter how hard he tried but she would always do or say something which will melt the shell he has been caging himself since years

"It's not funny" she glared as she realized he was laughing so hard at her and that brought him back to reality

"Laughing?? really sanskaar??" he kicked himself mentally and walked to his wardrobe and removed a packet handling it to her

"What????" She asked

"Open it , what else?"

She reluctantly opened it and squealed excitedly on finding a pink Saree with simple yet elegant working , she could swear she never saw any other saree as beautiful as this one

"this is magnificent but i dunno how to wear , i can walk in it and all but idunno how to drap this thing , i could ask for Ragini's help but she went at mom's place" she couldn't keep her eyes offthe saree and he could see that

"I'll help you" he couldn't believe he said that

"are you serious??????" she asked excitedly , what was surprising to him was she wasn't reluctant to take his help but was unsure if he would really help her

he smiled at her cuteness and mouthed a little yes to her

Curled her hairs, tied her petticoat across her waist , her blouse on , minimum make up on her face , she waited for sanskaar to get out of the washroom to help her wear her saree

"Where have you been ...Your kind of people is the reason of drought in this country!" She pouted her lips giving an angry expression to him

He looked at her puzzingly when it hit him , he had to help her wear her saree

"Excited to be at the party??" he chuckled looking at her waiting impatiently

"No excited to wear this saree, see i got everything matching" she pointed towards her make up and jewellery

"You really do like this saree right??" he asked with a serious tone
"you gotta be kidding me , i normally hate sarees and all but this one has something very attractive about it , i can't wait to see how it'll look on me" She was honest with her every word and he knew it


"You know it's not really expensive" he confessed as past memories hit him

"So what??? you know elegance has nothing to do with price , now if you're done can you start helping me!" she said giving the other end of the saree to him

He reluctantly took the saree end approached her and tucked it gently against her waistline , as she felt his touch she realize all this while she was standing barely dressed infront of him

He slowly drapped the saree around her keeping his focus everywhere just not on her...True what lakshya said , soo many girls tried to seduce him yet he never got seduced but there was something very different about Swara which always attracted him towards her and now getting her to wear her saree and touching her bare waist was surely not an easy task for him but how to explain that to someone who thinks he is gay

She felt herself shivering as he worked his fingers against her navel tucking in her pleats..."His touch was always so gentle and perfect " she couldn't picturize him gay , thats perhaps one of the reason she always liked to irritate him, she unconsciously smiled at how hard he was trying to let his finger touch her bare waist the least , she was undoubtedly shy but at the same time she was liking her effect on him..." i seriously wonder now why do you hide yourself behind this gay shell" she thought

"Done" he clicked a pin folding her blouse and saree together

"You look good in red!" she said giggling

"red??"he asked confused looking at his black formal suit

"Red...face" she laughed harder as he behaved like a kid being caught while stealing something
"and do you know what???" he gently placed his lips on her ears and whispered

"my baby given curve make you look even sexier in this saree" true he said , her little baby bump was making her look more attractive to him, as he ended he watched she closed her eyes as if still feeling his word and lips against her ears , he smirked at winning the upper hand , the evening started with tagline "the teaser got teased" he whispered loud enough to reach her making her heartbeat race faster
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Res..

Unres dear... May I know your name... Me kamila...

Awesome update... I loved Laksh Ragini convo... Ohh saree wearing scene was fabulous... I loved it... Then here comes the teasing.. Red face... I lived swaras dialogues... Sanskaar caring... All.. Everything... Loved it... Please update soon...


Kam...

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Edited by Vaiyambar...... - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you for updating. Now I am becoming greedy , please update the next part soon. Loving it so much😃

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