//GUSTAKH DIL\\ A SwaSan SS - Part 3 updated at page 20 - Page 17

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: rayab_rajpoot

Hi soumi...
First of all a big sorry for the late response...
Update was super...
Loved it...
thanks for the pm
eagerly waiting for more...
Update more soon
with love;
your Rayu.


Ray 🤗
hi dear...
its ok bt nxt tym dnt b late...i will b angry on you
my teddy bear 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: hp_2006

Sorry Soumi dear for the late reply..You know na i was busy since last few days..😊
Now only got the time to read your update and I must say that it was written beautifully😳😳😃

So you are telling the story in two different timelines, Swasan love story and then Swasan marriage preparations..

In the first part , Sanksaar seems to be pissed off with Swara😆 But loved those scenes..Swara is little bit apprehensive about marrying Sanskaar..

Anyways their marriage is happening now,..And their scenes were romantic
Dida is damn funny😆 I love her..😉


Why srry yaar???
Dosti me no srry.no thnk u...
i cn undrstnd...bt do gv us one more chapter wd epilouge in ZRHUM pls 😛
i am glad that u liked d cncept...
Dadi will b d cupid among thm in future too...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Update soon and pm me babes.. Won't be roaming around... Make it fast..
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...

Update soon and pm me babes.. Won't be roaming around... Make it fast..

Aftr 15th May i m free thn i'll update all...pls bear wd me u all.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing Story Soumi.
Read all the Three Parts Together.
Agle Part se Long comment Dungi.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: 92Sara

Amazing Story Soumi.
Read all the Three Parts Together.
Agle Part se Long comment Dungi.


Sure Sara well thnx for reading and liking will PM u for sure from nxt tym 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Soumi sorry for this late reply
Nice story
Interesting plot
Loved it
Pls forgive ur bhulakkad buddy for not reading it earlier. U know I am a type of person ki when I reach my school then I ask -" aaj kuch home assignment tha kya"... I know that's bad but that's how I am
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Posted: 9 years ago
Beautiful update
Waiting for your next update
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
SoumI,

this story is going great! You gAve us a gripping prologue... How Sanskar who was head over heels in love with Swara gave her so much pain, that things went upto divorce? I guess Ragini was the cause!

Do update it regularly and send PM... So far I've enjoyed it.

Love,
Dyuti
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Posted: 8 years ago
Yaar loved it
Pm when u next update

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