//GUSTAKH DIL\\ A SwaSan SS - Part 3 updated at page 20 - Page 16

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: soumi93


Aheli tr valo legeche.sedin smy pelam to vblm update kre di ontoto ekta stry.

Haan re Soumi amr khub vlo lege6e re. Vlo e kore6is sedin k update kore diye. Daarun 1 ta notun update peye gelam. Porer part ta o shomoy pele taratari update kore dis re.😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sujoyricky

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Soumi seriously a awesome update 👏
Loved it
Swasan gets bored listening their parents convo 😆
Swasan scene was lovely
Finally ice cream wala scene toh 😳
Fatafat update karte raho aise hi 😉


I will update when i will be free re.now a days so much busy.
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow soumi i read once agn prologue nd 3parts at a time,girl love it da way u portrayed both swasan amazing!!!
Edited by Anusha62 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Soumi dear...
Wonderful update...enjoying story soo much..desperate to know what happened between them...
loving this phase of swasan relationship...
Update quickly quickly...

Love
Talia
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Anusha62

wow soumi i read once agn prologue nd 3parts at a time,girl love it da way u portrayed both swasan amazing!!!


Anu thnx for liking girl...
Ya this tym i was late in updating.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Soumi dear...

Wonderful update...enjoying story soo much..desperate to know what happened between them...
loving this phase of swasan relationship...
Update quickly quickly...

Love
Talia


Talia
Thank u for liking the stry
will update soon once i am free from all work and projects.
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Posted: 9 years ago
soumi...🤗
sorry dear for late reply...i said u to night i will read it...see i kept my promiss...😉 arey due to little work i for got to read it yaar dnt mind fleezzz...


and abt update wow...!it really nice...el sec iam confused with ur another story and read last part agn i and recalled whole story...😆 arey jab sab kuch acha challing btw swasan kyu divorce yaar...Errhhh...!aakhir kya hoga in dono ko beach may...?excited to knw abt that...and bdw who is the person sanskar spoke in phn?so many qus are rasing in my mind...


wonderfull update yaar...sanskar planing may dida tho pani dala...😆but they enjoyed cute sa eye lock wow...! waiting for next update...next tym i wont be late okay...😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Tapathi

soumi...🤗

sorry dear for late reply...i said u to night i will read it...see i kept my promiss...😉arey due to little work i for got to read it yaar dnt mind fleezzz...


and abt update wow...!it really nice...el sec iam confused with ur another story and read last part agn i and recalled whole story...😆arey jab sab kuch acha challing btw swasan kyu divorce yaar...Errhhh...!aakhir kya hoga in dono ko beach may...?excited to knw abt that...and bdw who is the person sanskar spoke in phn?so many qus are rasing in my mind...


wonderfull update yaar...sanskar planing may dida tho pani dala...😆but they enjoyed cute sa eye lock wow...!waiting for next update...next tym i wont be late okay...😉


Hi tappu yaa u r late 😡ok nxt tym mat karna 😃
Aaage aage dkho kya kya hoga!!!!!!!!
waiting for the twist baby.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi soumi...
First of all a big sorry for the late response...
Update was super...
Loved it...
thanks for the pm
eagerly waiting for more...
Update more soon
with love;
your Rayu.
Edited by rayab_rajpoot - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sorry Soumi dear for the late reply..You know na i was busy since last few days..😊
Now only got the time to read your update and I must say that it was written beautifully😳😳😃

So you are telling the story in two different timelines, Swasan love story and then Swasan marriage preparations..

In the first part , Sanksaar seems to be pissed off with Swara😆 But loved those scenes..Swara is little bit apprehensive about marrying Sanskaar..

Anyways their marriage is happening now,..And their scenes were romantic
Dida is damn funny😆 I love her..😉

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