//GUSTAKH DIL\\ A SwaSan SS - Part 3 updated at page 20

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Hello Guys...I am back again to irritate all of you.Well first of all A very very heartiest cngratulations to SR fr completing 1 succesful year.
Most important one is Vahe - The winners of GPA
Varun Kapoor & Helly shah my babies 🤗
Love u Swasan 😳 And aftr that victory we got BJKT from cvs 🤣 in form of showing gratitude by sidelining Swasan completely that we hardly get to see Swasan or swara and sanskar solo scenes. Anywys CVs koi bhi saazish hume swasan ko pyaar karne se nahi rok sakti 😆
Chalo bhasan bohot hua ab kaam ki baat pe aate he 🤣 I am back wd my SS on swasan...My ongoing FF is "Tu Hi Re" which was nt updated since a long tym.
But i am posting this SS so that u can njoy this one in the meantime.

PROLOGUE

1:45 pm, Court Room,Kolkata,20th Feb,2016

"Before passing the final verdict of this case i would like to hear from the both sides about their deceision final time" announces the judge to the lawyers sitting with their clients before him.
Mrs.Anita Sahani, lawyer of Swara Sanskar Maheswari stands up and declared in a firm voice

"My Lord my client Mrs.Swara wants this divorce without any hesitation or pressure.Pls make her free from this relation as soon as possible.Thank You"... she completes and looks at Swara who is sitting next to her looks down and hide her tears.

Swara composes herself and in mind she says "Be strong swara" and looks up.
Noting down swara's side of explanation judge is now looking at the other direction.
A beautiful lady is sitting lazily on chair as if she is enjoying the ongoing movie infront of her with a smile of reliefment.When judge asks her about the final time she stands up from her seat and looks at Swara and smirks.Then she turned to the judge and says mockingly,

"See sir my client is so disgust with this marraige that he dnt even bother to come here for the final judgemnt.well as my procecuter friend says yes We too i mean my client too want ..." before she can complete her sentence a voice comes from behind...
"Not to get divorced at all.I wanna continue with this marraige and I am nt ready fr this divorce my lord please" everyone looks at the direction of door and spots a man is standing there and breathing heavily as if he comes there all running...
"What the hell is this Sanskar???are you freaking out of your mind???what r u saying" yelled Ragini in anger.

"Stop this crap Ragini...you r my lawyer and i am your client so ur duty is to cnvey my wish to judge as i want not as you want...got it" Sanskar almost said all in great anger and louder voice that all the person present in the courtroom left dumbstuck and stunned seeing him. Ragini couldn't believe her ears and before she can say anything Sanskar continued,
"My lord please please give me a chance to talk to my wife before you pass any verdict.please sir its a matter of two life..please please give me a chance" he almost crying saying all those to judge.
Swara being a silent watcher of all this happening infront of her eyes.She really cant believe that its Sanakar saying those words and he did say that he want to keep this marraige????how?????why???she shakes her head in disbelief.
Judge says "the court will resumed after lunch today till then sort out your cnfusion Mr.Sanskar and aftr lunch i will pass the final verdict of this case.The court is adjourned"

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Swara comes out of the courtroom running wd tearful eyes.Sanskar calls her name from back bt she didnt paid attention. Sanakar runs in a lil more speed and catches her.

"Swara please stop!!!!give me one chance to put my views" sanskar requests her.

"No sanskar its too late i dnt want to listen anything"...Swara says in a broken voice and breaks down there while sanskar still holds her hand from back...

He too sits with her there the ongoing sight of swara is becoming unbearable for him.He cant stands it anymore...He is going to cup her face bt she moves her face in different direction and says,"Why are you doing this with me???why r u punishing me for loving u,what is my fault???please i cant bear this anymore...please kill me bt dnt do this to me"

Sanskar cant stand her last words anymore and he shouted ,"SWARA"
and hugged her tightly while swara is too shocked to react and closes her eyes in pain and helplessness.

Precap: Swasan first meet

So guys tell me should i continue this or not???please live ur comments below

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Part One
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Hello guys😛 well i must say that the reponse is truely overwhelming and encouraging😳 as a writer its very important for me to get the responses from my readers.Well I hv gone through each and every comments on this thread...so many question arrises in your minds regarding the prolouge well its good 👏 and thats why i dnt post any queries by myself at the end of prolouge...😆
Who is Ragini??why she is behaving so much with Sanskar denial of divorce?why swasan are divorcing each other?and the most important question which no one arrises that why swara is accusing Sanskar instead of Ragini for punishing her???😲
Well dnt panic guys...we all get to know the answers part by part in this story so mera pravachan samapt karti hoon😆 and lets move on to the Stroy 😳

PART-1

ONE YEAR EARLIER

12th Feb, 2015, North Kolkata

Kolkata the city of joy always maintains a good balance between agony and ecstasy in its daily life...people rushes from here to there every day and some gets happiness at the end of the day some not but life goes on here in full speed.There is no time for anyone to stop and relax...But days are not same for all every time.
In this busy life there is one family is relaxing and enjoying there day in their own world...Because there is something special about this day...
North Kolkata is known for its legacy and culture that carried by it from many ages... the noise full streets of Shyambazar is listening something different from the usual traffic sounds and crowds noise.

"So, Shekhar...the deal is final then.Give us a daughter and i will give you a son in return...nice na???hahahaha" says a old man with a dignified looks on face while breaking in laughter with his friend...and puts a laddu in mouth without anyone notice as he always present himself as a very serious,quiet person. But this for his big buisness world and outsiders...Inside in home he is a sweet person who loves his wife Annapurna and their only son Sanskar Maheswari so much...for him this two people are the most valuable treasure he has in his life...Specially Sanskar is the star of his eyes...He is very proud of his son who is sitting infront of him with a stren smile on face and enjoys his father ecstasy.

"Ya I am ok with this deal...afterall who wants to loose a son like Sanskar???But i want 50% shares in ur daughter too after the deal and also u can claim the same as well...Mr. buisnessman"😆 says Shekhar to his friend Mr.Durgaprashad Maheswari, the famous buinessman of Kolkata but his childhood friend.They are true friends in every sense while Shekhar has buisness of sweets in north kolkata and holds a good position in his market,there Dp also emerges his company as one of the toppest Law firms in Kolkata...who have the bestest lawyers of the town in his firm and none of them never ever loose a single case till date...
While listening to their horrible way of fixing the marraige of their lovely children Annapurna raises his eyebrows while looking at Sharmishtha who is looking at her with same expression burst into laughter...

"Shomi better we ourselves fix up a date by asking pandit ji itself before they turned the marraige of our Swara Sanskar in a proper buisness deal...see them who will say that they are going to be father in law in some days...They are really useless" says Annapurna looking at Shekhar and DP who are still busy in their business style talks and gives a "huh" to Ap afterlistening her remarks.

"Its ok Annapurna.let them talk i already invited panditji for matching their horoscopes and finalize the dates itself...oh there he is" says Sharmistha while pointing towards the door and all of them drives their vision at the entry gate where a man wearing a saffrom color punjabi with white dhoti enters while hanging a bag in his left shoulder with a smiling a confusing face...His confusion arrises when he spots Sanskar looking at him with a evil smile and winks...he manages the bag in his shoulder again and comes to them with smiling and folding hands.

He takes a seat besides Sanskar in his couch and again looks into his face and Sanskar signals him warning through his eyes without anyone noticing...pandiji again smiles and announces... "I have examined their horoscopes already its a great match for both of them...but..." but what Pandiji asked Sanskar making a innocent voice as if he is so disappointed in the interuption comes in between of his marraige fixing...

"Emm...a..actually There is a date of marraige just after 7 days of this month otherwise there is no good date for their marraige upto 9 months...no other dates will be good for them but on 19th there is a best timing for their marraige as it was a special occasion in terms of horoscopic angle...I think that will be the best day for marraige" he completes the whole in a single breath and gives a victorious smile to Sanskar and he gives him a thumbs up for obeying his order to announce the marraige date early before his 25th birthday on 20th Feb...

Ap, Shomi, Dp and Shekhar gets a little bit worried at first but then smiles to each other and agrees to accomplish the marriage within 7 days seeing the eagerness on his son's face to get married to Swara soon.

"Ap look Sanskar loves swara so much na.I am noticing from the moment he comes here his eyes are searching for Swara only...he continiously looking upstairs for Swara...Shona is so lucky to have him in her life...thank you Ap for giving us Sanskar...I am very happy for my Shona...wish my bth kids have a great a happy life ahead" Says Shomi smilingly with a teary eye to Annapurna...Annapurna assures her through eyes and holds her palm with a unspoken promise.Ap looks at Sanskar, her lovely son whom she used to call "Sunny" as pet name.he never ever allowed anyone to address him with this name not even his father cause this is the special name he has from his lovely darling mother.

Sanskar Maheswari the only son of Dp and Ap returns after completing his law studies from London last month. Ap gets super happy after when she heard the news of him coming back.after his return she was the first person who keeps the proposal infront of him for get married to Swara...He is nt ready that time and denies at the very first place but then She arranges a meeting for his son with Swara in the party of his success and coming back to home...Ap feels very happy with her decision as after that night Sanskar's mind changed and he agrees for the marraige.While in all this Sanskar eyes are searching for Swara and he recalls their first meeting and his welcome party which changed his life completely.

***********Flashback**********

Sanskar is enjoying coming back to his family,his home, his lovely city Kolkata. Dp arranges a great and grand party in respect of his success in becoming a succesful criminal lawyer.
Sanskar in enjoying with his friends outside of the house and notices a girl comes there with some people and talking to his watchman...He notices her carefully from a distance...Her long hairs, fair and glowing skin doe-type eyes and pink lips are shinning more in sunlight...He never seen such innocent face in his life in London.
he comes there and tries to talk with her indirectly...he walks to the watchman with a normal and strict face.

"Whats the matter????why so much crowd here" asks Sanskar to the watch man while looking at the girl who is standing there looking in a opposite direction from him
"Nothing Sir...She has come to deliver the sweets but forgets to bring the list of demanded sweet.Now how can i take the sweets without checking???" utters the watchman in a helpless and pleading voice to Sanskar. Sanskar eyes are widened more thinking how can a girl comes to deliver sweets with men.Who keeps such sexy and beautiful worker in sweet shops...uff if she is such sweet then how sweet will be the taste of sweets and deserts of this shop...

He composed himself and asks the watchman to take all the sweets in the house and there is absolutely no need to check the the amount or the variations...He will take care of this matter if anything goes wrong...

That girl looks up into his face and smiles at his gestures...Sanskar thinks she looks more good while smiling and smiles back...After delivering the sweets she leaves from there and sanskar keeps looking at her going and smiles in his mind when a sudden thought makes him slap his own head slightly...he utters to himself "Shit yaar...I forget to ask her name.Silly me"

PRECAP: Swasan meet at Party.Sanskar is shocked to see Swara...

Guys do leave ur comments and reactions below...those who want PM pls buddy me.Thanks in advance for reading and liking it.
With Love
Soumi
Edited by soumi93 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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soumi...firstly loved your speech...it was what all feel...

prologue is so interesting...ragini is villain...may be ex gf of Sanskar...right..???.
but finally Sanskar loves Swara...

eagerly waiting to know what happens next...plz update soon...

Edited by pakh - 9 years ago
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I love it I love it...
m a sucker for marriage based books...
plz update soon...
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Awesome start soumi. 👏
Seriously mind blowing



But tu hi re ka kya hua 😆
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Originally posted by: sujoyricky

Awesome start soumi. 👏
Seriously mind blowing



But tu hi re ka kya hua 😆

Main soch hi rahi thi ki u will ask this question kal uska update ho jayega ...Tabtak isko leke khush raho sab 😆
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Hmmm soumi...
Trying to gather my words...
Awesome prologue...painful..
Ragini 😡
Precap swasan 😳
Waiting.. 😃
Pls continue soon
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Originally posted by: leku

Hmmm soumi...
Trying to gather my words...
Awesome prologue...painful..
Ragini 😡
Precap swasan 😳
Waiting.. 😃
Pls continue soon

Thanx yaar leku...after a long time again i'm on 😆
haan part-1 will updated soon 😳
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Originally posted by: soumi93


Main soch hi rahi thi ki u will ask this question kal uska update ho jayega ...Tabtak isko leke khush raho sab😆


Vo kal kab aayega uss din bhi boli thi kal milega but uss baat ko 1 month hogaye hai 😉

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