The Dandelions - Memoirs #3 page 12; A/N on page 15 - Page 10

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Posted: 9 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: Sakura24

Hey Nalini,

Hello Sakura

Couldn't come here before. Just arrived and stepped right in to the feast! Wow, the softer interludes of a fainting evening like present and the blazing sunny daylight of the past merged in to one colorful evening.
well now that you are here I hope you will enjoy the feast!! Oh I just realised that along with you. Blimey! May be I should ask them to hold on for a while to the present, but they both can't resist it too can they? With all that's happening to them and with all the wariness that their future closing on them holds, they have none but their past to take strength from.

I can't really take Sanskar's pain. It sort of makes my heart too heavy. I wonder sometimes, will he make it for many more days if Swara leaves him in between the promised life long journey.
Me too . I cried a bit somewhere along already. Sanskar lives on her every breath. She is his ever blazing sun, his solace and his strength. Oh my poor heart!!

Swara...poor soul. It's heart breaking to see her fragile old self. But, still the bond they share and all the caring, affection, love is overwhelmingly there. I know nothing is eternal, but these two is so perfect together that it is so, so, painful to imagine one of them leaving the other forever one day.
Thankyou, Im happy I let those emotions come out untainted. You reassure me.
Yes, the unfortunate thing with life is it ends one day. But love can't . And I think my belief in the eternity of love is making me write this.


The light moments from the past is too good. Each with a different color of their love, a different shade and a different promise. But always the same outcome, how much they belong with each other.
Thankyou, that means a lot.. And it's coming from you.. I'm glad you liked it. So glad. And wish to keep up the lightness . Because I know that we all need it to keep going on with the poignance of present just like these two. I hope I could keep doing it the right way too.

Enjoying the journey too much, but in the same while the pain is killing me. I fear this series will end with Swara's passing, oh God! How Sanskar and I take that much pain?
Don't fear about what's to come. I don't want you people tearing up as you read. These are dandelions. And they are a symbol of hope and happiness. That's what I intend to give away.
( let me tell you a secret the end is already made)

I adore your writing, so heart touching they are. Please continue soon.
Well that a huge compliment saku!! Thankyou so much.. I'm so humbled. Will get back soon. The next one is already in the making.

Love,
Sakura



Sakura, I'm so glad to see you here. Its been a pleasure to know your take and a delight to know that you have enjoyed the thread. Keep peeping in when ever you can.

I replied in blue. But I don't think I have to mention that to someone who made replying easier.

Lots of love
N
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Posted: 9 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Res - after I read😊


As and when you get time Nyna, 😊
I hope I didn't keep you waiting long. But to make up for the delay I started on the next one already.

Love
N
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Posted: 9 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Res Nalini:)

Drowning in work today and lots of other thing but will comment at some point in the weekend:) Mmmwah for this X


Shruti😊
I know what other things you are hiding from me. There is a little skirmish to deal with at baadijung. And a wedding coming. But I'm scared this time (something tells me that there is a huge twist in the tale, and with a cliffhanger too. Don't bring back kavitha🤢)

Unres it when ever you can. Anytime is fine for me.
😊
Have a happy weekend

Lots of love
N
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Posted: 9 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: Nupur_5

Another set of Memoirs!

Res: Will try to unres as soon as possible :)


Nupur😊

Yep another set.
Take you time dear. That's fine.
Always.

Love
N
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Posted: 9 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: Krishnabhisarik

Res😊

Unres
Hey Nalini!! 😃Wonderful update!! The past n present.. Sanskar never wants to let Swara go, didn't then doesn't now.. Both such different situations yet enriched with the same love.. Swara wants to be strong for him.. You have worded it so well.. Sanskar's pain, panic, frustration, desperation all portrayed so well through his nightmare.. In contrast, their pre-wedding memory, laced with romance n pure joy... Their love has truly just matured with time, just like wine, and now its one of the finest.. Beautifully written👏
Love,
Akshata😊


Hello Akshata😊

Thank You dear. Oh god you have said a lot in just few words, now I'm left with nothing to say in return.
Yep, Sanskar never wants to let go off her. How can he? He lives by her doesn't he. Poor chap and hear I am pushing him into such horrible nightmares and tragedies. I feel so heartless.
Yea swara is made of such mettle and I think she should come up with it both for her sake and more for sanskar's.
Thank You I'm glad you think so.
I had my fingers crossed about the nightmare! Writing that down was a nightmare for me too. It took all my energy to not take it off the update.

Swasan had a great wedding on screen but I thought kavitha killed the sweetness and the anticipation that comes before. So this was my tiny attempt to restore that happiness. So happy that you enjoyed it well

Thankyou so much for letting me know your thoughts. They mean a lot to me. Truly.😊

Lots of love
N

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Posted: 9 years ago
#96
Res Nalini...

thank you for this beautiful update.
Will unres as I find some words to make sense :-)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#97
Nalini,🤗🤗
Unres page 12

love,
Nyna
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Posted: 9 years ago
#98
Nalini dear...
Brilliant update..sooo touching... the way u blended past n present life of swasan..it is commendable...enjoyed it alot..felt intense emotions...happiness as well as pain...i literally cried while reading the part of sansku's dream of losing swara..it was sooo heartwrenching..i cried...with him...

U balance both happiness n pain very expertly in ur story...loving it..

Will wait for next memoirs...

Love
Talia
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Posted: 9 years ago
#99
Unres on page 12 Nalini, with apologies again! x
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Posted: 9 years ago
nalini🤗l
its me Asmita got heat stroke when I read the name "Memoirs" I got a vague idea of how good the story is going to be. but curiosity won over self restrained control .How much u r going to torture this innocent babies. u being a good writer would hit us where it hurt the most . so I stopped reading but today I read it and cried . I just want to say Nallini u r such a good friend but this story really made me cry .

I wont say I loved the story because u made me cry and being an emotional fool I cried.The story concept wise writing wise as usual one of the best .


offtopic when r u going to update fury plz complete it na

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