The Dandelions - Memoirs #3 page 12; A/N on page 15 - Page 8

Originally posted by: bennetlizzy

Offo shruthiii!!!!!!!

🤗😡

Come on now. Enough with showering your apologies all over the forum. GET WELL FIRST.

Look at the whole forum, we want you hale and healthy first and we will not take anymore tardiness there. If not hum... Sab milke Tera DK ko chein lenge tum se.😉

I know you are in love with him head over heels.😃😳..copyright baad mein jaaye.. 😆

You can unres anytime dear...stop getting so stressed up... Relax. Everything can wait but not your health.

Baath abhi ke abhi samaj le.or I'll make sure the whole forum is onto it. Shor machaungi. And you will be asphyxiated with all the love and care we are capable of.

Now I'm off to watch the epi.. wish me luck... Because it's alll lucky...🤢

You..off to bed young lady.right After work.

Love you loads

Nalini

Originally posted by: bennetlizzy

🤗Olivia

Thankyou .

Thant was so nice of you.

Let me reply for the other comment too here bdw. I have read notebook a million times more than I watched in play on screen. An amazing piece as ever by Nicholas but I should say I love Noah a little less after Sanskar came into view 😊. I love Noah still. That guy and the book may be cry the same everytime I read through those pages and somehow still manage to do so even after all these years. Alzheimer's is one big thing I don't want to ponder on and would never wish swara to suffer with. Sanskar would be devastated and I don't think I can put up with it too. I'll breakdown before I write.

So I'm being more liberal here. I won't let such a fate fall on them I promise. Even when I believe that pain and love is a great combo to dwell on. No . No Alzheimer's. I'll try to keep this as justified as I could and meanwhile make a beautiful set of Melrose from their lives come to words too. :) a promise.

Well Sanskar is a man of surprises. He knows perfectly well on how to pull one.. Then who else if not him. I'm so glad you liked the letter and the memories with it. Honestly I edited it a lot of times and finally picked up courage yesteerday. And posted it.

Again thanks for those words of appreciation Olivia. I don't know how much I deserve them but I'm highly grateful for them. Thanks for considering the wait as worthy. But know that people like you help me make it magical. Im nothing but just a person with a pen and some writing ink.

Thankyou a ton

Lots of love

N

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Bennetlizzy dearie...

Amazingly touching update...felt soo many emotion while reading it...loving each n every piece of swasan memory...update soon...

Talia

Originally posted by: bennetlizzy

😃 mukta... I await your take, very eagerly indeed.

Love
N

Hi Nalini..😊

Sorry for taking so long...😭

Coming to the story, before saying anything I want to thank you for taking this topic. It's not easy to live after knowing your partner or family member is suffering from diseases, medical complications which have no exact medicine and can't be cured by any means. That's the worst situation anyone can face when all you can do is watching that person suffer and die every moment. Trust me I do know how helpless one feels.

On that context I truly loved Sanskar. Somewhere what you are trying to show him in all this, his feelings, helplessness, determination I very well can relate to that and let me say you have done extremely talented job while expressing that. His character is beautifully portrayed along with each and every portrayal of emotions. I so very liked that scene where he told doc to not say anything about her. It's not easy sometimes to accept bitter truth, all we want to do is to fight against it and he did exact what anyone at his place would have done only if they love the person unconditionally.

Do I need to say about their love? We all know what exact relation our SWASAN shares. Plus I liked the smooth transformations from present to past and then again from past to present. The flow of your description was so amazing that it felt as if scenes are unfolding infront of my eyes. I could literally feel that pain, Swara was experiencing for staying away from him though it was just for 24 hrs but that do not matters when all you want to do is not let that person go away from your sight.

What imagination girl. Seriously I am running out of words to explain how much I liked each and every point in this. What kind of planning he can do for her happiness. I mean here people fail to remember their anniversary and birthdays and this man! He actually planned that surprise from two months I mean how much someone can love? As you said earlier I so much envy them but do love them more. Like seriously that scene was emotionally so moving, so serene, so pure I felt my insides moving with its intensity. Then come his surprise gift and then that trip, I so loved that.

And that bedroom sequence in first part and second part too where she woke up and then settled herself with photo album relieving those past memories etched on her heart and soul forever. I just loved that. 👏

I have read and reread for almost 15 times and each time I just feel it to be my first time. I sincerely apologise for taking like forever to unres but I was not finding enough words to express how much I love this.

Simply you left me speechless with beauty of your writing. This journey I know for you it will be very special as it's your own work, coming straight from your heart but trust me when I say this it will be same for me, engraved on my mind and heart like forever as I strongly feel connected to your basic idea.

Nalini great job! Keep writing and thank you for writing this supremely amazing, marvellous piece!

Stay Blessed

MUKTA😊

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Unres:

Nalini 🤗

Without apologies that may earn me more threats 😆, I am here to comment!

The second memoir was simply stupendously moving. I am slightly speechless here- the start itself was so so powerful, it still makes me tear up thinking about it. I believe it so very difficult to grapple with the subject you have chosen here as to visualise and then project the love you are portraying in someone's later years is a tall ask and you are more than delivering there. The anguish felt through Sanskaar- oh, I feel the pain stab through me. His Swara has Parkinsons . The sheer tragedy but the realistic touch to it- the way they both are so each others strong and succour even then- the whole thing leaps out and grabs you by the eyeballs.

Their whole relation cannot be described- it is truly like "watching" two soul mates through the power of your writing and I am simply overwhelmed in parts and at the end of this one too. You might find my comments on this thread repetitious as we go on but I hope the sentiment comes through clearly and isn't negated by my limited vocabulary. The whole section of the way Swara pined for Sanskaar was truly outstanding. That letter- again it brought tears to my eyes, her counting the hours and minutes down and the sheer relief and joy and bliss when he is returned. Then my favourite bit- how romantic is

Sanskaar- exactly as I see this man- truly masculine but so tender and loving, it takes your breath away. The whole planning the anniversary that way- the flowers actually grown not bought and then the BEST part ever- nothing more wonderful than driving your love to a surprise trip- and tea in Darjeling- ahhh!!!!! My heart!!!

Also the way you "flip" between the past and present- that is masterfully done! ⭐️

Serious kudos to you Nalini! 👏👏👏 This is such a beautiful series, I eagerly await the next one!!

Lots of love,

Shru xoxo

Originally posted by: muktai

Hi Nalini..😊

Hello muktha🤗

Sorry for taking so long...😭

Oh lets never bother about being late here dear. anytime is goodtime😊

Coming to the story, before saying anything I want to thank you for taking this topic. It's not easy to live after knowing your partner or family member is suffering from diseases, medical complications which have no exact medicine and can't be cured by any means. That's the worst situation anyone can face when all you can do is watching that person suffer and die every moment. Trust me I do know how helpless one feels.

Oh yes muktha, i agree with you in every-way, its really hard to live with the dread of loosing your beloved on your conscience, and it gets much more difficult when ones love if ones life as is for sanskar. i myself feel bad for having pushed sanskar to such misery

On that context I truly loved Sanskar. Somewhere what you are trying to show him in all this, his feelings, helplessness, determination I very well can relate to that and let me say you have done extremely talented job while expressing that. His character is beautifully portrayed along with each and every portrayal of emotions. I so very liked that scene where he told doc to not say anything about her. It's not easy sometimes to accept bitter truth, all we want to do is to fight against it and he did exact what anyone at his place would have done only if they love the person unconditionally.

Do I need to say about their love? We all know what exact relation our SWASAN shares. Plus I liked the smooth transformations from present to past and then again from past to present. The flow of your description was so amazing that it felt as if scenes are unfolding infront of my eyes. I could literally feel that pain, Swara was experiencing for staying away from him though it was just for 24 hrs but that do not matters when all you want to do is not let that person go away from your sight.

Oh im so glad i was able put forth his emotions with the right tone to them muktha, its such a reassurance always. im so glad you were able to feel them too. what more can i ask for than this muktha. but you are really showering me with too many praises which im so not sure that i deserve but all to grateful to read, if not accept them . thankyou:)

What imagination girl. Seriously I am running out of words to explain how much I liked each and every point in this. What kind of planning he can do for her happiness. I mean here people fail to remember their anniversary and birthdays and this man! He actually planned that surprise from two months I mean how much someone can love? As you said earlier I so much envy them but do love them more. Like seriously that scene was emotionally so moving, so serene, so pure I felt my insides moving with its intensity. Then come his surprise gift and then that trip, I so loved that.

and im running out of ways to thankyou. hehe true i envy them for all the love and love them back equally. well as i have said in every other comment sanskar is a man of surprises :) and he would surely make it up to the mark in everything he does to impress him wife. such a huge romantic. i just tried for a piece of that romance and seems like it had the desired impact. im so glad you came to love each and everyone.

And that bedroom sequence in first part and second part too where she woke up and then settled herself with photo album relieving those past memories etched on her heart and soul forever. I just loved that. 👏

oh soo thankyou muktha, you are making me want to go back and read them again😊

I have read and reread for almost 15 times and each time I just feel it to be my first time. I sincerely apologise for taking like forever to unres but I was not finding enough words to express how much I love this.

😳😳😃 15 times!!!! god i'm thoroughly stunned now!! like reallly!!

thankyou...you soo made my day. im trying to feel my fingers now. cant make to type another line😳

Simply you left me speechless with beauty of your writing. This journey I know for you it will be very special as it's your own work, coming straight from your heart but trust me when I say this it will be same for me, engraved on my mind and heart like forever as I strongly feel connected to your basic idea.

Nalini great job! Keep writing and thank you for writing this supremely amazing, marvellous piece!

👏

Stay Blessed

MUKTA😊

yes mukhtha is going to be so special for me, and looks like all of you are set to make sure of it too. im really so greatful to you for those kind words. im so speechless right now . i hope not to disappoint with the rest of the updates now.. really thankyou for this post. i dont know how much i deserve of it but i should say im so humbled by it.

hoping with all my heart that you would enjoy the upcomings ones too😊

lots of love

N

dear muktha i replied i red. hope you dont mind my lethargy here. i just didnt want to miss out on anything

so thankful to you for the encouragement

peep in soon for the next one

love

n

Originally posted by: -FlameOfHope-

DAMN. How did I forget to review this? Okay, no need to get so worked up. I'll do it now. So, hey there, Nalini! I'm not from Swaragini fandom. But come here occasionally to read a few FFs/OSs. I'm from Meri Aashiqui fandom. :P But well, talent is everywhere. So, I am always on the hunt for reading good stories.

thankyou dear, really humbled by your words.

so you are in here on hunt for talent ?. welcome to our den, where there is passion and love as strong as was never before and where we will gift you all the talent we have, douse yourself in it as much as you can for you wont find it anywhere else :P .
Be warned though that you will soon get addicted to these strongest potions of love that brew in our cauldrons! our swasan are way too delicious you see!!😉😳

And Memoires! WOW! I couldn't of thought of a better idea at all! You actually gave me a prompt to an idea to start writing on IshVeer which I have been wanting to do from ages (obstruction - insufficient time). I will sure give you a say in my new FF which I'm soon to start. <3 Thank you so, so much, darling!

Thankyou! i didnt know i would have done it too, if not for all the love form my friends here. all credit goes to them.
Im glad i was able you give you "a prompt to an idea"( and just a prompt i hope :P) for Ishveer, and would be humbled to give a say in your one.

And here, Swara is with Parkinson's and has little time left with her. Sanskaar is fully aware of the impending doom. Swara is his life. Is she dies... <\3 I get reminded of IshVeer. Like, we have a theory back there, if Ishaani dies, Ranveer dies too and vice-versa. So, if Swara is to die in the end, Sanskaar might go with her too. Maybe. But it's a good idea to reminisce all the moments before they fall asleep again.

OH swasan have an eternal bond im sure, their love is beyond time and space but whether it means that they both have to leave this world together or not i surely cannot reveal to you at the moment. can i??

And could I just tell you how adorable and asthetic I found the idea of the parchment papers? <3 And also, I wanted to ask a thing. Since the present tense here means somewhere in the 2060s, what about the future technologies and development? Have you planned on something to write about the changing world? Just asking. :P

thankyou:) for considering them so highly. its a pleasure to know that they have had such an effect as you read.
im so touched

haha. thankyou, but i dont belive in writing eutopic and dystopic fictions dear. nor do i consider myself capable of it. my main focus is on the way their story ends leaving behind a mark in the world. so ill stick on to that for now.

Overall, beautiful updates. Loved them to the core. You are just GREAT with descriptions and emotions! Update the next part soon and I may not be regular in reviewing. But I will do it, as I said, occasionally. I'm really sorry for that. :\

thank you very much, i have an obsession about describing things so i hope it doesnt get repetitive and in some sense lose the charm you say it has. yep the next one will be up tomorrow.

hey no apologies!
reading should be for fun!
peep in whenever you can!

Love ya, and take care! <3

Love,

Effulgent.

love
n