Angel Short Sequel - Hound's tale. - Page 23

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Posted: 9 years ago
Nimmi, 🤗
The ending of this story was awesome
I am speechless now.
In each update, you maintain the story.
All updates were interesting.
But this one is really close to my heart.
The marriage of angel and kitten, when I started to read this story I always want their wedding.
The love confession of swara and sanskar was also interesting.
Thanks for this beautiful story.

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Posted: 9 years ago
NIMMI YOU ARE SO DAMN GOOD DEAR!!!!!! Seriously hats off to you girl...you are seriously perfection...
Such a good end to Hounds Tale...Swara and Sanskar got married, Maddy and Shivani are all happy, Bozo got a girl for himself, Shivani has happily adjusted with 'the family' and baby Ragini, Pari, Dida and Ady and everyone is happy... and you are also sooo good at poetry...in short, you are amazing...

And I'm sooo happy and sooo sad at the same time...happy because everything has ended happily and sad because everything has ended...I still remember when I had read the prologue of Angel, I had felt a strange attachment... Now I am being able to understand the meaning of that attachment... I still remember how I had lost all hope of being able to read Angel again (after chapter 27 of course) but then I discovered it here after two months and finally I could read it again and when Angel was over, I was like now what??? And then you returned with Hounds Tale but it turned out to be a bit short... But anyways, now that Hounds Tale is also over, I'm again like now what???

I'm so happy that Shivani has happily settled in, and became a member of 'the family'...and also that she's happily accepted Maddy and Sanskar's past... It is the past after all...and also that Sanskar ad Swara are happily married... And the part where Rinky was discussing with Sanskar about Gabriel and Sanskar was like, 'seems like an interesting character' was hilarious... And Sanskar still is baby Ragini's favorite... And Maddy stands at the second place...wow man...

And I'm also glad that the younger party decided to keep Sanskar and Maddy's past a secret from the elder party... And loved the part when Maddy looks at Sanskar hoping for some sympathy and Sanskar was like 'man, I'm already sleeping in a pink bedroom'...the numero unos are having to suffer under two girls...damn...

Thank you so much Nimmi for the beautiful epilogue to the beautiful sequel of the beautiful story...it is something that I'll probably never forget... I'm surely gonna read this again and again over time...

So finally the lovely Tale has come to an end... I'm gonna miss it so bad and am already waiting for your new story...do return soon and do consider publishing... You're surely gonna rock

Love you loads and lots and tons and more...will miss you badly and waiting for you to return...till then take care dear...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thankyou soo much for pm nimmi. And nice update u make me cry😭 i will miss them maddy shona gaby bozo shivi n all.
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Posted: 9 years ago
What a beautiful ending!
You did it Nimmi, you made me cry! Me who never cries except few times (very few), crying out of sheer bliss like Swara!
I'm going to read the whole journey again right now! Will try to unres after that!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thank you... Thank you. ...
Thank you... Thank you. ...
Thank you... Thank you. ...

It really was a surprise. Angel . Still dream about him..

What a lovely end to the story.

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Posted: 9 years ago
OMG!! after long time i smiled broadly seeing the new update of my most Fav Angel..love u nimmi for this beautiful n pure part..loved it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Beautiful update.. Happy ending 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Am very sad that the journey has come to an end but then endings could mean new beginnings too. Looking forward to another story.

love
Nyna
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi dear...
Thanks for pm and sorry for a late comment ...
Coming to the part ..it was mind blowing ...
The ending was nice and very well written

Angel and kitten ...!! Nice nicknames.. But I guess it would have been better if it was vice versa... But it was lovely this way too..

Eagerly waiting for your piece of writing in near future ...Do write more...

Love
Soundharya..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nimmi🤗

I know I am super late. Sorry for that Nimmi.

Chapter -9

This chapter was amazing⭐️. Really loved it. It was a funny and romantic update but later got a bit emotional.

Nimmi loving the lines which you are using at the starting of each chapter😃.

Ya true... their tradition of bumping into each other at unusual places , during unusual circumstances😆. Btw its a lovely tradition😳.

Shivani is a brave, daring superwomen kind of a girl. Truly said Maddy; poor guys who have to face her wrath😆. His monolouges are super hilarious.

"Her personal knight on 24/7 duty."😆😳

Aww.. In order to save his huntress, Maddy left his precious bike on the middle of the road. Loved that.

And this time they didn't fight amongst themselves😃. They smilled at each other (how adorable are they) and together fought against that mob.

Aww.. Maddy's bike😔. Shivani just give him a big hug. Although Maddy is an assassin , he is too adorable and innocent. He is also a very emotional guy. Glad that Shivani understands and appreciates his this side😳.

Shivani invited Maddy to her house. And here I am already guessing what will happen there😳. Last time when they were at Maddy's house many things happened.

Shivani's home is totally opposite to that of Maddy's. And that was expected afterall their personalities are very different. But truly said Nimmi they both are like Yin and Yang. They both complement each other.😃

Female version of Sanskaar. Well not fully but ya some qualities of her do match that of Sanskaar's. They will surely get along well with each other😊.

Haha... Maddy is roaming in Shivani's house like he owns it😆.

Loved the small moments they shared in Shivani's house❤️. Maddy and Shivani do form an adorable couple.

Maddy way to charm your girl by literally drenching and soaking her in your love (err.. water).😆🤣

Nimmi, I don't have any words to describe how much I loved that water fight😳. Really enjoyed reading it.

Aha.. Shivani is a smart cookie😉. The way she tricked Maddy was awesome. And that kiss was super hot.☺️ But why did she said sorry?😲

Nimmi Maddy is too invested in this relationship ( whatever is going on between them). And I still don't see the same level from Shivani's side. I just don't want any one of them to get hurt.😒

I told you earlier na , this Jose guy has the worst timing ever😡. Again he interrupted them. And why is he calling Shivani "pet".

Err... what is happening? OMG Shivani's gonna get married to Jose😲. I can't see Maddy like this Nimmi. He is gonna be terribly heartbroken. I even can't see Shivani in pain.

Going by the interaction of Shivani and that kabaab-mein-haddi guy, I can definitely say that they absolutely aren't in love. What made a strong, independent girl like Shivani agree to this relationship?😕

Destiny better make them meet sooner😊.

Thank you very much for this update Nimmi. It was so well written. Really loved and enjoyed it😳.

Sorry Nimmi. But I am reading these updates very slowly bcoz I really don't want this story to end😒 as I love it so very much. Really can't type it down. I just completed rereading Angel and I did caught on some details which I missed earlier😃. But will surely catch on to next few chapters and epilogue too. I am sure u would have written an amazing and happy end to this story😳.

Once again a big thanks for writting this sequel of Angel😃. Really can't thank you enough.

Take care😳
Lots and lots of love🤗
P.S.- I missed thanking u for compiling all the chapters of Angel in 1 single thread🤗. Thank you... it was so easy to read the story😳. You are just amazing Nimmi😃.


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