Hola Nimmi,
I just finished Updating my FF. Before i get busy let me start giving my delayed comments for the beautiful updates. I wanted to give a long detailed comment for each update but due to time constraints i make it one long detailed comment for all the chapters.Sorry about that dear
On the whole , i loved this Sequel so much Nimmi. Words cant express how much i loved it. Well i think i loved it as much as MAV seems to love His huntress. While i loved Angel as much
Gabreil loved his kitten. Moving on. All this love for this FF i truly because of how talented writer you are dear. You made me love an totally new character in such a way i never before loved
a fictional character. While Garbiel and his kitten had the awesome story ever , I think Hound and his huntress got the best one too. Sorry Numero uno for will be always Gabreil and his kitten story , not that i love Maverick the Assassin and Shivani the cop love story any less ,it comes so close to Angel in my heart.
The one small sad thing is excluding the fact it ended is that now there is no Numero uno Assasin. I want Mav and Gabreil to kill maybe something is wrong with me 😆to think like that but i do miss the fact our Assassins are out of the Dark world. 😉
So let me start with all the scene i loved in the updates scene by scene , You know why i am sad Maverick Retired , it is because i wont get the opening scene in Chapter 7 again. The way the three well built guy adopted Shivani as there sister is because of Mav being Numero uno Assassin. While i know Sanksar and Gabriel are inseperable ,but i know Gabriel doesnt like the flare or recognition from being Numero uno but Mav loves it and i wanted him to be Numero Uno for a long time. But being an Assassin could mean no normal life, so i think i can settle with Retired Mav, but give him a cool profession like Sanskar in the Epilogue okay😉.Well i just wanted to say i loved the scene only to go babbling about something else . Moving on
Also the fact that you are one of my Favourite writers in this Forum is because how well you can let me know the thought process of the characters, You are really gifted Nimmi⭐️. You know Shivani was new character but in less than ten Chapters you made me like her. And even accept her as Mav partner. That was mainly because of the fact you let me see the story from her POV as well.
Good old Charmer lost is touch since his mind his occupied by one girl .. Love can make that happen i suppose,but a huge loss to all the single girls in Mav world. But loved Shivani jealousy. And there we have it another confession out of nowhere. Swara started the process and now Mav does it too. Totally loved his confession and Shivani Reactions to it . Jose has to play spoilsport . Well that guy was her fiancee at the time,so technically Mav was playing spoilsport in there life but confessing to engaged girl. He didnt know that but still just saying ..
Now He lost his bike too. Poor Mav ,his life seem to turn upside down ever since he met his true love. But Destiny did play it up for him. Totally loved the whole scene . The water fight, Mav checking out her house, there conversation while eating and finally Shivani impulse decision to kiss him. Totally loved it , i guessed Shivani end up hurting him in this Chapter by the opening line but my mind went along the lines of hound and huntress concept so didnt see the wedding card coming .
I felt so bad for Mav at the point even when i know it will all be okay soon , still just when he thought his impossible love story might have a chance it was crushed .Not fair at all.😭
I thought i could cover the entire updates, not possible since i have lot more to say...Will post my thought on the last two chapters asap .Love ya Nimmi and you are the sweetest for giving me such an awesome Sequel .🤗
Love
Nita
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