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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi dear..
Amazing update... Perfect ending...
Gonna miss Angel a lottt...
The way u wrote is awesome... I loved it...
The wedding moments...😳
Shivani interaction with everyone...
N Rinki.. She is sweet... N finally bozo also got his girl...
N the kitten n her angel moments are awesome...
I really felt very happy after reading all this...
Really gonna miss this ff...😭
N thnks a lot dear for this wonderful ff... Love u..🤗

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Posted: 9 years ago
Nimmmi dear...🤗
Im sooo delighted..😊..thanks for pm...thanks for angel n thanks for hound...loved it truly n completely...it was a memorable journey...fulll of ups n downs...happy n sorrow moments...adrenaline rush action sequences...drama..suspense...etc👏

While reading hound...memories of angel surfaced.n.angels memory remain fresh n intact in my brain...even hound's too..i will cherished their memory forever...😭😳

Will miss each every character...sansku..swara...maddy.. shivani..bozo...dp...ram..rana..lakshya..adarsh ..pari..dida ..ragini...apte...ranawat..etc😭😭

Love u soo much .muahhh for everything...😳

Want u back with a bang with new ff.of swasan ofcourse...will wait...😆😉

Lots of love n hugs😉
Talia😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
I am so happy that you wrote this chapter Nimmie.
Just like their story this is perfect...
Their family is complete and their love will remain strong for ever and ever...Thank you so much for giving us this beautiful piece of art dear...🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nimmi🤗

Chapter- 10

Nimmi really Loved those lines at the starting of the chapter😃. Its a high time;Do reveal the suspense soon Nimmi. Have you written those lines. They are amazing⭐️. You truly are a gifted writer.

Oh no... wedding day.. so soon😒.

Really feeling for Shivani. Poor girl is so broken. Agree that it was a stupid decision on her part. I don't think a strong girl like her would have fully enjoyed and lived her life fully, if she would have taken her marriage as some sort of gamble.

Ya that's I think is a universal truth😆. Mumma's are very sweet and caring, but if they do want something from you, they would make sure that you anyhow agree to it.

I can somewhat understand Shivani's Point of view... but still that was not a right decision from her part.

Loved the bonding of Shivani with her parents😃. Hahaha... her ideas about love are hilarious😆.

So our dear Shivani realises that she had indeed fallen in love😳.

Love this father-daughter bond😃. Mr. Ranaut is amazing and cool😎. He do understands his daughter very well. Sneaky monkey😳😆.

Truly said, Jose in an idiot😆. Nimmi, Mr. Ranaut is officialy one of my fav. character from this story. Oh god..Shivani's dad was so shocked after hearing about Maddy... but his words were hilarious😆.
He is awesome. Glad that he did knock some sense into his daughter's head and correctly advised her. Shivani and her dad do share a very beautiful bond😃. Mr. Ranaut seems like a more mature verion of Maddy😳. He is funny.

Sanskaar❤️ . Of course like a big bro he is here to guide him. Same as when Maddy was earlier there for him. It was kind of role reversal situation . Maddy's assassin and cop rant is somewhat similar to Angel's darkness and light rant😛. Sanskaar also did give him a right advice. Maddy was in need of that external push towards the right direction. Sanskaar was amazing⭐️. Loved what he said to Maddy.

And Kitten and Bozo are also there😳. Nimmi you know its a real treat to read the scenes involving four of them😃.

Maddy did pay heed to his bro's advice. And now Confident Maddy is back😃. I really don't like to see a sad Maddy. It doesn't suits him.
Now Go get your huntress Maddy. Again a role reversal situation- Now the hound will hunt for his huntress😉 .

Aww.. I love this small family bonding😳. All are there to help Maddy . Hope they find Shivani on time.

Thank you for this update Nimmi. Really loved it😃. Mr. Ranaut is an cool dad and an amazing person. Loved him. And loved Sanskaar's advice to Maddy😊.

Thanks once again and Take care
Lots and lots of love🤗

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Posted: 9 years ago


Hola Nimmi,



Guess who decided to unres there comments . So Sorry for the delay dear, But this one is for the last two chapter. Epilogue as to wait. I refuse to comment about it yet as it would make me suffer from withdrawal symptoms. But read it as always and loved it so much.



First of all let me apologize for not realizing the awesome line in the begginning of each chapter was written by my dearest friend, you see i love reading stories but never was an expert in read poems. So forgive my ignorance but i loved each and everyone of them and my favourite as to be of Chapter 8. As soon as i read the lines i was like how did she hurt my Poor Mav and my mind came up with plenty of suggestion including one where she arrested my Poor Mav. Thankfully it was just a wedding invitation as i know the marriage wont happen.


I love the bond between Shivani and her father . It was good but only secomd to the awesome bond between Sanskar and his father. I liked Shivani explanation on why she agreed to marry jose.



So mav is obsessed with C and A , while is brother was obsessed with light and dark. This two you know are so good at making me love them and also punch them when they go on about how they cant marry the girl they love. Now Sanskar ear is bleeding with C and A, Imagine poor Mav state when you tried to pull your awesome fake death scenario and cause so much pain for kitten. But just like how Mav got through Sanskar , Sanskar was able to get through Mav and that why i love this two so very much.


Aww Sanskar want his happy bunny of a little brother .I too , i love him as well. And Mav decided to fight back for his love .Great .Poor Assasin didnt even see the adress on the card, come on you need to gate crash the wedding, and bozo cant be of much help given the number of churches but atleast he had provide him with a list.I did wish the whole family went looking for Shivani, but Mav alone works too.



See even Mav agrees four is better than one when he off trying to find his love. But i knew he will reach there on time, i so loved the part where he was got too many chips by visitng so many churches in one day.. That was awesome and it worked as well ,good for him , next time if he wants something, he should go to all the churches in the city... Before going for the task.



So Shivani stopped the marriage , that my huntress and i totally loved Mav reaction to finding out she stopped the wedding. Jose you punched my Mav , not cool man .But still he kind of deserves it but as you said you wouldnt have been able to handle shivani, only Mav can do that.



And then come the most beautiful proposal of Mav, no wonder Shvinai cried hearing it, it was so good and i loved it . So finally C and A concecpt is over as Mav is no longer as A. Good for there love story bad for me , who will miss Numero Uno Assassins. Both Gabriel and Mav retired from there job .Good for them , maybe i should be happy that there life are not in danger but i still do miss my awesome Assassins. Well i cant have both since neither Gabriel will let go his Light and Dark theory nor Mav will let go of his Cop and Assassin unless there retire.



Loved how Shivani father accepted Mav after hearing his confession, ofcourse any one who listen to how much mav loves there daughter will agree to it. And i totally loved Mav way of persuading Shivani mom. And bike is all it needed for brother in law approval .Nice family .



And i have to say Hound was too good dear. I absolutely loved it .As i said earlier will comment on the epilogue once i can deal with my withdrawal symptoms till then Love ya and you are the sweetest.


Love

Nita
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Posted: 9 years ago

Angels..

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wish I could reply to your beautiful beautiful comments.. but I can't.
will never be able to find the words to show you my love or gratitude to you..
Thank you..
Just... thank you you wonderful generous and beautiful souls.


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Posted: 9 years ago
Nimmi😃🤗

Chapter-11

Maddy is a gem of a guy😳. Go Maddy find your huntress.

Haha... Maddy gatecrashing someone's else wedding😆. Though you haven't written that scene in detail.. but I can still imagine the whole scene;(including wedding party running behind Maddy😆😆). A good writting does that to you, you do start imagining various scenes on your fav characters😊.

So Kitten, Angel and Bozo did helped Maddy indirectly.😃 Maddy was right it is his own war which he has to fight alone.

And this is why I love Maddy❤️. Even after all this, he won't force her or impose her to choose him even though he knows that he can't really live a proper life without her.

Aww... I loved when as soon as Maddy reached that church, he already guessed that he is gonna gate crash his huntress deal-marriage party😳.

Huh..Not fair.. no one there even appreciated Maddy's jhakhass entry. Such a feeka reaction from everyone😡.

But Nimmi loved loved loved reading Shivani's and Maddy's monolouges⭐️⭐️.

And I am super happy to know that Maddy and Shivani are almost on the same level in their feelings towards each other😃. And she really likes him . Her objecting to her marriage proves that.

Aww.. Maddy's relief upon seeing that wedding has been cancelle😳d. And Nimmi, I am again repeating that I love how these 2 communicate with each other without even speaking a word.

Jose and his ever present worst timing😕. He again broke their romantic moment. And how dare he punch our Maddy😡. Glad that Shivani did stop that further fight and Jose also went away from that place.
Pose, Penguin - Maddy is hilarious🤣.

Loved the heart to heart talk between huntress and hound❤️. They both are adorable😳. Glad that they aren't rushing their wedding and taking all of it slowly. Totally loved Maddy's confession❤️.

Huh... Maddy took retirement😲. Nimmi what will happen to underworld without all the top 5 assassins😕😆.

Maddy does love unconditionally😊. He left his precious numero one position just to be able to be a part of Shivani's life and just for her love. And what makes this love story more special is the fact that he fell in love with her at the very first sight; when she was at her worst. And his love for her stood unflinching even when destiny revealed the fact that he had indeed fallen in love with his enemy;a cop.

Aww.. Maddy just never changes😆. His self praising quality is actually adorable. I will again repeat it, thank you for not changing him much in love😃.

And Shivani confessed her love. Loved her confession❤️. It was sweet and simple , and that's what makes it more lovely. Aww.. Maddy was so surprised and elated😳.

Their impossible love story which finally did turn possible , and see how beautifully it did⭐️😃.

More reason to celebrate. Shivani's dad also approves of Maddy and thinks of him a perfect partner for his little girl😃.

Shivani's family is surely giving a tough competition to Maddy's family in the level of craziness🤪. Her family is also crazy and funny. Haha... Maddy is a born charmer😳. The way he charmed Shivani's mother in just few lines was amazing and funny😆. Loved her mom. She was amazing😃. Though there are very less no. of females in angel, but all are lovely and unique in their own way😳

Shivani's bro is also equally carzy."Of all people why this lady don? Why would you want to commit this suicide? That of love and marriage business with her? Are you insane or an idiot?"🤣😆

Maddy did charm everyone a little too much. Now everyone wanna marry him😆😆.

Yup poor Sanskaar had to handle even more of this extended crazy family😆. I am sure that he loves his this work of handling a large crazy family😳. And I am waiting to read about Shivani's meeting with Maddy's family.

Nimmi totally loved and adored this chapter😃. It was amazing. An adorable end to this equally adorable love story. Loved it one, two, three, four, infinity and beyond😳. Just an epilogue left. And as much as I have observed in Angel, this epilogue too is gonna make me laugh and cry; and be extremely happy and sad at the same tym.

Thank you for this amzing update Nimmi🤗.

Take care😃
Lots and lots of love.🤗









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Posted: 9 years ago
Nimmi🤗

First of all, I am terribly gonna miss this amazing story😊. I am gonna miss your jet speed updates. I m gonna miss Angel, kitten, Maddy, Bozo, Shivani, Dida, Ady, Pari, baby Ragini, Durgaprasad, Apte, Rana and of course all villians too😆. I am gonna miss all the characters because you have written them superbly. You made us fall in love with many fictional characters, even made us hate some of them too. Just can't thank you enough for writting angel and its sequel 😃. Really loved both of them.

Nimmi all these lines that you have written are beautiful and amazing⭐️. Loved them all. Lines at the starting of chapter-9, chapter- 10 were my fav. And I loved that Swan somg😃

And my eyes immediately spotted the name of Swara and Sanskaar😆. Really missed both of them and now gonna miss them more😒.

OMG Angel and Kitten are now officially husband and wife😲😲, like really. I really don't know what to do, should I be angry on you for skipping their wedding scenes😡😆 or should happily sing and dance🥳 that they are married. I read the Bengali traditions after reading the previous epilouge. Saw a small video clip too of a bengali wedding ( crazy me😆).I was really imagining them performing each and every ritual. Sanskaar Rana and Swara Sanskaar Rana do form an adorable pair😃. But did they go for only Bengali wedding? What about Marwari, Punjabi, Las Vegas and Christian wedding?😆

I will never ever get tired of while reading their banter😳. They are just adorable. And their convo was so sweet.

Aww... Nimmi you did give us small scene from their wedding😃. Thank you for that. As expected Poor Sanskaar was so uncomfortable with that Bengali dress😆 and all marriage ceremonies . And how his mood immediately changed by seeing Swara😆. Nimmi, I have always loved Sanskaar's monolouges. So loved it here too😃. This is surely a bliss to read and imagine their wedding scene. I enjoyed their wedding scene😛😃. Wish it was more longer😒.

Wow Baba and Dada😳. I am glad that they are still in touch with them. And there bond has grown more stronger with time.

"Maddy and Apte; the in-house Tom and Jerry". Oh how much I loved their hilarious interactions( espacially that pipe one. 🤣)😆

Of course that farmhouse was so special😊. Sanskaar's confession❤️. Aww.. Durgaprasad gifted Swara that house. Such a lovely fatherly gesture by him. Sanskaar teasing Swara, and their banter❤️.

I still remember that Lamborghini and Max. Poor Bozo's first tym ride in that car😆, and how Swara convinced and tricked Sanskaar to take her with him😉. That moment where Swara first time calls Sanskaar as Angel ❤️will always be my favorite scene. Sanskaar does loves his car very much😆.

I knew Sanskaar and Shivani will get along well as friends. But wow... bro and sis😊. Maddy, Shivani and Angel, Kitten- I loved their interaction and bonding⭐️. And how lovely, Shivani gifted them that swan figurine😳.

Duel till death for riding a bike😆😆. I am like repeating this like n'th time, these two are crazy. Haha... Shivani painted Maddy's room in her fav colors😆 . Karma.. Maddy karma..he earlier teased Sanskaar about that pink color😈.

Aww... Dida and Maddy😳. My each fav character is there in this epilouge. Thanks for that😃.

"Sanskaaa!" - and how adorable and cut baby Ragini is❤️. Sanskaar and her bond is lovely. Poor Maddy, here too he is No. 2😆.

Oh wow Nimmi. New couple in the house. Bozo too got a girl😃. And she is just like him. Well not completely , she is a Gabriel fangirl.

One thing, I liked the mention of Gabriel in epilouge😊. The story did start with him. Gabriel was one awesome, charming assassin with ruthless attitude😈.

Gosh...That last scene between Angel and Kitten was just lovely and pure and amazing😳😃.

Such a lovely prologue Nimmi. Loved their family bonding. Angel- kitten and Maddy- Shivani moments were adorable. And Sanskaar- Swara's wedding was so lovely😳 . It was superb. I really don't know how to praise this prologue . Wanna just thank you for giving us this prologue and of course giving us Angel😃. Would always love and cherish this journey😊. Out of 76 and 11 chapters of Angel and its sequel; Each and every chapter of was wonderful and was written brilliantly⭐️. I am happy that this journey ended on a happy note. Though I am sad too bcoz it is ending😒.

Thank you for writting this sequel😃. Though It was short but it was equally lovely as angel. Both Sanskaar-Swara and Maddy-Shivani fot their own perfect story. Both of the stories are lovely in their own way. Shivani is a wonderful girl😃. A perfect match for our Maddy. You wrote her character really really well😊. I loved her family too😃. And Nimmi, you didn't ask us about our favorite moments in this sequel. I will tell you list of mine most fav scenes in Maddy-Shivani story😆.
* Chase scene😳😆
*Moments spend in Shivani's house.😳
*Their meeting in the church😃

Thank you once again😃 for writting this story. Lastly thank you for patiently reading my long rants which I post as comments😆.

Take care
Lots and lots of love🤗


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Posted: 9 years ago
Sorry nimmi for such a late reply...but was messed up with something..
A beautiful story with a marvellous ending..
Gonna miss it😭😭.. specially our RETIRED assasins...
U r awesome and some more...
👏👏👏

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Posted: 9 years ago
Waiting 4 u dear
Where r u?

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