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Posted: 9 years ago
OMG !!!! Who are you "Kalidasa" or "Shakespeare"
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You are one helll of a writer ...
Just loved it ...
All the chapters are Out-Standing ...
Finally Maddy and Shivani are together ...
Hound and Huntress finally got completed ...
Well who thought Swara is crazy , would have gotten that Shivani's family is "Numero Uno " in crazyness ...
Post the Epilogue Soon ...
Waiting !!!!
Thank You very much for the PM ... 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow Nimmie You made it! Speechless!Thats such a cutie story with atmost perfection.My mVerick set on fire. Advce from sanskar was similar the advice from maverick during Anjel part where in Our Anjel sanskar was behind light and dark world here on way before Cop and an Assassin. Much thrilled to read all the very 5chapter in ago. You made worth waiting it! oh god lob You lady.! Amazing Job
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome,fabulous,fantabulous,fantastic,lovely,beautiful,sweet update...,love maddy-shivani confession & this one is a crazy family too continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Mumma
I typed such a long comment and it vanished ...😭
No problem i will PM u

But yaar each and every chappie was awesome and spellbounding

Love u loads😳

Want an epilogue plzzz😊
Edited by prerulalli - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
And look whose PM I discovered at 12' o clock😃.
Welcome back Nimmi🤗.
I hope you enjoyed your trip😊.

As usual, you made a dhamakedar entry girl. So many chapters😳. Thank you so much for that😃. But wait till I go through them with my snail- like speed😆

You wrote "completed" in your PM. This story ended so soon😔. Will miss it dearly😊.
Nimmi, thank you for being an angel and giving us this wonderful sequel of Angel😃.
Enough of my rant😆. Me off to read 7th Chapter.

Lots and lots of love🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome stry nimmi... 😊
Maddy n Shivani, the hound n his huntress r together forever...
Shivanis realisation of love... Their moments together..
The way Sanskar said similar things to Maddy with was said to him earlier..
The cop n an assassin.. The impossible luv stry became possible...
The moments b/w shivanis family n Maddy were awesome..
Looking forward to see shivanis interaction with Sanskar Swara n others...
Waiting for the epilogue...
N the stry is ending😭
I love ur stories a lot..
Try to come up with some new stry... Or write some parts of Angel like Sanskar's n Swaras wedding along with Maddy n shivanis wedding...
I m just giving an idea... It's ur wish... But pls try to write it..
Thnx for the pm dear...
Will miss ur stories..
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Posted: 9 years ago
that was beautiful, but we need a long part of shivani being introduced to Maddy's family, including Dida's side and Bozo!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Aww i totally loved it . And i am so happy that epilogue is still left. I cant say goodbye to this story soon.
Nimmi dear. You know how much i love Mavrick and this story right.. I promise to give detailed comment for all chapter by chapter soon . As soon as i uploaded the next part of my SS. Then i am all here .. Till then you got to wait .So sorry about that... Just in case you didnt get it clear before. I love this Story just as much as Mav loves his huntress .


Love ya and you are the sweetest as always.


Crazy Maverick Fan 😆,

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Edited by NitaReid - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nimmi🤗

Chapter 7:

Nimmi loved the starting lines⭐️. Have you written it? They are lovely.

So next time our hound and huntress meet at a club. Destiny sure is very creative. It makes sure that these 2 should bump each other at a strange places😆.

Maddy for sure is insanely funny guy. Loved his monolouges😃. As always they were super funny. "Cheater cock!" - hahaha😆.

What is Shivani doing at such a place? Nevermind hope she doesn't gets in too much trouble. Our girl is a superwomen😊. Planning on to take over 3 bulky guys all alone.

Our huntress was extremely happy when she saw her hound😳. And even more happy when she heard Maddy calling her as "His Girl".

I love seeing this protective and possesive side of Maddy. Always ready to protect his girl.😃

Maddy is world famous now😳. Everyone knows him. The way that three bulky guys were frightened by him🤣😆. From babe to sister😆.

Aww.. It seems like both of them missed each other😳. And... they again fought. Everytime these 2 meet ; either they fight or they climb and jump from buildings like spiderman😆. They form an Unique pair😃.

Oh wow... Shivani also owns a mean bike.😃 These two fight like 5 years old kids. And Maddy surely loves to irk his girl😎. This guy is funny in whatever he does.

I would repeat again , that I love how these 2 can read each other⭐️. And how they are going through a same set of the confusing feelings .


" Alright peasent. Have fun mounting your pedestrian two whelled wagon. While the Knights shall mount his magnificent stallion of a beast bike and gallop away to glory"

^ Maddy just never looses his touch🤣. And I never ever want him to. He is perfect in the way he is. Thank you Nimmi for not changing our Maddy much in love. Though we got to see the more shades of his personality but he never changed his goofy attitude😃.

Haww... Shivani is planning to steal Maddy's bike😆😆😆.


" My bike and I are a package deal Huntress. You take her; you gotta take me too"⭐️

^ That was one awesome👏. Loved what Maddy answered Shivani and kept that one on one free offer. Comeon Shivani, you know that it isn't a bad offer.😉

Thank you for this update Nimmi. It was a lovely chapter⭐️. Loved how our hound and huntress are going through all the confusing feelings about love. Totally Loved their interaction. Though they fight more and talk less. But love their cute fights😳. Maddy was hilarious as usual😆. And Shivani was lovely, she is a brave girl😊. But she is reckless sometimes.

Thank you once again😃
Lots and lots of love🤗


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Posted: 9 years ago
Nimmo darlin ..You are back ..🤗🤗 I was waiting for you to be back to make an entry here😉
Ok Was this bumper bonanza offer for us ek pe ek free😆..Nevertheless Loved this offer😉 to bits😛

Each chapter was really beautifully done and you know your stories are like complete packages of a blockbuster film👏👏👍🏼 and loved those lines in the start of every chapter are you into poetry and all that stuff too ..whoa .those lines were like bang on sweety for each chapter

Gosh I was laughing my wits when that revelation of shivani bring a cop came out ..lol 😆😆 uff chemistry and romance😳 I loved all those kisses 😉..handcuffed one but yeah muddy one is my fav 😳😳

and good you tucked off that pose or jose fellow😆😆 and maddy got himself an another super cool family.you are gonna make maddy what in epilogue since now he is retired assasin ..he would do for being for hot shot model😉 for the charmer he is ..but I doubt his huntress will let that happen I am so waiting to know and I was waiting for part where shivani meets maddys family but You are gonna cover that in epilogue na ??

And so we are at the end😭😭 when you said short Its short like really 11 chapters?? I will miss this but I am missing angel more but hmm ok .I can always go back to angel when I want though I miss that excitement but you darlin awesome and superb like always and are we gonna get anything on sanskar chronicles ..I am already dreading the thought of not reading your works ...tell me u will write something though after a short break..pretty pls😊😊😊

Love
Lucky


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